Na Mujhko Ab Tum Rok Paoge -Panna 4:Ghazals

Pooja

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«Reply #45 on: July 22, 2009, 04:08:29 PM »

Quote from: ANAAMIKA on July 20, 2009, 11:24:37 AM

Poojaji bilkul sahi hai aapka soch...Main bhi yahi maanti hu k aurat agar thaan le tou kuchh bhi kar sakti hai....koi oose rok nahi sakta...

Naari ! shakti ka hai roop mahan
JEEVAN DENE KA HAI OOSKO VARDAAN
Hai wo komalta v mamta ki khaan
Per jab wo man mai le kuchh thaan
Nahi rok sakta oosko koi bhi tufaan

bahoot bahoot shukaria Annamika ji... apnebhi bahoot khoob likha hai!!


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smardia

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Re: Na Mujhko Ab Tum Rok Paoge

«Reply #46 on: July 27, 2009, 01:39:35 PM »

Aapki lines bahut sunder hai...nari k guno ka gyan... Clapping Smiley

Anaamikaji aapka dil se shukriya....aapne dhayan se meri lines ko padha aur pratikriya vyakt ki....achha laga....

Kyu aap ne socha ye haqikat(reality) se dur hai....

Manaa kalpana hai per real one hai....kisi ka soch hai..
any way Dhanayvaad....

Quote from: ANAAMIKA on July 20, 2009, 11:30:49 AM

Surendraji aapne bhi bahut achha lika hai.....
Aapke khayalo ko bhi koi rok nahi sakta....
Aap reality se dur sapno ki duniya mai hain..
Per kavita k bhav bahut sunder hain...


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Pooja

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Re: Na Mujhko Ab Tum Rok Paoge

«Reply #47 on: August 06, 2009, 04:57:08 PM »

Quote from: smardia on July 15, 2009, 06:41:52 AM

Poojaji aap tou Aashu kaviyatri hain…..
Shabdo aur bhavo ka aap bhandar hain…
Kitni sugamta se aapne 16 line likh dali..
Nari k gunon ki jordar vyakhya kar dali.. Clapping Smiley

Main kya pratikriya vyakt karu….
Sochte-sochte ye kuch lines likh gaya so pesh hain…

Jab prem-sudha k nirjhar behte
Dil ki chattano ko pighla dete
Lakh uglo lava- Samay pa wo thanda ho jata
Banjar dharti bhi jut-te jut-te hari-bhari ho jati

Bin armano k jeena kaisa
Koi n ho apna tou jeena kaise
Laqshay jab hote sache-kab neend k bharose rukte
Pate hain wahi manzil jo din ko sapne dekhte

Dil mai kab band sughand, Sanso se uska sambandh
Jab tak jeevan hai sanse kab ruk pati hain
Mana triya hath bahut bhari hai,Aurat jiddh ki pitari hai
Par jab nav-jeevan dene ki aati baari hai, Nari tab haari hai

BAhot khoob smardia ji!! kaam ki wajah se ajj kal kuch likh nahi rahi hu... jalad he apko iska jawab likhne ki koshish hogi!!!


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salil2002

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Re: Na Mujhko Ab Tum Rok Paoge

«Reply #48 on: August 07, 2009, 05:29:07 AM »

Quote from: Pooja on July 13, 2009, 07:25:11 PM

maine kabhi khud Gazal ke section mai likhne ki koshish nahi ki... magar ajj khud ko dard mai likhne se rokne ke liye... is section ka sahara le rahi hu...

yah ek aourat ke man ki bhawna hai... Jo bahoot kuch dekhne ke baad ab wapis purani zindagi ki taraf dekhna bhi nahi chahti... aor jab aourat koi baat man mai than leti hai to usko rokna mushkil he nahi asmbhav hota hai ( Mera yah man.na hai)

Asha hai jo bhi likha apko pasand ayega:

Hawa hu, hawa ko na rok paoge
Karoge jabardasti to iski andhi main bikhar jaoge
Na mujhko ab tum Rok paoge…

Thi andhkaar mai barso, mil chuki hu roshani se ab
Na kar koshish, iski chamak se he jal jaoge
Na mujhko ab tum Rok paoge…

Ansoo bahaye jayada ke Pooja pi gai ansoo
Na cher phir se zakham, iske dariya main beh jaoge
Na mujhko ab tum Rok paoge…

Banjar ho chuki kab ki armaano ki mehfil
Chue jo zajbaat, khud tadap ke rah jaoge
Na mujhko ab tum Rok paoge…

Na rok saki khudai bhi aourat ke man ko
Hawain ho tum, gardisho main kho jaoge
Na mujhko ab tum Rok paoge…

bahut achche di....aapne dard ko chhupaane kii jo koshish kii zid ko aage laakar,,,,mujhe lagta hai oos par dard haawi pad gaya..is main dard hi dard bikhra hua hai aur ek zid bhi jo aisa lagta hai kii koi insaan khud se lad raha ho....bahut achche di ek bar phir dil se daad kabool kare.aap k liye kucch likhne kii koshish kii hai

hai dard jo dil main
ap usko chhupa k rakhna hai

hai naya savera yeh
ab saat iske jagna hai

beeti jo baatein kal kii
na saath unke chakna hai

na dard kii karni hai baat ab
na tera khayal hi karna hai

ab main jiyungi zindgi apni tarah
bas khushiyon ko hi rakhna hai


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Pooja

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Re: Na Mujhko Ab Tum Rok Paoge

«Reply #49 on: August 11, 2009, 03:50:28 PM »

Quote from: -Saahil- on August 07, 2009, 05:29:07 AM

Full of Motivation.. ek ek shabd apne app main majbooti deta hua... bahoot he achi lines likhi hai Bro...


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sarfaraz_sagar

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Re: Na Mujhko Ab Tum Rok Paoge

«Reply #50 on: August 13, 2009, 01:36:18 AM »

Pooja ji,waqaee aapne bahut khoobsurat likha hai.likhte rahiyega.


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Pooja

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Re: Na Mujhko Ab Tum Rok Paoge

«Reply #51 on: August 13, 2009, 05:14:31 PM »

Quote from: sarfaraz_sagar on August 13, 2009, 01:36:18 AM

Pooja ji,waqaee aapne bahut khoobsurat likha hai.likhte rahiyega.

Bahoot bahoot shukaria Sarfaraz sagar ji!!


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Pooja

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Re: Na Mujhko Ab Tum Rok Paoge

«Reply #52 on: August 13, 2009, 05:23:56 PM »

Quote from: smardia on July 15, 2009, 06:41:52 AM

Poojaji aap tou Aashu kaviyatri hain…..
Shabdo aur bhavo ka aap bhandar hain…
Kitni sugamta se aapne 16 line likh dali..
Nari k gunon ki jordar vyakhya kar dali.. Clapping Smiley

smardia ji dil se koshish ki hai ki kuch jawab likh saku... Meri adat main waise is tarah sirf jawab likhna nahi hai... kuch baatein man mai atti hai aor main likh jaaya karati hu.. un bhawnao ke sath... ek baar un main se bahar aa jaau... to likhna mushkil ho jaata hai... magar apka yah jawab bahoot dino se udhar tha.. so koshish ki hai...

Prem sudha ka nirjal prem,
sukhe jharno se behta nahi
Dil ki chattano per, ek waqat per,
dil ka bhi jorr chalta nahi!!

Na ho jab koi jeevan main
Armaan kabhi jagta nahi
Bikhare patton ki takdeer koi samjhe kaise
Unke sung sung kabhi koi chalta nahi

Thahra Amrit bhi ban jaata hai kitcharr
Ajj ke yug main, koi kamal khilta nahi
Nav-jeevan deti hai aoro ko naari
Per is se uska khud ka jeevan badalta nahi….


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jasbirsingh

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Re: Na Mujhko Ab Tum Rok Paoge

«Reply #53 on: August 16, 2009, 07:53:37 PM »

WAH WAH BAHUT HI KHOOB, SAHIL JI & POOJA JI

JASBIR SINGH


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Pooja

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Re: Na Mujhko Ab Tum Rok Paoge

«Reply #54 on: August 18, 2009, 02:07:07 AM »

shukaria Jas ji


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Pooja

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Re: Na Mujhko Ab Tum Rok Paoge

«Reply #55 on: August 18, 2009, 04:56:48 PM »

Quote from: @kaash on August 18, 2009, 01:29:41 PM

behatreen likha hai Pooja ji
bahot khoob,bahot umda ghazal
bahot ache se aapne naari ke jazbaat ko
likha hai

kuch likhne ki koshish rahegi hamari bhi

bahoot bahoot shukaria Kaash ji!!!

Hawa ki andhi main apne bhi urr jaate hai
Gusse ki agani mai, apne bhi bhasam ho jaate hai

Tandav hota hai jab nari ke man mai jazbaato ka
dekh us jawala ko, apne bhi dehal jaate hai

Rokna nahi sambhav, per kisi ko to kuch karna hoga
aise main sirf apne, bahoot apne he samne atte hai

Gusse ki agni main... apne bhi , bhasam ho jaate hai...


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madhuwesh

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Re: Na Mujhko Ab Tum Rok Paoge

«Reply #56 on: August 19, 2009, 06:53:23 AM »

Beautiful gazals Pooja ji.mindblowig creation. icon_thumleft


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Pooja

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Re: Na Mujhko Ab Tum Rok Paoge

«Reply #57 on: August 19, 2009, 05:38:38 PM »

Thanks Madhu ji!!


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jasbirsingh

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Re: Na Mujhko Ab Tum Rok Paoge

«Reply #58 on: August 30, 2009, 09:37:56 AM »

Quote from: Pooja on August 18, 2009, 04:56:48 PM

bahut khoob kaha aap ney pooja ji and sach bhi yehi hai...
aise meh sirf apney, bahut apney hi saamney aatey hai

jasbir singh


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fairykhan

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Re: Na Mujhko Ab Tum Rok Paoge

«Reply #59 on: August 31, 2009, 07:10:33 AM »

poja ji bht zabardast hai ye....
keep it uppppp..


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