Na Mujhko Ab Tum Rok Paoge -Panna 3:Ghazals

Roja

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«Reply #30 on: July 15, 2009, 02:15:40 AM »

Quote from: Pooja on July 13, 2009, 07:25:11 PM

maine kabhi khud Gazal ke section mai likhne ki koshish nahi ki... magar ajj khud ko dard mai likhne se rokne ke liye... is section ka sahara le rahi hu...

yah ek aourat ke man ki bhawna hai... Jo bahoot kuch dekhne ke baad ab wapis purani zindagi ki taraf dekhna bhi nahi chahti... aor jab aourat koi baat man mai than leti hai to usko rokna mushkil he nahi asmbhav hota hai ( Mera yah man.na hai)

Asha hai jo bhi likha apko pasand ayega:

Hawa hu, hawa ko na rok paoge
Karoge jabardasti to iski andhi main bikhar jaoge
Na mujhko ab tum Rok paoge…

Thi andhkaar mai barso, mil chuki hu roshani se ab
Na kar koshish, iski chamak se he jal jaoge
Na mujhko ab tum Rok paoge…

Ansoo bahaye jayada ke Pooja pi gai ansoo
Na cher phir se zakham, iske dariya main beh jaoge
Na mujhko ab tum Rok paoge…

Banjar ho chuki kab ki armaano ki mehfil
Chue jo zajbaat, khud tadap ke rah jaoge
Na mujhko ab tum Rok paoge…

Na rok saki khudai bhi aourat ke man ko
Hawain ho tum, gardisho main kho jaoge
Na mujhko ab tum Rok paoge…

Behat khoobsurati se likha hai aapne di... Bahut pasand aaya.


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Roja

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Re: Na Mujhko Ab Tum Rok Paoge

«Reply #31 on: July 15, 2009, 02:16:35 AM »

Quote from: smardia on July 14, 2009, 01:06:29 PM

Poojaji aapki har rachna lajawab hoti hai...
FIR chahe wo dard ho ya ishq ya koi jajbaat...
Nari jaati k liye badi sashakt gajjal... Clapping Smiley

PAR NAR BHI KUCHH KAM NAHI....

Man se man ko chhu lunga
kya tum mujhko rok paoge

Bin bulaye sapno me aa jaunga
kya tum mujhko rok paoge

Sughand ban sason mai samaunga
kya tum mujhko rok paoge

Kavita k shabd jaal mai
Bahuposh sa tumhe jakad lu
kya tum mujhko rok paoge

Na mujhko ab tum na Rok paoge…

Smardia ji.. aapne bi bahut accha likha hai


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Roja

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Re: Na Mujhko Ab Tum Rok Paoge

«Reply #32 on: July 15, 2009, 02:17:25 AM »

Quote from: k.shael on July 14, 2009, 04:36:10 AM

Bahut Bahut Khoob Pooja Didi,!!
Aksar ek aurat bahut kuch sehti hai, par jab uss sehan shakti ki intaha hoti hai to waisa hi hota hai jaisa aapne likha hai..behtreen..!!!

Kab tak bandhi rehti mein tere gamo ke jaal se,
Aakhir ek din to chootna hi tha mujhe iss haal se..

Jis kadar royi hoo.n mein teri har yaad-baat se,
Kaash teri aankh bhi bhare kabhi mohabbat ki maar se,

Aaj tune nikala hai mujhe apne dilo-jahan se,
Bahut royega tu uss din jab chali jaoungi mein iss jahan se..

Shally.

Wah wah shally... bahut acche


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Deepati

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Re: Na Mujhko Ab Tum Rok Paoge

«Reply #33 on: July 15, 2009, 02:22:37 AM »

Quote from: Pooja on July 13, 2009, 07:25:11 PM

Wah Wah Pooja Ji Bahut achha likha hai aapne! Bahut Bahut Khoob! Applause


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Deepati

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Re: Na Mujhko Ab Tum Rok Paoge

«Reply #34 on: July 15, 2009, 02:23:47 AM »

Quote from: k.shael on July 14, 2009, 04:36:10 AM

Bahut khoob Shally Ji! Applause


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Deepati

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Re: Na Mujhko Ab Tum Rok Paoge

«Reply #35 on: July 15, 2009, 02:26:23 AM »

Quote from: smardia on July 14, 2009, 01:06:29 PM

Poojaji aapki har rachna lajawab hoti hai...
FIR chahe wo dard ho ya ishq ya koi jajbaat...
Nari jaati k liye badi sashakt gajjal... Clapping Smiley

Wah Wah Smardia Ji! Aapne bhi bahut achha likha hai! Applause


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smardia

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Re: Na Mujhko Ab Tum Rok Paoge

«Reply #36 on: July 15, 2009, 06:41:52 AM »

Poojaji aap tou Aashu kaviyatri hain…..
Shabdo aur bhavo ka aap bhandar hain…
Kitni sugamta se aapne 16 line likh dali..
Nari k gunon ki jordar vyakhya kar dali.. Clapping Smiley

Main kya pratikriya vyakt karu….
Sochte-sochte ye kuch lines likh gaya so pesh hain…

Jab prem-sudha k nirjhar behte
Dil ki chattano ko pighla dete
Lakh uglo lava- Samay pa wo thanda ho jata
Banjar dharti bhi jut-te jut-te hari-bhari ho jati

Bin armano k jeena kaisa
Koi n ho apna tou jeena kaise
Laqshay jab hote sache-kab neend k bharose rukte
Pate hain wahi manzil jo din ko sapne dekhte

Dil mai kab band sughand, Sanso se uska sambandh
Jab tak jeevan hai sanse kab ruk pati hain
Mana triya hath bahut bhari hai,Aurat jiddh ki pitari hai
Par jab nav-jeevan dene ki aati baari hai, Nari tab haari hai

Quote from: Pooja on July 14, 2009, 05:22:30 PM

apki is kavita ko parr kar dil se ek muskuraht ubhari.. wah wah wah itne simple shabdo main.. jaise ufante Tuffan ko bin kahe, bin chue, sirf Ehsaas-e-zajbaat se kuch palo ke liye rok diya ho... yakinan is se acha jawab shayad is kavita ka nahi ho sakta tha... Very Positive.....

Jo man mai ayega wo he likh jaugi...

Ban jaaye jab aourat chattan
Man chuna mushkil hota hai
Her zajbaat jab ugle agg
Armaan jagana na-mumkin hota hai

Armaan nahi to khayal kaise
Kisi ko apna banana mushkil hota hai
Nind aati hai aise mai kaha kis ko
Khawab ka anna na-mumkin hota hai

Dil ki jawala main bhasam her sugandh
Baharo ka na koi najrana hota hai
Aise main kaha kuch mehsoos ho
Mushkil iske dil ko samjhana hota hai

Na rukati hai phir apni se
Jab aourat khud pe aa jaaye
Na kisi ke bas main phir
Isko Rok paana hota hai…..


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SARVESH RASTOGI

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Re: Na Mujhko Ab Tum Rok Paoge

«Reply #37 on: July 15, 2009, 04:01:46 PM »

Wah wah Pooja Ji


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Pooja

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Re: Na Mujhko Ab Tum Rok Paoge

«Reply #38 on: July 19, 2009, 06:00:12 AM »

Quote from: Deepati on July 15, 2009, 02:22:37 AM

Wah Wah Pooja Ji Bahut achha likha hai aapne! Bahut Bahut Khoob! Applause

Thanks Deepati Ji


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Pooja

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Re: Na Mujhko Ab Tum Rok Paoge

«Reply #39 on: July 19, 2009, 06:02:17 AM »

Quote from: Roja on July 15, 2009, 02:15:40 AM

Behat khoobsurati se likha hai aapne di... Bahut pasand aaya.

Thanks Roja


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Pooja

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Re: Na Mujhko Ab Tum Rok Paoge

«Reply #40 on: July 19, 2009, 06:03:15 AM »

Quote from: jasbirsingh on July 15, 2009, 02:05:36 AM

WAH SARI DASTAAN BAYAAN KAR DI HAI AAP NEY
HAR TASVIR BAYAAN KAR DI HAI AAP NEY

bahut khoob pooja ji... wah

jasbir singh

Thanks Jas ji!!


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Pooja

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Re: Na Mujhko Ab Tum Rok Paoge

«Reply #41 on: July 19, 2009, 06:03:49 AM »

Quote from: SARVESH RASTOGI on July 15, 2009, 04:01:46 PM

Wah wah Pooja Ji

bahoot bahoot shukaria Sarvesh ji,,


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Pooja

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Re: Na Mujhko Ab Tum Rok Paoge

«Reply #42 on: July 19, 2009, 06:05:01 AM »

Quote from: smardia on July 15, 2009, 06:41:52 AM

Poojaji aap tou Aashu kaviyatri hain…..
Shabdo aur bhavo ka aap bhandar hain…
Kitni sugamta se aapne 16 line likh dali..
Nari k gunon ki jordar vyakhya kar dali.. Clapping Smiley

wah wah wah kaya baat hai smardia ji,. jalad he kuch likhugi...


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ANAAMIKA

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Re: Na Mujhko Ab Tum Rok Paoge

«Reply #43 on: July 20, 2009, 11:24:37 AM »

Poojaji bilkul sahi hai aapka soch...Main bhi yahi maanti hu k aurat agar thaan le tou kuchh bhi kar sakti hai....koi oose rok nahi sakta...

Naari ! shakti ka hai roop mahan
JEEVAN DENE KA HAI OOSKO VARDAAN
Hai wo komalta v mamta ki khaan
Per jab wo man mai le kuchh thaan
Nahi rok sakta oosko koi bhi tufaan

Quote from: Pooja on July 13, 2009, 07:25:11 PM


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ANAAMIKA

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Re: Na Mujhko Ab Tum Rok Paoge

«Reply #44 on: July 20, 2009, 11:30:49 AM »

Surendraji aapne bhi bahut achha lika hai.....
Aapke khayalo ko bhi koi rok nahi sakta....
Aap reality se dur sapno ki duniya mai hain..
Per kavita k bhav bahut sunder hain...

Quote from: smardia on July 14, 2009, 01:06:29 PM

Poojaji aapki har rachna lajawab hoti hai...
FIR chahe wo dard ho ya ishq ya koi jajbaat...
Nari jaati k liye badi sashakt gajjal... Clapping Smiley


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