Muskuraaye ho jab bhi milee hai nazar!

by abdbundeli on February 08, 2009, 04:40:36 PM
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Hai jagah khoob dil mein tumhaarey liye!
Tum banaaou zaraa-sii hamaarey liye!!


Muskuraaye ho jab bhi milee hai nazar;
Maan lo, dil mein hai kuchh hamaarey liye!

Arsh mein abra hongey hameyshaa naheen;
Raat aayegee fir chaand taarey liye!

Deykh lo, ab hawaa aa rahee hai idhar:
Jism chhoo kar tumhaaraa, hamaarey liye!

Kyaa huaa hai? Kahaan hai tumhaaree nazar?
Hoon yahaan, aasmaan key sitaarey liye!

Baag hai yah wahee, aashiyaanah wahee;
Fir bahaar aa gayii hai nazaarey liye!

Pankh suljhaa rahaa hai chirhee key chirhaa;
Kis suhaaney lamhey key ishaarey liye?

Aa gayaa hoon, chalo, fir safar par chaleyn;
Ishq hai saath, saarey idaarey liye!

Shaam dhhaltey hi, ab shab nayee aayegee:
Zindagee mein naye khwaab pyaarey liye!

Sach yahee hai, ‘abd’, chaahtaa hoon tumhain;
Ham tumhaarey liye, tum hamaarey liye!!

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«Reply #1 on: February 09, 2009, 09:06:31 AM »
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Wahhhhhhhhhhhhh bhai wah kya baat hai aajkal to bilkul apne mizaz ke kalam de rahe hain hum sach me Bohat maza aaya padhke.... Clapping Smiley


Dad de kya tujhe ABD, GHAYEL ki aukaat kya
Tu likhta rahe main padhta rahu, kya yeh kafi nahi hamarey liye!

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«Reply #2 on: February 09, 2009, 09:11:21 AM »
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Bahoth qoob abd sahab hamesha ki tarha wazandar maza agaya apke is nadaaz me bhi !!

Qadeer Toopchi
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«Reply #3 on: February 09, 2009, 10:42:42 AM »
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Wahhhhhhhhhhhhh bhai wah kya baat hai aajkal to bilkul apne mizaz ke kalam de rahe hain hum sach me Bohat maza aaya padhke.... Clapping Smiley


Dad de kya tujhe ABD, GHAYEL ki aukaat kya
Tu likhta rahe main padhta rahu, kya yeh kafi nahi hamarey liye!

                             -SG-

Shukriyah Miyan Ghayel!

Un nigaahoun sey yuun na deykh mujhey:
Jaantaa huun mein kitnaa shokh hai tu!!

                    - abd bundeli


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«Reply #4 on: February 09, 2009, 10:45:06 AM »
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Bahoth qoob abd sahab hamesha ki tarha wazandar maza agaya apke is nadaaz me bhi !!

Qadeer Toopchi
Bahut-bahut shukriyah Qadeer Toopchi ji!

                    - abd bundeli
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«Reply #5 on: February 09, 2009, 10:46:22 AM »
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Bohat Hi Umda Likha Hai Aapne Abd Sahab...
Har Shabd Khumar Mein Dooba Hua Hai Jaise
Maza Aa Gaya Bohat Khoob...
Bahut-bahut shukriyah Shihab ji!

                    - abd bundeli
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«Reply #6 on: February 10, 2009, 06:11:15 AM »
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Aapka gazal lajawab.. Jaisa Gayal sb ne kaha..
meri na aukad hai ur na hi umer aapka likhayi pe kuch bol du...

Kyaa huaa hai kahaan hai tumhaaree nazar
hooon yahan aasmaan key sitaarey liye

Bahut khoob...Applause
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«Reply #7 on: February 10, 2009, 06:14:19 AM »
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bahoot khoob Abd ji
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abdbundeli
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«Reply #8 on: February 10, 2009, 06:41:07 AM »
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Aapka gazal lajawab.. Jaisa Gayal sb ne kaha..
meri na aukad hai ur na hi umer aapka likhayi pe kuch bol du...

Kyaa huaa hai kahaan hai tumhaaree nazar
hooon yahan aasmaan key sitaarey liye

Bahut khoob...Applause
Aap ki pasand ko daad deytaa hoon! Aap ney pooree gazal ko padhhaa bhi hai; aur dil sey samjhaa bhi hai, tabhi to sateek do laainey chunee hain! Dhanyawaad, Roja ji!
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«Reply #9 on: February 10, 2009, 06:42:09 AM »
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bahoot khoob Abd ji
Thanks a lot, Pooja ji!
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«Reply #10 on: February 12, 2009, 10:40:11 AM »
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Hai jagah khoob dil mein tumhaarey liye!
Tum banaaou zaraa-sii hamaarey liye!!


Muskuraaye ho jab bhi milee hai nazar;
Maan lo, dil mein hai kuchh hamaarey liye!

Arsh mein abra hongey hameyshaa naheen;
Raat aayegee fir chaand taarey liye!

Deykh lo, ab hawaa aa rahee hai idhar:
Jism chhoo kar tumhaaraa, hamaarey liye!

Kyaa huaa hai? Kahaan hai tumhaaree nazar?
Hoon yahaan, aasmaan key sitaarey liye!

Baag hai yah wahee, aashiyaanah wahee;
Fir bahaar aa gayii hai nazaarey liye!

Pankh suljhaa rahaa hai chirhee key chirhaa;
Kis suhaaney lamhey key ishaarey liye?

Aa gayaa hoon, chalo, fir safar par chaleyn;
Ishq hai saath, saarey idaarey liye!

Shaam dhhaltey hi, ab shab nayee aayegee:
Zindagee mein naye khwaab pyaarey liye!

Sach yahee hai, ‘abd’, chaahtaa hoon tumhain;
Ham tumhaarey liye, tum hamaarey liye!!

                             - abd bundeli



Kehna mushkil tha kaun sa sher behtar hai !! Bohot hi khoobsurat naghma...ek dilkash ehsaas...kisi meethi tarang ki tarah hai ye Ghazal...Bohot Khoob Abd Ji
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«Reply #11 on: February 12, 2009, 11:23:19 AM »
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Kehna mushkil tha kaun sa sher behtar hai !! Bohot hi khoobsurat naghma...ek dilkash ehsaas...kisi meethi tarang ki tarah hai ye Ghazal...Bohot Khoob Abd Ji
Thanks a lot for all your sweet and inspiring words, Celmira! I'm happy it pleased you!
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«Reply #12 on: February 13, 2010, 02:57:09 PM »
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kaun kahta hai lamha thahrta nahi /tum mile jab nazar me sharare liye / icon_geek
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«Reply #13 on: February 13, 2010, 03:56:51 PM »
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kaun kahta hai lamha thahrta nahi /tum mile jab nazar me sharare liye / icon_geek

Narm aagosh mein ruk na paauungaa mein;
Hai rukee hijra ki shab hamaarey liye!
Hai qasam ab tumhain: muskuraanaa nahin,
Chashm-e-tar mein bujhey chaand-taarey liye!!

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«Reply #14 on: February 14, 2010, 10:10:46 AM »
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Bahut Bahut Khooob!!!

Too Good Sir!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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