Naa Jaa Mujhe Chodke...VS

by Versatile Shayar on January 20, 2010, 11:38:23 AM
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Hi Friends Me Apni Iss Ghazal Me Uss Ladki Feelings Ko Pesh Kiya Hun Jo Pyar Karti Hai Ek Ladke Se Aur Woh Ladka Army Me Kaam Karta Hai Aur Who Ladki Kis Kadar Apne Pyar Ko Yaad Karti Hai Aur Uske Andar Ke Jazbaat Me Apni Iss Ghazal me Pesh Karne Ki Koshis Kiya Hun Umeed Hai Aap Sabko Meri Yeh Ghazal Zarur Pasand Aayegi

Naa Jaa Mujhe Chodke Teri Bin Me Kaise Jeeyungi
Kabhi Tadap Uthungi Toh Kabi Teri Yaad Me Hasungi

Kabhi Yaad Karungi Tere Sath Bitaya Hua Pal
Toh Kabi Tujhe Aapni Yado Me Sama Lungi

Kabhi  Pyaas Ko Apni Ansuao Se Bujha Lungi
Toh Kabi Tere  Intezaar Me Apni Bhukh Mita Lungi

Teri Tasveer Se Bate Karte Karte Thak Jaungi
Magar Apni Iss Harkat Se Kabhi Baaz Naa Aaungi

Tujpe Desh Ko Bachane Ki Zimmedari Hai
Magar Teri Hifazat Ke Liye Khud Ki Jaan Dav Pe Lagaungi

Me Dur Hun Bhale Tujse Aae Mere Cahane Wale
Kabhi Sarhadh Par Teri Yado Me Aake Do Aansu Tere Aankhon Me Bhi Laungi

Dushmano Se Tu Bachke Rehna Tu Hamesha Qatra Tera Khoon Ka Bhi Gira
Toh  Me Apni Khoon Ki Nadiya Yahan Bahaungi

Tu Lad Bas Iss Desh Ki Qhateer Yeh Desh Ki Hifazat Tera Dharm Hai
Kar Ke Bhagwaan Ki Prartna Uss Bhagwaan Se Teri Raksha Mang Lungi

Bas Tere Aane Ka intezaar Hai Mere Sajan Tu Aaja Salamath
Tere Aane Ki Khushi Me Asmaan Me Diwali Ki Tarah Sajaungi

Lipat Kar Rowungi Tujse Me Jab Tu Aayega  Yahan
Bhale Milo Dur Me Apni Yeh Betabi Tuje Kaise Dikhaungi

Ladte Ladte Agar Tu Shaheed Hogaya Toh
Me Bhi Apni Yeh Saanse Rokh Lungi

Naa Jaa Mujhe Chodke Teri Bin Me Kaise Jeeyungi
Kabhi Tadap Uthungi Toh Kabi Teri Yaad Me Hasungi
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«Reply #1 on: January 20, 2010, 11:45:39 AM »
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i m speechless for ghazal.  icon_salut

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«Reply #2 on: January 20, 2010, 11:49:09 AM »
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Quote from: thinkhattk on January 20, 2010, 11:45:39 AM
i m speechless for ghazal.  icon_salut

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Thanx Thinhattk Ji
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«Reply #3 on: January 20, 2010, 11:58:03 AM »
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Bahoot Bahoot Khoob VSji
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #4 on: January 20, 2010, 12:01:27 PM »
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Quote from: pankshivam on January 20, 2010, 11:58:03 AM
Bahoot Bahoot Khoob VSji
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause



Pankshivam Ji
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«Reply #5 on: January 20, 2010, 01:42:06 PM »
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Bahut Hi Sundar Alfaj Likhe Hai VS Ji
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«Reply #6 on: January 20, 2010, 03:17:38 PM »
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waah,bhut hi acchi gazal likhi hai aapne....uss ladki ki bhawnao ko bakubi pesh kiya hai..... Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #7 on: January 21, 2010, 05:43:24 AM »
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Wah VS ji bahut khoob,very touching gazal.great work.keep it up. icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #8 on: January 21, 2010, 10:13:32 AM »
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Quote from: madhuwesh on January 21, 2010, 05:43:24 AM
Wah VS ji bahut khoob,very touching gazal.great work.keep it up. icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
Quote from: Nikhaar on January 20, 2010, 03:17:38 PM
waah,bhut hi acchi gazal likhi hai aapne....uss ladki ki bhawnao ko bakubi pesh kiya hai..... Applause Applause Applause
Quote from: Rishi Agarwal on January 20, 2010, 01:42:06 PM
Bahut Hi Sundar Alfaj Likhe Hai VS Ji



Rishji Ji,Nikhaar Ji,Madhu Ji
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«Reply #9 on: January 22, 2010, 10:26:32 AM »
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Me Dur Hun Bhale Tujse Aae Mere Cahane Wale
Kabhi Sarhadh Par Teri Yado Me Aake Do Aansu Tere Aankhon Me Bhi Laungi

Very Heart Touching
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