muqaddar...sheba

by Sheba on June 02, 2010, 07:45:10 PM
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                      koi samandar khud ko dubataa to nahin,
                      koi paigaam khud ko khabar sunataa to nahin,

                      lahrein hamesha choomti hain saahil ko,
                      koi saahil magar bhanwar mein jataa to nahin,

                      hain rishte sabhi ek ittefaq duniya mein,
                      koi khoon ke rishte khud banaata to nahin,


                      rakhte hain khawahish chaman ki sabhi baagbaan,
                      koi raah mein apne khud kaante lagataa to nahin,

                      kar le roshan chaahe jitna aashiyane ko sheba,
                      koi turbat pe apni khud chiraag jalataa to nahin...!
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«Reply #1 on: June 02, 2010, 10:11:11 PM »
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Wah wah Sheba ji,great and mindblowing creation.bahut sachai se likhi aapne.keep up the good work.excellent Hats off to you! Both Thumbs Up Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #2 on: June 03, 2010, 03:36:45 AM »
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WAH KYA BAAT HAI      SHEBA JI.....

KOI KHUD KO KABHI DOOBANA NAHIN CHAHATA HAI
YEH MUQADDAR HAI JO BHANWAR MEIN FASATA HAI...
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«Reply #3 on: June 03, 2010, 03:41:33 AM »
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gud work sheeba ji....
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«Reply #4 on: June 03, 2010, 04:50:17 AM »
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  Nice one Sheba ji.  Thumbs UP
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«Reply #5 on: June 03, 2010, 05:41:55 AM »
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Bahot khoob sheba ji Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #6 on: June 03, 2010, 10:25:22 AM »
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Bahaut ache! Applause Applause
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«Reply #7 on: June 03, 2010, 01:00:07 PM »
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bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne Sheba ji...!!!
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«Reply #8 on: June 03, 2010, 11:29:07 PM »
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khoob bhut khoob daad qubool karein apne is kalaam par


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«Reply #9 on: June 04, 2010, 04:40:15 PM »
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bahot bahot khoob,ek behtreen ghazal ki paishkash hai aap ki jaanib se .daad qubool karein


                      koi samandar khud ko dubataa to nahin,
                      koi paigaam khud ko khabar sunataa to nahin,

                      lahrein hamesha saahil ko choomti hain,
                      koi saahil magar bhanwar mein jataa to nahin,

                      hain rishte sabhi ek ittefaq iss duniya mein,
                      koi khoon ke rishte khud banaata to nahin,

                      rakhte hain khawahish chaman ki sabhi baagbaan,
                      koi apni raah mein khud kaante lagataa to nahin,

                      nahin hai haqeer koi bhi jahaan mein sheba,
                      koi apni turbat par khud chiraag jalataa to nahin...!
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«Reply #10 on: June 05, 2010, 09:15:09 AM »
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Wah wah Sheba ji,great and mindblowing creation.bahut sachai se likhi aapne.keep up the good work.excellent Hats off to you! Both Thumbs Up Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

thank you madhuwesh ji
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«Reply #11 on: June 05, 2010, 09:15:52 AM »
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WAH KYA BAAT HAI      SHEBA JI.....

KOI KHUD KO KABHI DOOBANA NAHIN CHAHATA HAI
YEH MUQADDAR HAI JO BHANWAR MEIN FASATA HAI...

thank you cara ji
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«Reply #12 on: June 05, 2010, 09:16:22 AM »
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gud work sheeba ji....

thank you pandit ji
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«Reply #13 on: June 05, 2010, 09:16:54 AM »
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  Nice one Sheba ji.  Thumbs UP

thank you tamanna ji
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«Reply #14 on: June 05, 2010, 09:17:25 AM »
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Bahot khoob sheba ji Applause Applause Applause

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