My last gazal "DARD"..........Premdeep

by premdeep on September 23, 2013, 02:23:53 PM
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Dear frnds,
           due to some personal reasons i am not able to continue my work here but i want to share my feelings that i have see a real fairy world on this site as all the people belongs to diffrent relegion and region share and respect each other feelings just like one family its a great example of our unity and diversity i m thankful to all the members who appreciate my work .good luck and bye to all pls read my last writing here.

Sard raaton mein nighahen kiska intezaar karti hain
Akhiri ye karwaan hai zindagi ret si ab phisalti hai

Meri maut meri tabahi dekhne tum aana zaroor
Phir dekhna ek ashique ki jaan kis tarah nikalti hai

Jiske daaman me simat kar payi thi jannat kabhi
Ab ye meri chand saanse bas uski raah takti hain

Apne hi dil ki kasak ko baant te sab hain yahan
Dusaron ke dard par kab aah kiski nikalti hai

Mere zameer mere dost aye tu bik gaya aakhir yahan
Dekh teri haar par sari ye dunya hansti hai

Jism ko milne na do par rooh pe kiska hai bas
Ishq mein to sarhadein har baar toota karti hain

Doston bas maaf karna saath yahin tak ka tha
zubaan se to alvida hai par siskiyan dil se nikalti hain
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«Reply #1 on: September 23, 2013, 02:33:21 PM »
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waah waah waah...bahut khoob... Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #2 on: September 23, 2013, 02:38:47 PM »
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agar koi unavoidable reason hai to kyaa kahoon lekin vaise hee jaane kee izaazat mujhse to kabhee neheen kabhee naheen apne faisle par dobaaraa socho itne bure log naheen hain yahaan par
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«Reply #3 on: September 23, 2013, 02:53:46 PM »
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Apne hi dil ki kasak ko baantate sab hain yahan
Dusaron ke dard par kab aah kiski nikalti hai

Mere jameer mere dost aye tu bik gaya aakhir yahan
Dekh teri haar par sari ye dunya hansti hai

Jism ko milne na do par rooh pe kiska hai bas
Ishq mein to sarhadein har baar toota karti hain

Just beautiful Premdeep jee.

par last ghazal..shayad kisi ne dil dukhaya hai aapka. Mai aapse maafi maangta hun..bazm ko chhore naheen..waqt mile to zaroor aayen. main jaanta hun..aur bhi priorities hongi aapki..
Kam se kam itna to kahen..ki waqt milne par zaroor aaunga. 
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«Reply #4 on: September 23, 2013, 03:24:44 PM »
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WAAH WAAH BOHUT KHOOB
ApplauseApplauseApplauseApplauseApplause
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«Reply #5 on: September 23, 2013, 04:18:21 PM »
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behtareennnn gazal premdeep ji ............ lekin jana zaruri na ho to ruk jao.......
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«Reply #6 on: September 23, 2013, 04:31:38 PM »
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Quote from: premdeep on September 23, 2013, 02:23:53 PM
Dear frnds,
           due to some personal reasons i am not able to continue my work here but i want to share my feelings that i have see a real fairy world on this site as all the people belongs to diffrent relegion and region share and respect each other feelings just like one family its a great example of our unity and diversity i m thankful to all the members who appreciate my work .good luck and bye to all pls read my last writing here.

Sard raaton mein nighahen kiska intezaar karti hain
Akhiri ye karwaan hai zindagi ret si ab phisalti hai

Meri maut meri tabahi dekhne tum aana zaroor
Phir dekhna ek ashique ki jaan kis tarah nikalti hai

Jiske daaman me simat kar payi thi jannat kabhi
Ab ye meri chand saanse bas uski raah takti hain

Apne hi dil ki kasak ko baant te sab hain yahan
Dusaron ke dard par kab aah kiski nikalti hai

Mere zameer mere dost aye tu bik gaya aakhir yahan
Dekh teri haar par sari  dunya hansti hai

Jism ko milne na do par rooh pe kiska hai bas
Ishq mein to sarhadein har baar toota karti hain

Doston bas mua'af karna saath yahin tak ka tha
zubaan se to alvida hai par siskiyan dil se nikalti hain


gr88888888888888888888888888888888888,sir
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«Reply #7 on: September 23, 2013, 07:24:28 PM »
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Waaaaaaaaaaah Premdeep ji... behtareen peshkash.. aapki aaj tak ki ghazalon mein yeh behtareen peshkash rahi.. sabhi ashaar khoooooooob hai... khaas yeh do achche lage... dil se daaaaaaad qubool kijiye..

Jism ko milne na do par rooh pe kiska hai bas
Ishq mein to sarhadein har baar toota karti hain

Doston bas maaf karna saath yahin tak ka tha
zubaan se to alvida hai par siskiyan dil se nikalti hain
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #8 on: September 23, 2013, 08:08:38 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
waah waah waah waah kyaa kehne Premdeep ji, bahut hi khoob likhaa hai aapne, magar jaan kar dukh huwaa ki aap apnaa Yo kaa safar yahaan khatam kar rahe hain, problems to har kisi ki rehti hain, magar ho sake to bich bich mein aate rahiye, aapkaa likhaa huwaa padhnaa achchaa lagtaa hai...!!!
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«Reply #9 on: September 24, 2013, 02:26:13 AM »
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premdeep ji
Ap nay bhut acha likha hai aur likhty hai aur rahi baat chodny ki to koi jarut nahi jab time mily ap ko to aty rahy aur apni klam say kuch hum pdhaty rahy humy sab ko acha lagy ga
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«Reply #10 on: September 25, 2013, 06:50:56 PM »
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great, yu jane ki jid na karo
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«Reply #11 on: September 26, 2013, 04:01:39 AM »
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Quote from: premdeep on September 23, 2013, 02:23:53 PM
Dear frnds,
           due to some personal reasons i am not able to continue my work here but i want to share my feelings that i have see a real fairy world on this site as all the people belongs to diffrent relegion and region share and respect each other feelings just like one family its a great example of our unity and diversity i m thankful to all the members who appreciate my work .good luck and bye to all pls read my last writing here.

Sard raaton mein nighahen kiska intezaar karti hain
Akhiri ye karwaan hai zindagi ret si ab phisalti hai
 sad5 sad5 sad5 tearyeyed tearyeyed tearyeyed Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Meri maut meri tabahi dekhne tum aana zaroor
Phir dekhna ek ashique ki jaan kis tarah nikalti hai
 sad5 sad5 sad5 tearyeyed tearyeyed tearyeyed Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Jiske daaman me simat kar payi thi jannat kabhi
Ab ye meri chand saanse bas uski raah takti hain
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Apne hi dil ki kasak ko baant te sab hain yahan
Dusaron ke dard par kab aah kiski nikalti hai
 tearyeyed tearyeyed tearyeyed tearyeyed
Mere zameer mere dost aye tu bik gaya aakhir yahan
Dekh teri haar par sari ye dunya hansti hai
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Jism ko milne na do par rooh pe kiska hai bas
Ishq mein to sarhadein har baar toota karti hain
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP
Doston bas maaf karna saath yahin tak ka tha
zubaan se to alvida hai par siskiyan dil se nikalti hain

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itna dukhi kyon ho............!
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«Reply #12 on: September 26, 2013, 04:07:46 AM »
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Bahut Khoob.,
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