Na karo deyr, abra aa gaye hain, aa jaaou!

by abdbundeli on August 05, 2010, 08:01:34 AM
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Chaandnee raat guzarney key liye baaqee hai!
Roshanee ab bhi sanwarney key liye baaqee hai!!

Na karo deyr, abra aa gaye hain, aa jaaou!
Nisf shab syaah laharney key liye baaqee hai!!

Khairmaqdam mein shajar sabz khadey hain mushtaaq;
Arsh sey khuld utarney key liye baaqee hai!

Noor aagosh mein daaley naqaab aayegaa:
Husn shaadaab ubharney key liye baaqee hai!

Neend ki baat mat karo, subah to honey do:
Shabnam-e-khulk wikharney key liye baaqee hai!

Kuchh lamhey saath 'abd' key bhi guzaarou ab to!
Raat kyaa ab bhi mukarney key liye baaqee hai?

                               - abd bundeli
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«Reply #1 on: August 05, 2010, 08:13:33 AM »
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wah ji wah bahut khoob..

rahe na rahe ye jawani mere hamnasheen
me fir bhi tera intezar karta jauga
jo maut bhi mili tujhs pehle mujhe
me wapas auga me is kadar tujhse mohabbat karke jauga~
 
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«Reply #2 on: August 06, 2010, 11:26:49 AM »
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Quote from: AbhiTamrakar on August 05, 2010, 08:13:33 AM
wah ji wah bahut khoob..

rahe na rahe ye jawani mere hamnasheen
me fir bhi tera intezar karta jauga
jo maut bhi mili tujhs pehle mujhe
me wapas auga me is kadar tujhse mohabbat karke jauga~
 

Thanks Tamrakar ji!

Honaa tum na udaas, sakhi,
Beeteygaa yeh dour!
Koyee kahtaa aayegaa,
"Milaa na tum-saa aour!!"

          - abd bundeli
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«Reply #3 on: August 07, 2010, 08:56:13 AM »
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Quote from: abdbundeli on August 06, 2010, 11:26:49 AM
Thanks Tamrakar ji!

Honaa tum na udaas, sakhi,
Beeteygaa yeh dour!
Koyee kahtaa aayegaa,
"Milaa na tum-saa aour!!"

          - abd bundeli

wah ji ..

hawa or waqt ko kaun rok paya he
me pani hu mujhe kaun samet paya he~
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«Reply #4 on: August 07, 2010, 03:13:23 PM »
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Quote from: AbhiTamrakar on August 07, 2010, 08:56:13 AM
wah ji ..

hawa or waqt ko kaun rok paya he
me pani hu mujhe kaun samet paya he~

Saheeh hai, Abhi ji!

Ye mulk-e-fanaa hai, nahin dawaam aik bhee!
Ruktaa nahin hai silsilah,jaaree hai rawaanee!
Har lamhah badaltaa hai anaasir key maqaamaat;
Wo ho hawaa, ki, sookhtaa bahtaa huaa paanee!!

                        - abd bundeli
 
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«Reply #5 on: August 07, 2010, 05:53:34 PM »
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nice poem Bundeliji...... Applause Applause Applause

Quote from: abdbundeli on August 05, 2010, 08:01:34 AM
Chaandnee raat guzarney key liye baaqee hai!
Roshanee ab bhi sanwarney key liye baaqee hai!!

Na karo deyr, abra aa gaye hain, aa jaaou!
Nisf shab syaah laharney key liye baaqee hai!!

Khairmaqdam mein shajar sabz khadey hain mushtaaq;
Arsh sey khuld utarney key liye baaqee hai!

Noor aagosh mein daaley naqaab aayegaa:
Husn shaadaab ubharney key liye baaqee hai!

Neend ki baat mat karo, subah to honey do:
Shabnam-e-khulk wikharney key liye baaqee hai!

Kuchh lamhey saath 'abd' key bhi guzaarou ab to!
Raat kyaa ab bhi mukarney key liye baaqee hai?

                               - abd bundeli
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«Reply #6 on: August 08, 2010, 04:06:34 AM »
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Quote from: KOYAL46 on August 07, 2010, 05:53:34 PM
nice poem Bundeliji...... Applause Applause Applause


Thanks 'KOYAL46' ji!

         - abd bundeli
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«Reply #7 on: August 09, 2010, 06:39:43 AM »
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Quote from: abdbundeli on August 07, 2010, 03:13:23 PM
Saheeh hai, Abhi ji!

Ye mulk-e-fanaa hai, nahin dawaam aik bhee!
Ruktaa nahin hai silsilah,jaaree hai rawaanee!
Har lamhah badaltaa hai anaasir key maqaamaat;
Wo ho hawaa, ki, sookhtaa bahtaa huaa paanee!!

                        - abd bundeli
 

sahi he sirji..

bahut thokre he raah me paththar nahi to kya,
yun to gair sambhal lete he hame apno ke dhakko se~
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«Reply #8 on: August 09, 2010, 02:25:35 PM »
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Quote from: AbhiTamrakar on August 09, 2010, 06:39:43 AM
sahi he sirji..

bahut thokre he raah me paththar nahi to kya,
yun to gair sambhal lete he hame apno ke dhakko se~

Abhi ji!

Kabhee dulaar, kabee chubhan,
Bantaa us kaa haath!
Jaisaa bhee ho, praapya hai
Fir bhee 'priya' kaa saath!!

             - Ramwatiya / abd bundeli
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«Reply #9 on: August 10, 2010, 05:57:48 AM »
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sahi bat he ....
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«Reply #10 on: August 10, 2010, 11:38:16 AM »
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Quote from: AbhiTamrakar on August 10, 2010, 05:57:48 AM
sahi bat he ....
Thanks Abhi ji!
      - abd bundeli
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«Reply #11 on: August 10, 2010, 11:43:20 AM »
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aji hamari khushnaseebi ki aap jaise shayar ko padh rahe he ..shukriya to hame ada karna chahiye~
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«Reply #12 on: August 10, 2010, 01:35:29 PM »
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Quote from: AbhiTamrakar on August 10, 2010, 11:43:20 AM
aji hamari khushnaseebi ki aap jaise shayar ko padh rahe he ..shukriya to hame ada karna chahiye~

You're welcome Abhi!

           - abd bundeli
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