Na Mujhko Ab Tum Rok Paoge

by Pooja on July 13, 2009, 07:25:11 PM
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«Reply #60 on: September 01, 2009, 06:17:07 PM »
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Quote from: jasbirsingh on August 30, 2009, 09:37:56 AM
bahut khoob kaha aap ney pooja ji and sach bhi yehi hai...
aise meh sirf apney, bahut apney hi saamney aatey hai

jasbir singh

bahoot bahoot shukaria Jas ji
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«Reply #61 on: September 01, 2009, 06:17:25 PM »
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Quote from: fairykhan on August 31, 2009, 07:10:33 AM
poja ji bht zabardast hai ye....
keep it uppppp..

Thanks Fairy ji!!
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«Reply #62 on: September 01, 2009, 07:12:44 PM »
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waaah kya baat hai pooja ji....to gud ji...
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«Reply #63 on: September 03, 2009, 06:23:31 PM »
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xshma keejeeye mujhe Poojajee   Crying...aapne itna shandaar jawab likha aur hum use padh he nahi paaye...njaane kaise miss ho gaya... tearyeyed
Bahut he lajawaab hai aapka jawaab... bade nape-tule shabdo mai aapne apne jajbatou ko pesh kiya hai...Sach hai ye sikke ka dusra pehlu bhi....daad kabul kijeeye.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Waise jawaab likhne ka maza bhi alag he hai....kuchh soch kar likhunga


Quote from: Pooja on August 13, 2009, 05:23:56 PM
smardia ji dil se koshish ki hai ki kuch jawab likh saku... Meri adat main waise is tarah sirf jawab likhna nahi hai... kuch baatein man mai atti hai aor main likh jaaya karati hu.. un bhawnao ke sath... ek baar un main se bahar aa jaau... to likhna mushkil ho jaata hai... magar apka yah jawab bahoot dino se udhar tha.. so koshish ki hai...

Prem sudha ka nirjal prem,
 sukhe jharno se behta nahi
Dil ki chattano per, ek waqat per,
 dil ka bhi jorr chalta nahi!!

Na ho jab koi jeevan main
Armaan kabhi jagta nahi
Bikhare patton ki takdeer koi samjhe kaise
Unke sung sung kabhi koi chalta nahi

Thahra Amrit bhi ban jaata hai kitcharr
Ajj ke yug main, koi kamal khilta nahi
Nav-jeevan deti hai aoro ko naari
Per is se uska khud ka jeevan badalta nahi….
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«Reply #64 on: September 04, 2009, 05:27:22 PM »
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Quote from: brokenbyluv on September 01, 2009, 07:12:44 PM
waaah kya baat hai pooja ji....to gud ji...

shukarioa BBL JI!!
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«Reply #65 on: September 04, 2009, 05:28:14 PM »
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Quote from: smardia on September 03, 2009, 06:23:31 PM
xshma keejeeye mujhe Poojajee   Crying...aapne itna shandaar jawab likha aur hum use padh he nahi paaye...njaane kaise miss ho gaya... tearyeyed
Bahut he lajawaab hai aapka jawaab... bade nape-tule shabdo mai aapne apne jajbatou ko pesh kiya hai...Sach hai ye sikke ka dusra pehlu bhi....daad kabul kijeeye.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Waise jawaab likhne ka maza bhi alag he hai....kuchh soch kar likhunga



BAHOOT BAHOOT SHUKARIA SMARDIA JI!!! Apki kavita ka intzaar rahega!!!
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«Reply #66 on: September 17, 2009, 06:44:47 AM »
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Poojajee bahut dino se likhna chahta tha, aapki lines ka counter uttar...
Par jab-jab prayaas kiya tou man k viroodh nahi likh paya...isi udhedbun mai uljha raha...aur thread khayaal se dur ho gaya....aaj reminder dekh socha kyun n apni purani kavita he prastut kar du jo aapke bhaavo ka samarthan karti hai...

Isi lay aur bhaav se judi ek rachna..........

Meri badi didi ne ek-baar mujhe salah di thee..unki lines
"Sneh v samta se jeeta jata man....
 Hriday marusthal ko bana do chaman.."

Utter mai maine ye kuchh line unhe likh bheji thee...

Mantra tumhara siddh hoga didi
Par mujhse sadha nahi

Hriday marusthal seench-seench thaka
Ful koi khila nahi
Banzer ho gayee hriday bhoomi
Spandan koi bacha nahi
Sukhi sab nadiyen hriday desh ki
Avrodh huye uttpan itne
Bypass karvana pada
Bhagirath ban nayee Ganga bahaane ko

Pyaar k bindu ko
Sindhu banana aasaan nahi
Ye do-chaar dino ka prayaas nahi
Anter ka kalush varsho purana
Usey khod hatana khel nahi
Hil jaayengi neev jeevan ki
Usey main kaise meetaun
Matbhed,man-ka-bhed,mati-bhed
Ye gati-rodh jeevan path k
Kaise main meet banau unko
Jo har-pal mere sang chalte
Man se par koson dur rehte

Mantra tumhara siddh hoga didi
Par mujhse sadha nahi

"Apno ko dil ki baat batao"
Sahi hoga soch tumhara didi
Par jo n samjh sake peer parai
Unhen kaise hriday k ghaav dikhaun
Makkhol udaana jinhe suhaata
Un saathiyon se kaise
Main marham ki aas lagaun

Fal khane k din aaye ab
Kaise main naye beej oogaun ?
Shuru kiya hota jaap kuchh varsho pehle
Tou shayad mantra sadh jaata
Man ko ab kaise vishwaas dilaun
Kaise ab shuruaat karu main ?

Mantra tumhara siddh hoga didi
Par mujhse sadha nahi

Dosh nahi deta kisi ko
Mera apna dil beemaar
Main he karan,main he jimmevaar
Seench n paya apni jeevan bagiya
Kya main maali tha bekaar ? !!!
Huh???
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«Reply #67 on: September 17, 2009, 11:41:11 AM »
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Bohot Khoob Surendra Ji  Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #68 on: September 18, 2009, 03:52:55 AM »
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Quote from: smardia on September 17, 2009, 06:44:47 AM
Poojajee bahut dino se likhna chahta tha, aapki lines ka counter uttar...
Par jab-jab prayaas kiya tou man k viroodh nahi likh paya...isi udhedbun mai uljha raha...aur thread khayaal se dur ho gaya....aaj reminder dekh socha kyun n apni purani kavita he prastut kar du jo aapke bhaavo ka samarthan karti hai...

Isi lay aur bhaav se judi ek rachna..........

Meri badi didi ne ek-baar mujhe salah di thee..unki lines
"Sneh v samta se jeeta jata man....
 Hriday marusthal ko bana do chaman.."

Utter mai maine ye kuchh line unhe likh bheji thee...

Mantra tumhara siddh hoga didi
Par mujhse sadha nahi

Hriday marusthal seench-seench thaka
Ful koi khila nahi
Banzer ho gayee hriday bhoomi
Spandan koi bacha nahi
Sukhi sab nadiyen hriday desh ki
Avrodh huye uttpan itne
Bypass karvana pada
Bhagirath ban nayee Ganga bahaane ko

Pyaar k bindu ko
Sindhu banana aasaan nahi
Ye do-chaar dino ka prayaas nahi
Anter ka kalush varsho purana
Usey khod hatana khel nahi
Hil jaayengi neev jeevan ki
Usey main kaise meetaun
Matbhed,man-ka-bhed,mati-bhed
Ye gati-rodh jeevan path k
Kaise main meet banau unko
Jo har-pal mere sang chalte
Man se par koson dur rehte

Mantra tumhara siddh hoga didi
Par mujhse sadha nahi

"Apno ko dil ki baat batao"
Sahi hoga soch tumhara didi
Par jo n samjh sake peer parai
Unhen kaise hriday k ghaav dikhaun
Makkhol udaana jinhe suhaata
Un saathiyon se kaise
Main marham ki aas lagaun

Fal khane k din aaye ab
Kaise main naye beej oogaun ?
Shuru kiya hota jaap kuchh varsho pehle
Tou shayad mantra sadh jaata
Man ko ab kaise vishwaas dilaun
Kaise ab shuruaat karu main ?

Mantra tumhara siddh hoga didi
Par mujhse sadha nahi

Dosh nahi deta kisi ko
Mera apna dil beemaar
Main he karan,main he jimmevaar
Seench n paya apni jeevan bagiya
Kya main maali tha bekaar ? !!!
Huh???


 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Apki kavita ne to ansoo se Rula diya smardia ji!! ek ek shabd dil ko chirta hua.. her sawal ke samne sir jhuka ro diya.....
behad bhauk, bebasi ko darshati hu.... such kahu shabd nahi hai.. kuch palo ko bas jaise sans aor zindagi sab ruk gaya is kavita ko padte padte....

Jalad kuch likhne ki koshish hogi...

magar abhi ke liye jo man mai ayya hai likhne ja rahi hu

Kaha bado ne jahan jaago wahi sawera
phir kahein ko sinche ansoo se apna besera

Maali ne kab kanto ko dekh maani haar
sinchta raha bas dil se, chahe jeevan ho kitna bhi ghanera

heriday ke ghav ko bana apni majbooti
insaani iraade agge kon hai thehra (Ruka)

apne dukh bhulane ko, nikalo dunia main
ghar ghar main thehra hai Dukh bethera (Bahoot)
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«Reply #69 on: September 18, 2009, 11:57:55 AM »
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Bohot Khoob Pooja
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«Reply #70 on: September 20, 2009, 08:19:19 AM »
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Thank you Poojaji....AAp k prohtsaan se he hum likh paate hain....dhanyawaad


Quote from: Pooja on July 22, 2009, 04:08:29 PM
bahoot bahoot shukaria Annamika ji... apnebhi bahoot khoob likha hai!!
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«Reply #71 on: September 20, 2009, 08:25:57 AM »
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Smardiaji aap tou hamesha he hame apni pratikriyaon dwara v positive reaction by your creation of poetry UTSAAHIT KARTE REHTE HAIN.....aapka tahe dil se aabhaar....Isi tarah saath dete rahiye...


Quote from: smardia on July 27, 2009, 01:39:35 PM
Aapki lines bahut sunder hai...nari k guno ka gyan... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Anaamikaji aapka dil se shukriya....aapne dhayan se meri lines ko padha aur pratikriya vyakt ki....achha laga....

Kyu aap ne socha ye haqikat(reality) se dur hai....

Manaa kalpana hai per real one  hai....kisi ka soch hai..
any way Dhanayvaad....
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«Reply #72 on: September 25, 2009, 07:11:08 PM »
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Quote from: Celmira on September 18, 2009, 11:57:55 AM
Bohot Khoob Pooja

shukaria Celmira!!
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«Reply #73 on: October 10, 2009, 08:10:39 PM »
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Bahut bahut shukriya aapka Celmiraji...

Quote from: Celmira on September 17, 2009, 11:41:11 AM
Bohot Khoob Surendra Ji  Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #74 on: October 14, 2009, 06:32:24 PM »
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Poojaji aur Surendraji aap sab ne bahut dil ko chhune wali lines likhi hain....
Baar Baar padhne ko jee karta hai....keep it up...
Tariff karne se...Na Mujhko Ab Tum Rok Paoge

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