Muskuraatey huye deykhaa naheen meiney tumko!

by abdbundeli on January 02, 2009, 01:20:09 PM
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Muskuraatey huye deykhaa naheen meiney tumko!
Jhilmilaatey huye deykhaa naheen meiney tumko!

Gungunaatey huye deykhey hain roz parwaaney:
Gungunaatey huye deykhaa naheen meiney tumko!

Nigah zameen sey uthhtee huyee naheen  detkhee;
Sar uthhaatey huye deykhaa naheen meiney tumko!!

Asliyat kyaa hai tumhaaree, mujhey naheen maalum:
Ghar sey jaatey huye deykhaa naheen meiney tumko!

Jagmagaatey huye deykhey hain sitaarey laakhoun;
Jagmagaatey huye deykhaa naheen meiney tumko!

Na naqaab-o-hijaab aaye hain nazar mujhko;
Kuchh chhupaatey huye deykhaa naheen meiney tumko!

Ajeeb baat hai: pahloo mein ho, nazar mein naheen;
Aur, aatey huye deykhaa naheen meiney tumko!

Noor ho; yaa ki, roshanee key dhhaley ho; kyaa ho?
Kuchh bataatey huye deykhaa naheen meiney tumko!

Pee rahey ho azal sey har lamhey may-e-kousar:
Dagmagaatey huye deykhaa naheen meiney tumko!

Jaagtey-sotey sataataa hai ‘abd’ ko koyee?
Par, sataatey huye deykhaa naheen meiney tumko!!

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«Reply #1 on: January 02, 2009, 02:09:15 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause  Applause  Applause  Applause


Bahut Bahut Bahut Bahut... Bahut hi khoob..
Ek ek sher sawa laakh se jyaada keemti... Usual Smile

Sach mein Bahut hi khoobsurat, Bahut hi pyaari Ghazal hai Abd Ji...  notworthy
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«Reply #2 on: January 02, 2009, 02:41:46 PM »
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Bahut Bahut Khoob Abd  ji..  Applause Applause Applause
bahut hi Khoobsurat ghazal pesh ki hai aapne.
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«Reply #3 on: January 02, 2009, 06:58:23 PM »
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sab kuch dekha aur kuch dekha bhi nahi
sase hain dhadkane hain par "abd" tu jeeya nahi
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«Reply #4 on: January 02, 2009, 07:29:35 PM »
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wah kaya baat hai Abd ji kamal ki kavita likhi hai apne.... bahoot khoob... ek ek line kamal ki... magar yah do line dil chu gai

Ajeeb baat hai: pahloo mein ho, nazar mein naheen;
Aur, aatey huye deykhaa naheen meiney tumko!
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«Reply #5 on: January 03, 2009, 03:52:40 AM »
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Quote from: Mahiya on January 02, 2009, 02:09:15 PM
Applause Applause Applause  Applause  Applause  Applause


Bahut Bahut Bahut Bahut... Bahut hi khoob..
Ek ek sher sawa laakh se jyaada keemti... Usual Smile

Sach mein Bahut hi khoobsurat, Bahut hi pyaari Ghazal hai Abd Ji...  notworthy
Mahiya ji!
Tah-e-dil sey shukriyah adaa kartaa hoon! Bas, yoon samajhiye aapki duaa hai!
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«Reply #6 on: January 03, 2009, 03:57:41 AM »
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Quote from: khwaish on January 02, 2009, 02:41:46 PM
Bahut Bahut Khoob Abd  ji..  Applause Applause Applause
bahut hi Khoobsurat ghazal pesh ki hai aapne.
Bahut-bahut shukriyah, khwaish ji! Yah to aapki nazar-e-inaayat hai, aur baaqee jo kuchh hai wo to US kaa hai!
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«Reply #7 on: January 03, 2009, 04:01:27 AM »
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Quote from: sajid_ghayel on January 02, 2009, 06:58:23 PM
sab kuch dekha aur kuch dekha bhi nahi
sase hain dhadkane hain par "abd" tu jeeya nahi
Jeetey-jeetey jee liyaa
Jeewan, milaa na meet!
Sheyshh yahee hai: nitya-prati,
Gaauun UN key geet!!
                        - abd bundeli
   
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«Reply #8 on: January 03, 2009, 04:12:08 AM »
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Quote from: Pooja on January 02, 2009, 07:29:35 PM
Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

wah kaya baat hai Abd ji kamal ki kavita likhi hai apne.... bahoot khoob... ek ek line kamal ki... magar yah do line dil chu gai

Ajeeb baat hai: pahloo mein ho, nazar mein naheen;
Aur, aatey huye deykhaa naheen meiney tumko!
Shukriyah Pooja ji!
Din kee poojaa, raat kee
Poojaa key paryant;
Poojaa kartey yug gayaa,
Miley na meyrey kant!
                          - abd bundeli
                               
 
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