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«Reply #15 on: September 25, 2009, 07:17:52 PM » |
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Bahut khoob Pooja ji! Khaas kar aapkey yah asha'ar bahut achchhey lagey!!
- abd bundeli
Apse comments mil gaye to aise lag raha hai ki likhna sarthak ho gaya!! bahoot bahoot shukaria Abd ji!!! |
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«Reply #16 on: September 25, 2009, 07:18:43 PM » |
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Muskura k kaha dil ne mere bahut achha likha hai aapne....daad kabul karein....  "HIMMATE MARDA MADDADE KHUDA" KAHAWAT KO aapne apne shabdo mai naya roop diya hai... Suna tha..."Kaun kehta hai aasma mai chhed nahi hota Ek pathar tou dil se uchhalo yaaron.." Aadmi soche tou kya nahi kar sakta....Himmat se kadam ek badho tou sahi.. thank you so so much smardia ji!!! kuch bhi likho apke comments ka hamesha intzaar rahta hai!! |
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«Reply #17 on: September 25, 2009, 07:19:09 PM » |
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«Reply #18 on: September 26, 2009, 02:15:38 PM » |
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Waah Waah Kya baat hai Pooja Di.. Bahoot bahoot Khoob Likha hai ..  INsaan Insaan ka saath kya dega Yahan tho Khoon k Riste badal jaate hai Jo Saath beit kar Haste Gaathe the Dost Uss Dosti k Roop bhi aksar Badal jaate hai Jo karte the Parwaah Hamari Har Kadam pe Wahi Aksar Beech mea Akela chod chale jaate hai Insaan ki baat kya karun ab tho main Yahan tho har mod pe Khwaab bhi badal jaate hai wah wah sophi ji  |
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«Reply #19 on: September 27, 2009, 09:19:00 AM » |
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Waah Waah Kya baat hai Pooja Di.. Bahoot bahoot Khoob Likha hai .. INsaan Insaan ka saath kya dega Yahan tho Khoon k Riste badal jaate hai Jo Saath beit kar Haste Gaathe the Dost Uss Dosti k Roop bhi aksar Badal jaate hai Jo karte the Parwaah Hamari Har Kadam pe Wahi Aksar Beech mea Akela chod chale jaate hai Insaan ki baat kya karun ab tho main Yahan tho har mod pe Khwaab bhi badal jaate hai |
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«Reply #20 on: September 27, 2009, 09:52:07 AM » |
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Apse comments mil gaye to aise lag raha hai ki likhna sarthak ho gaya!! bahoot bahoot shukaria Abd ji!!!
Thanks a lot for all your so kind words! You're welcome! - abd bundeli |
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«Reply #21 on: September 27, 2009, 10:00:06 AM » |
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wah wah sophi ji Thank You TGR ji |
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«Reply #22 on: September 27, 2009, 10:00:34 AM » |
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«Reply #23 on: September 27, 2009, 10:01:15 AM » |
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Very True Dear!! Issi liye kaha ki bas
khud per rakh vishwaas
na rakh is dunia se koi AASS
DUKH KE WAQAT RAHTA NAHI KOI APNA BHI PASS
Ajj ki dunia main dhoondein se bhi nahi milte kahi jazbaat
Thank you Di. Again true and very Nice lines Di |
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«Reply #24 on: September 27, 2009, 10:04:47 AM » |
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bahut accha likha h pooja ji aur sophi ji apne
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«Reply #25 on: September 27, 2009, 10:06:17 AM » |
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bahut accha likha h pooja ji aur sophi ji apne
Thank you Rishi !( Dont add ji  ) |
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«Reply #26 on: November 20, 2009, 07:33:42 PM » |
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bahut accha likha h pooja ji aur sophi ji apne
Thanks Rishi |
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Rajesh Harish
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«Reply #27 on: November 20, 2009, 07:35:54 PM » |
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Ajj bahoot dino baad apni aor sath likhe sathio ki rachna parri "http://www.yoindia.com/shayariadab/ghazals/adami-adami-ko-kaya-dega-t24772.0.html"
Man ne kuch likhwa diya.. waha likhna uchit na samjh kar... alag se thread open kar rahi hu.. shayad app sab ko pasand ayye
Waqat ke sath najaare badal jaate hai
girte ansoo ke sahare badal jaate hai
Pucha ajj dil ne phir se mujhse
badla hai rang pani ka, ya kinare badal jaate hai
hai chattan ajj bhi, lahre bhi bikhar bikhar jaati hai
dard thehar gaya hai kahin, ya sahne ke jazbaat badal jaate hai
Adami adami ko kaya dega, parr rahi hai ajj phir se Pooja
muskura ke kaha dil ne
hath bada kar, jo kuch karne ki rakhein himmat
uske liye Asmaan ke sitaare bhi badal jaate hai….
Adami Adami ko kaya dega, yah na soch kar kabhi chalna zindagi main
Jo dene ki rakhein khud ko khud se himmat, uske sath rahne wale insaan bhi sawar jaate hai….
Good One Pooja Ji |
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«Reply #28 on: November 20, 2009, 07:37:04 PM » |
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Waah Waah Kya baat hai Pooja Di.. Bahoot bahoot Khoob Likha hai .. INsaan Insaan ka saath kya dega Yahan tho Khoon k Riste badal jaate hai Jo Saath beit kar Haste Gaathe the Dost Uss Dosti k Roop bhi aksar Badal jaate hai Jo karte the Parwaah Hamari Har Kadam pe Wahi Aksar Beech mea Akela chod chale jaate hai Insaan ki baat kya karun ab tho main Yahan tho har mod pe Khwaab bhi badal jaate hai Nice one Divya |
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«Reply #29 on: November 21, 2009, 01:51:00 AM » |
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Waah Waah Kya baat hai Pooja Di.. Bahoot bahoot Khoob Likha hai .. INsaan Insaan ka saath kya dega Yahan tho Khoon k Riste badal jaate hai Jo Saath beit kar Haste Gaathe the Dost Uss Dosti k Roop bhi aksar Badal jaate hai Jo karte the Parwaah Hamari Har Kadam pe Wahi Aksar Beech mea Akela chod chale jaate hai Insaan ki baat kya karun ab tho main Yahan tho har mod pe Khwaab bhi badal jaate hai  |
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