Naa jaane Kis Raah Par Woh Fankaar Gaya "Khwaish"

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kuch Yuh woh Ashko Ko Aankhon Se Apni Bahaa Gaya
Jaise Ek Karz Tha Unn Aankhon par Jisse Woh Utaar Gaya

Kuch Na Kehkar Bhi uski Nazrein Keh Gaysi Sab
Apni Khushi Se Jaise Koi Zindagi Ki Baazi Haar Gaya...

Kadam Uthe Bhi The Aur Phir Piche Mud Bhi Gaye!!
Pyaasa Samundar Mein rehkar Bhi Bekarar Gaya...

Dil To Ek hi tha Par Saath mein Hazaar Aazmayishe Thi Gham Ki,
Inn sab Ke Ba-wajood Woh Zindagi Apni Sawaar Gaya...

Hausle Buland The Isliye Har Haal mein Muskurata Raha
Kabhi Khud Par Bhi Gire Hue Patharo Ko Bhi Woh Nikhaar Gaya...

"Khwaish" Kehta Hai Kuch Bhi Halaaat Mein Apni pehchaan Ko Naa Khona!!!
Samundar Ke Gehrai mein jaise Ek Dariya Giraftaar Gaya..

Jo Apne Har Gham Par Bhi Muskurata Hai!!!!!
Naa Jaane Kis Raah Par Woh Fankaar Gaya...

                  ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~
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«Reply #1 on: May 15, 2010, 12:15:44 PM »
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Wakei, Lavz kam parrte hai tariff ke liye...Yunhi likte rahiye...Bahaut bahaut achi peshkash hai Khwahish Dost!! Bahaut hi achi.. Applause Applause
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«Reply #2 on: May 15, 2010, 02:12:32 PM »
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Waah..!! Waah...!! notworthy notworthy

Bahut khub Khwaish ji.......

ek behtareen ghazal pesh ki aapne... bahut achha likhta hai aap....
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«Reply #3 on: May 15, 2010, 02:44:43 PM »
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KHWAHISHJI AAP KE IS BEHTAREEN QALLAM KE LIYE DIL SE DAAD DETI HOON .

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«Reply #4 on: May 15, 2010, 07:02:21 PM »
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waah khwaish ji hamesha ki taraf iss bar bhi jadui alfaz likhe hai apne..sidha dil mein ghar kar gye..bahut khoob....
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«Reply #5 on: May 16, 2010, 12:34:44 PM »
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Khwaish Bhaiiiiiii... Aapki Soch Humesha Avval Darze Ki Hoti hai jo Aapke Likhe Alfaazon Me Nazar aati hai.. Humesha ki Tarah Ek Sandesh liye hue aapki Yeh Gazal Dil Ko Chhoo Gai Bhai...  icon_thumleft icon_thumleft

Bahut hi Pyaari aur Umda Peshkash hai aapki.. Daad Kubool Karen Dil se..  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley



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«Reply #6 on: May 17, 2010, 07:15:06 PM »
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bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne Khwaish ji...!!!
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«Reply #7 on: May 17, 2010, 07:23:37 PM »
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Wah Khwaish ji ,aankh bhar aayi aapke gazal padke,bahut hi dard aur khoobsurti se likha aapne.mindblowing creation. Hats off to you! icon_salut icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #8 on: May 18, 2010, 08:17:20 AM »
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Quote from: Shihab on May 15, 2010, 11:42:32 AM
Wah Wah Khwaish Bhai Kya Kehne
Tareef Karna Suraj Ko Diya Dikhane Ke Barabar Hai
Bahut Hi Behtareen Peshkash Hai Humesha Ki Tarah

Bahut Hi Achchey Ashaar Rahe Aagza Se Anjaam Tak
Bahut Hi Umda Bhai....

Yun Hi Apne Pyaar Bhare Andaaz Se
Mehfil Ko Roshan Karte Rahiye....

Duao,n Ke Saath Ijazat

Khush Rahiye...


~Shihab~

Majid Bhai Aapka Yahan Aana, Iss Ghazal Ko Padhna Aur sarahana,Yehi Bahut Hai Mere Liye..Bas Yuhi Hausla-Afzaai Karte Rahiyega..

Aapka Teh Dil Se Shukriya Mere Bhai.. icon_flower
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«Reply #9 on: May 18, 2010, 09:15:04 AM »
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wah khawish sahab ,, app ke to kya kahene hamesha hi khuch naya padne ko naseeb hota hai , bahoth qoob dad hazir hai qubool karen ,, khush rahe hamesha ..


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«Reply #10 on: May 18, 2010, 03:11:30 PM »
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Wakei, Lavz kam parrte hai tariff ke liye...Yunhi likte rahiye...Bahaut bahaut achi peshkash hai Khwahish Dost!! Bahaut hi achi.. Applause Applause

Bhai rahim,Aapka Teh Dil Se Shukriya Jo Aapne iss Ghazal Ko Padha Aur saraha..Bas Yuhi Saath Dete Rahiyega.. Usual Smile
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«Reply #11 on: May 18, 2010, 09:32:03 PM »
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kya baat hai khwaish sahab bhut hi umda likhte rahiye


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«Reply #12 on: May 19, 2010, 07:59:03 AM »
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Quote from: Mohammad Touhid on May 15, 2010, 02:12:32 PM
Waah..!! Waah...!! notworthy notworthy

Bahut khub Khwaish ji.......

ek behtareen ghazal pesh ki aapne... bahut achha likhta hai aap....

Apna Waqt Dene Ke Liye Teh Dil Se Shukriya Touhid Ji.. Usual Smile
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«Reply #13 on: May 19, 2010, 07:59:57 AM »
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bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne Khwaish ji...!!!

Bahut Bahut Shukriya Klaskarji Usual Smile
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«Reply #14 on: May 19, 2010, 08:01:29 AM »
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Quote from: mamta bajpai on May 15, 2010, 02:44:43 PM
KHWAHISHJI AAP KE IS BEHTAREEN QALLAM KE LIYE DIL SE DAAD DETI HOON .

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Aapka Bahut Bahut Shukriya Mamta Ji Jo Aapne Is Ghazal Ko Apna Waqt Diya..Umeed Karta Hoon Aap Aage Bhi Yuhi Hausla-Afzaai Karte Rahenge.. Usual Smile
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