Muskura ke kaha Dil ne...

by Pooja on August 20, 2009, 06:30:54 PM
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«Reply #15 on: September 25, 2009, 07:17:52 PM »
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Bahut khoob Pooja ji! Khaas kar aapkey yah asha'ar bahut achchhey lagey!!

                           - abd bundeli

Apse comments mil gaye to aise lag raha hai ki likhna sarthak ho gaya!! bahoot bahoot shukaria Abd ji!!!
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«Reply #16 on: September 25, 2009, 07:18:43 PM »
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Muskura k kaha dil ne mere bahut achha likha hai aapne....daad kabul karein.... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

"HIMMATE MARDA MADDADE KHUDA"
 KAHAWAT KO aapne apne shabdo mai naya roop diya hai...
 Suna tha..."Kaun kehta hai aasma mai chhed nahi hota
             Ek pathar tou dil se uchhalo yaaron.."
Aadmi soche tou kya nahi kar sakta....Himmat se kadam ek badho tou sahi..


thank you so so much smardia ji!!! kuch bhi likho apke comments ka hamesha intzaar rahta hai!!
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«Reply #17 on: September 25, 2009, 07:19:09 PM »
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Bahut Bahut Khoob Pooja..

Bhaut Gehri baatein Ki Hai Aapne Pooja..

Bahut Ache.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley


Thanks Kitu....
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«Reply #18 on: September 26, 2009, 02:15:38 PM »
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Waah Waah Kya baat hai Pooja Di.. Bahoot bahoot Khoob Likha hai .. Usual Smile

INsaan Insaan ka saath kya dega
Yahan tho Khoon k Riste badal jaate hai

Jo Saath beit kar Haste Gaathe the Dost
Uss Dosti k Roop bhi aksar Badal jaate hai

Jo karte the Parwaah Hamari Har Kadam pe
Wahi Aksar Beech mea Akela chod chale jaate hai

Insaan ki baat kya karun ab tho main
Yahan tho har mod pe Khwaab bhi badal jaate hai



wah wah sophi ji
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«Reply #19 on: September 27, 2009, 09:19:00 AM »
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Waah Waah Kya baat hai Pooja Di.. Bahoot bahoot Khoob Likha hai .. Usual Smile

INsaan Insaan ka saath kya dega
Yahan tho Khoon k Riste badal jaate hai

Jo Saath beit kar Haste Gaathe the Dost
Uss Dosti k Roop bhi aksar Badal jaate hai

Jo karte the Parwaah Hamari Har Kadam pe
Wahi Aksar Beech mea Akela chod chale jaate hai

Insaan ki baat kya karun ab tho main
Yahan tho har mod pe Khwaab bhi badal jaate hai



Bahut bahut Khoob Sophiji.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

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«Reply #20 on: September 27, 2009, 09:52:07 AM »
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Apse comments mil gaye to aise lag raha hai ki likhna sarthak ho gaya!! bahoot bahoot shukaria Abd ji!!!
Thanks a lot for all your so kind words! You're welcome!
             - abd bundeli
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«Reply #21 on: September 27, 2009, 10:00:06 AM »
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wah wah sophi ji
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Thank You TGR ji Usual Smile
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«Reply #22 on: September 27, 2009, 10:00:34 AM »
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Bahut bahut Khoob Sophiji.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley



Thank you Khwaish ji Usual Smile
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«Reply #23 on: September 27, 2009, 10:01:15 AM »
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Very True Dear!! Issi liye kaha ki bas
khud per rakh vishwaas
na rakh is dunia se koi AASS
DUKH KE WAQAT RAHTA NAHI KOI APNA BHI PASS
Ajj ki dunia main dhoondein se bhi nahi milte kahi jazbaat



Thank you Di.

Again true and very Nice lines Di
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Rishi Agarwal
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«Reply #24 on: September 27, 2009, 10:04:47 AM »
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bahut accha likha h pooja ji aur sophi ji apne
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«Reply #25 on: September 27, 2009, 10:06:17 AM »
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bahut accha likha h pooja ji aur sophi ji apne

Thank you Rishi !( Dont add ji Winking )
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«Reply #26 on: November 20, 2009, 07:33:42 PM »
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bahut accha likha h pooja ji aur sophi ji apne


Thanks Rishi
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Rajesh Harish
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«Reply #27 on: November 20, 2009, 07:35:54 PM »
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Ajj bahoot dino baad apni aor sath likhe sathio ki rachna parri "http://www.yoindia.com/shayariadab/ghazals/adami-adami-ko-kaya-dega-t24772.0.html"

Man ne kuch likhwa diya.. waha likhna uchit na samjh kar... alag se thread open kar rahi hu.. shayad app sab ko pasand ayye

Waqat ke sath najaare badal jaate hai
girte ansoo ke sahare badal jaate hai

Pucha ajj dil ne phir se mujhse
badla hai rang pani ka, ya kinare badal jaate hai

hai chattan ajj bhi, lahre bhi bikhar bikhar jaati hai
dard thehar gaya hai kahin, ya sahne ke jazbaat badal jaate hai

Adami adami ko kaya dega, parr rahi hai ajj phir se Pooja
muskura ke kaha dil ne
hath bada kar, jo kuch karne ki rakhein himmat
uske liye Asmaan ke sitaare bhi badal jaate hai….


Adami Adami ko kaya dega, yah na soch kar kabhi chalna zindagi main
Jo dene ki rakhein khud ko khud se himmat, uske sath rahne wale insaan bhi sawar jaate hai….


Good One Pooja Ji
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Rajesh Harish
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«Reply #28 on: November 20, 2009, 07:37:04 PM »
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Waah Waah Kya baat hai Pooja Di.. Bahoot bahoot Khoob Likha hai .. Usual Smile

INsaan Insaan ka saath kya dega
Yahan tho Khoon k Riste badal jaate hai

Jo Saath beit kar Haste Gaathe the Dost
Uss Dosti k Roop bhi aksar Badal jaate hai

Jo karte the Parwaah Hamari Har Kadam pe
Wahi Aksar Beech mea Akela chod chale jaate hai

Insaan ki baat kya karun ab tho main
Yahan tho har mod pe Khwaab bhi badal jaate hai



Nice one Divya
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«Reply #29 on: November 21, 2009, 01:51:00 AM »
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Waah Waah Kya baat hai Pooja Di.. Bahoot bahoot Khoob Likha hai .. Usual Smile

INsaan Insaan ka saath kya dega
Yahan tho Khoon k Riste badal jaate hai

Jo Saath beit kar Haste Gaathe the Dost
Uss Dosti k Roop bhi aksar Badal jaate hai

Jo karte the Parwaah Hamari Har Kadam pe
Wahi Aksar Beech mea Akela chod chale jaate hai

Insaan ki baat kya karun ab tho main
Yahan tho har mod pe Khwaab bhi badal jaate hai

Wah bahut sahi aur accha likha hai dear divya Thumbs UP
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