Na main raja na koi rani thi....( Ghayel ):Ghazals

Sajid_Ghayel

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Jhoothi bachpan ki who kahani thi
Na main raja na koi rani thi

Zulm usne kiye they duniya par
Jiski duniya bohat deewani thi

Khoobsurat thi zindagi unki
Jinki seerat bohat noorani thi

Kho gayee woh bhi aaj jane kaha
Maa ki tasweer jo ghar purani thi

Khwab kaise woh apne keh deti
Woh jo ladki thi khandani thi

Kaun keemat chukaye shero ki
Koi sasti ghazal sunani thi

Khud ko shayer samajhna mehfil me
Teri Ghayel badi nadaani thi

Sajid Ghayel


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AbhiTamrakar

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Re: Na main raja na koi rani thi....( Ghayel )

«Reply #1 on: June 01, 2011, 07:13:54 AM »

**khwab kaise wo apne keh deti...... wah sajid bhaiii...
bahut khoob..
**kho gayi wo bhi aajj...badi sanjeeda line he ji..
**kaun keemat chukaye shero ki...ahaaa behetreen...

bahut khoob sajid bhaii... maja aa gaya aaaj..

sunana tha koi afsana koi rubaai keh gaya
labo ki shararat thi shayad koi dil ki sadayee keh gaya~


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Re: Na main raja na koi rani thi....( Ghayel )

«Reply #2 on: June 01, 2011, 07:30:26 AM »

Quote from: Sajid_Ghayel on June 01, 2011, 06:18:55 AM

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Re: Na main raja na koi rani thi....( Ghayel )

«Reply #3 on: June 01, 2011, 08:17:29 AM »

bahut bahut khub sajidji....

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SURESH SANGWAN

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Re: Na main raja na koi rani thi....( Ghayel )

«Reply #4 on: June 01, 2011, 08:36:23 AM »


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mamta bajpai

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Re: Na main raja na koi rani thi....( Ghayel )

«Reply #5 on: June 01, 2011, 10:19:24 AM »

Behad umdah or behad maaneekhez as'aar ....bahut khoob Saajid jee!


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Manish Kumar Khedawat

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Re: Na main raja na koi rani thi....( Ghayel )

«Reply #6 on: June 01, 2011, 06:03:05 PM »

lazawaab....
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ParwaaZ

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Re: Na main raja na koi rani thi....( Ghayel )

«Reply #7 on: June 01, 2011, 07:44:47 PM »

Ghayal Sahaab Aadaab!

Janab ke mijaaz e shareef kaise haiN?
Ummid hai khairiyat se hoNge

Janab aapke khayaaloN ki gehrai behad
khub hai.... Zindagi ke behad kareeb ki
soch ko ashaaroN meiN dhalte hai aap

Aapke is fan ko salaam
Sabhi ashaar khub rahe haiN

Quote from: Sajid_Ghayel on June 01, 2011, 06:18:55 AM

Jhoothi bachpan ki who kahani thi
Na main raja na koi rani thi

Bahut achche janab matla kafi achcha kaha hai .... bachpan ki un khati mithi yaadeN dila gaya..
Shukra hai khaniyaaN sunane wali naani thi

Zulm usne kiye they duniya par
Jiski duniya bohat deewani thi

Achcha khayaal hai daad ...
Par shayad aajkal ki duniyaa aisi nahi hai zulm karne wale ki deewaani ho jaye.. ?

Khoobsurat thi zindagi unki
Jinki seerat bohat noorani thi

Waah janab bahut khoob daad hazir hai...

Kho gayee woh bhi aaj jane kaha
Maa ki tasweer jo ghar purani thi

Masha Allah janab ... kitni aasaani se kah diyaa aapne roNgte khade kar dene waali baat ... Bahut khoob

Khwab kaise woh apne keh deti
Woh jo ladki thi khandani thi

Kia baat hai janab daad daad

Kaun keemat chukaye shero ki
Koi sasti ghazal sunani thi

Hmmm Janab yeH sasti gazaleN milti kahaaN hai hume bhi bataiye ... KayiN dino se humne bhi kuch sunaya nahi hai wohi suna deNge :D ( just kidding )

Behad gehra sher kaha hai janab daad daad daad

Khud ko shayer samajhna mehfil me
Teri Ghayel badi nadaani thi

Bahut achche janab

Sajid Ghayel

Likhate rahiye...
Bazm meiN aate rahiye...

Khush O aabaad rahiye..
Khuda Hafez


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waquif ansari

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Re: Na main raja na koi rani thi....( Ghayel )

«Reply #8 on: June 03, 2011, 08:30:01 AM »

Wah janab Sajid Ghayel Saheb!
Kya umda ghazal se bazm meiN raunaq-afroz hue haiN. Matla to bahut hi shaandaar hai aur is ghazal meiN sheriyat ka bolbaala hai. Kaafi achchhe ashaar haiN. Aik aadh micra bahr se baahar ho gaya hai jaise "maaN ki tasweer jo (ghar)purani thi" meiN "ghar" ki wajh se micra bahr se khaarij ho gaya hai, ise dekh leN. Isi tarah qawaafi par bhi nazrsaani farma leN jaise k "nadaani". Lafz "naadaani" hai, is tarah se ye qaafiya bahr meiN nahiN aa raha hai. Is haqeer bande k ishaaroN ko ho sake to qubul kareN warna naacheez ki gustaakhi ko moaaf kijiyega.

(waquif ansari)

Quote from: Sajid_Ghayel on June 01, 2011, 06:18:55 AM


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Re: Na main raja na koi rani thi....( Ghayel )

«Reply #9 on: June 03, 2011, 03:37:39 PM »

wah sirji…
mere lie to aapko padhna ek inaam hai
sukriya…
mai to daad dene ke kabil nai fir b…
bht bht lajawaab post


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