MUSKURA DETE KABHI ................................. HASAN

by F.H.SIDDIQUI on August 06, 2012, 11:13:33 AM
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«Reply #15 on: August 07, 2012, 12:24:39 AM »
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shukriya ,saini saheb.3rd sher mein  (,) ke  baad 'aur' likhna rah gaya
thha .aap bhi nazarandaz kar gaye ya murawwat se kaam liya..
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«Reply #16 on: August 07, 2012, 06:37:57 AM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause  bahut bahut khoob, bahut sundar...!!!
hausla  afzai  ke liye  bahut mamnoon  hoon  Hriday  ji .
 Khush  rahiye.
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«Reply #17 on: August 07, 2012, 06:54:27 AM »
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Muskura   dete  , kabhi  haath   hila   dete  haiN ,
ChutkiyoN  meiN  woh  meri  baat  uda   dete  haiN


Husn  se  husn - e - sulook  unko  bura  lagta  hai ,
Be - wafa   hone   ka   ilzam   laga   dete   haiN


Itne   hassas   haiN   kuchh  kahte  hue  darta  hooN,
Dil  pe  rakh   lete   haiN , baat  badha  dete  haiN


Aazmaane   ki   zuroorat   hi   nahi   padti   hai ,
Apni   auqaat   to  khud   log   bata  dete   haiN


Kya   adawat , mere   khwaboN  ko  hai ,  jaane   mujh se ,
Mere   soye    hue    jazbaat   jaga    dete   haiN


Khud - bakhud   Quwwat - e - bardasht  bhi   aa jaati   hai ,
Haadse ,  haadsoN   meiN   jeena   sikha   dete    haiN


HaiN   RaqeeboN   meiN   mere   kaise   khuda - daad  Hunar ,
Geeli   lakdi   meiN   bhi   yeh   aag   laga   dete   haiN


Aise   ma'soom   GunahoN   ko   Khuda   bakhshe   gaa ,
Main   naheeN   peeta  'Hasan'  , log   pila   dete   haiN



Justttttt Beautiful!!!!!!

Bahut Bahut Aur Bahut Khoooob Saheb....

Kya Kehne.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #18 on: August 07, 2012, 09:30:09 AM »
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Sir, is ghazal ki tareef me alfaz nahi hai, is mayar ki ghazaleN bohut Hi kam padhne ko milti haiN ,abhi tak kashmakash meN HuN ki hasil E ghazal shair kis ko kahun, aap hain to yoindia par ghazal zinda hai...Khuda aap ko salamat rakhe..  Ameen.... dheerrrooon Daaad qubool kareN........................  Applause  Applause   Applause
Bahut  shukriya , Arish . Bahut  musarrat  hoti  hai  jub  aap jaise  naujawaan  ghazal  ke  shora  hausla  afzai  karein . Khushi  mahsoos  hoti  hai  yeh  soch  kar  ki  ghazal  ke qadrdaan  nai  nasl  mein  bhi  hain  jo  is  sinf  ko  mazeed khubsurti  dekar  agli  nasl  tak  pahunchane  ki  ahliyat  aur jazba  rakhte  hain .  Aapko  meri  bahut  bahut  duaaein . HASAN
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«Reply #19 on: August 07, 2012, 10:46:08 AM »
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beautiful.....beautiful Siddiqui ji
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«Reply #20 on: August 07, 2012, 12:47:27 PM »
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BAhut Badiya Hassan Sahab Kamaal Kamaal Kamaal Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #21 on: August 07, 2012, 02:14:11 PM »
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Waah waah Hasan Sahab... bahut khoo
kya kahne...

main naheen peeta 'Hasan', log pila dete hain

Dili mubaarkbaad kubool farmaayen.

Raqeeb Lucknowi
  
Satish  ji  ,  bahut   shukriya  ,  nawazish  , inayat ,  mehrbaani.
Aap  ke   comments  mein  Lucknow   ka   flavour   mil   jaata  hai .
Bahut  maza  aata  hai .  Tah e dil  se  adaab . Hasan
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«Reply #22 on: August 07, 2012, 04:42:05 PM »
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waah waah, bahut behatareen bahut khoob
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«Reply #23 on: August 07, 2012, 04:42:38 PM »
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sahill ji , hausla afzai ke liye bahut shukriya.duaein.
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«Reply #24 on: August 07, 2012, 04:50:34 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
bahut sundar
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«Reply #25 on: August 08, 2012, 05:44:18 AM »
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Ek bakamaal lajawaab qalaam par dheron daad o mubarakbaad Hassan sahab
Zarra  saheb  ,  Hausla  afzai  ke  liye  bahut  mamnoon  hoon .
khush  rahiye . HASAN
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«Reply #26 on: August 08, 2012, 11:42:50 PM »
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piyushhappy ji,bahut bahut shukriya.
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«Reply #27 on: August 09, 2012, 06:35:11 PM »
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Bahut Khoob Sir
is mukammal ghajal par meri mubaarakbaad aur dil DAAD kubool kare.
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hausla  afzai  ke  liye  bahut  shukriya  ,  mukesh  ji . khush  rahiye.
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«Reply #28 on: August 12, 2012, 10:22:57 PM »
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Siddiqui Sahaab Aadaab O As salaam walekum!

Janab kia kahne waaH waaH waaH badi hi khoobsurat kalaam
se bazm ko nawaza hai... behad asardar ashaar rahe janab...

Yaad aa raha hai is kalaam ka maqta aur sher aapne hume
phone par sunaayaa tha... waaH jee behad khoob bade hi
dilfareb khayaalaat hai janab... aur behad khoobsurat gazal

Is umdaa gazal par hamaari hazaaroN dili daad O mubbarakbad
kabul kijiye... Likhate rahiye...

Aate rahiye... Shaad O aabaad rahiye...
Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile                  

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«Reply #29 on: August 13, 2012, 09:58:29 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause

wonderful Applause Applause Applause Applause

excellant  Applause Applause Applause
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