Muskuraaye, bahaaney banaaney lagey!

by abdbundeli on October 26, 2010, 07:53:57 AM
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Ham unhain jab bhi dil kee bataaney lagey!
Muskuraaye, bahaaney banaaney lagey!!

Gour sey ham ney deykhaa unhain deyr tak;
Fir hamaarey qadam dagmagaaney lagey!

Unkey lugat-e-zehan mein hai har soo ghadaa;
Aamadey mein tabhee to zamaaney lagey!

Khwaab hai, unkaa aagosh hai, kyaa kareyn?
Kaash, ham ko waheen hosh aaney lagey!

Ishq kee kaifiyat ab sunaayen kisey;
Un ko saarey nataaij fasaaney lagey?

Baam par unkee, nazareyn tikeen hain, 'abd',
Kaash, fir unsey wo jagmagaaney lagey!

                      - abd bundeli
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«Reply #1 on: October 26, 2010, 08:22:56 AM »
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buhat khoob abdbundeli jee!
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«Reply #2 on: October 26, 2010, 09:49:16 AM »
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bhut hi khubbbbbbbbb itni umda urdu aur farsi ka upyog maine aaj tak anhi dekhaaaaaaa

v nice
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«Reply #3 on: October 26, 2010, 09:58:00 AM »
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abd jii kya khaiye dher sari daad..yun to apko padhkar hamesha kuchh apni tarah ka reply dene ka man karta he..bahut khoob likha he aapne..dher saaari daaad~
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«Reply #4 on: October 26, 2010, 10:42:38 AM »
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buhat khoob abdbundeli jee!

Thanks a lot, vb ji!

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«Reply #5 on: October 26, 2010, 10:50:08 AM »
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bhut hi khubbbbbbbbb itni umda urdu aur farsi ka upyog maine aaj tak anhi dekhaaaaaaa

v nice


Thanks a lot, 'Rahi2001' ji! Farsi bhashha to main nahin jaantaa, albatta Arbi - Farsi key 'dhheir saarey' alfaaz jo Urdu adab mein 'prayog' hotey rahey hain, zaroor hi jaantaa huun! Aapko 'yah prayog' achchhey lagey, jaankar khushee huyee! Bahut-bahut shukriyah!

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«Reply #6 on: October 26, 2010, 10:54:35 AM »
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abd jii kya khaiye dher sari daad..yun to apko padhkar hamesha kuchh apni tarah ka reply dene ka man karta he..bahut khoob likha he aapne..dher saaari daaad~

Bahut-bahut shukriyah, Abhi ji! Ummeed kartaa huun, ki, aagey bhi aap meyraa kalaam padhhney ki takleef gawaarah kartey raheyngey! Shukriyah!

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«Reply #7 on: October 26, 2010, 11:05:36 AM »
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Bahut-bahut shukriyah, Abhi ji! Ummeed kartaa huun, ki, aagey bhi aap meyraa kalaam padhhney ki takleef gawaarah kartey raheyngey! Shukriyah!

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aji taqleef nahi shouk s padgege sahab....
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«Reply #8 on: October 26, 2010, 11:07:04 AM »
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Thanks a lot, 'Rahi2001' ji! Farsi bhashha to main nahin jaantaa, albatta Arbi - Farsi key 'dhheir saarey' alfaaz jo Urdu adab mein 'prayog' hotey rahey hain, zaroor hi jaantaa huun! Aapko 'yah prayog' achchhey lagey, jaankar khushee huyee! Bahut-bahut shukriyah!

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ji han aap ne sahi kaha dar.asl aap ne itni khubsurati ke sath use pesh kiya hai ki shayad hi aisa koi shaks ho jiske aks ko wo chu na paye

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«Reply #9 on: October 26, 2010, 11:58:06 AM »
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ji han aap ne sahi kaha dar.asl aap ne itni khubsurati ke sath use pesh kiya hai ki shayad hi aisa koi shaks ho jiske aks ko wo chu na paye


Bahut-bahut shukriyah ianab! Gar, kuchh aisaa hai, to, meyrey liye bhi yah aab-e-firdous sey kam naheen!

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«Reply #10 on: October 27, 2010, 05:59:22 AM »
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aji taqleef nahi shouk s padgege sahab....

Lots of thanks, Abhi ji! You're most welcome!

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