Naa jaane Kis Raah Par Woh Fankaar Gaya "Khwaish"

by khwaish on May 15, 2010, 11:35:55 AM
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«Reply #15 on: May 19, 2010, 12:26:30 PM »
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Khwaish ji bahot achhi poem likhi hai aapne.Bahot khoob.
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«Reply #16 on: May 20, 2010, 10:20:12 AM »
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waah khwaish ji hamesha ki taraf iss bar bhi jadui alfaz likhe hai apne..sidha dil mein ghar kar gye..bahut khoob....

Bahut Bahut Shukriya Geetji..Aapne Pasand Farmaya,yeh Jaankar Bahut Khuhi Hui..Aapke Comments Ka Humesha Se Intezaar Rehta Hai.. Usual Smile
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«Reply #17 on: May 20, 2010, 11:29:13 AM »
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shukriya khwaish ji ki apko merra comment karne acha lagta hai,aap hamesha lafzo mein ek msg ek acha sandesh likhte hai aur wahi sandesh apki khasiyat bhi hai aur apki kabliyat bhi...keep writing apki behetareen rachnao ka mujhe hamesha intezaar rehta hai....
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«Reply #18 on: May 20, 2010, 02:42:58 PM »
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Quote from: Mann on May 16, 2010, 12:34:44 PM
Khwaish Bhaiiiiiii... Aapki Soch Humesha Avval Darze Ki Hoti hai jo Aapke Likhe Alfaazon Me Nazar aati hai.. Humesha ki Tarah Ek Sandesh liye hue aapki Yeh Gazal Dil Ko Chhoo Gai Bhai...  icon_thumleft icon_thumleft

Bahut hi Pyaari aur Umda Peshkash hai aapki.. Daad Kubool Karen Dil se..  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley



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«Reply #19 on: May 20, 2010, 03:51:13 PM »
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Quote from: klaskar on May 17, 2010, 07:15:06 PM
bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne Khwaish ji...!!!

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«Reply #20 on: May 20, 2010, 03:59:27 PM »
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khwaishji bahut khoosurati se apne zazbaat likhte hain aap .aapki taareef mein alfazon ki kya majaal jo kuch bol paayen. icon_flower icon_flower Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Quote from: khwaish on May 15, 2010, 11:35:55 AM
kuch Yuh woh Ashko Ko Aankhon Se Apni Bahaa Gaya
Jaise Ek Karz Tha Unn Aankhon par Jisse Woh Utaar Gaya

Kuch Na Kehkar Bhi uski Nazrein Keh Gaysi Sab
Apni Khushi Se Jaise Koi Zindagi Ki Baazi Haar Gaya...

Kadam Uthe Bhi The Aur Phir Piche Mud Bhi Gaye!!
Pyaasa Samundar Mein rehkar Bhi Bekarar Gaya...

Dil To Ek hi tha Par Saath mein Hazaar Aazmayishe Thi Gham Ki,
Inn sab Ke Ba-wajood Woh Zindagi Apni Sawaar Gaya...

Hausle Buland The Isliye Har Haal mein Muskurata Raha
Kabhi Khud Par Bhi Gire Hue Patharo Ko Bhi Woh Nikhaar Gaya...

"Khwaish" Kehta Hai Kuch Bhi Halaaat Mein Apni pehchaan Ko Naa Khona!!!
Samundar Ke Gehrai mein jaise Ek Dariya Giraftaar Gaya..

Jo Apne Har Gham Par Bhi Muskurata Hai!!!!!
Naa Jaane Kis Raah Par Woh Fankaar Gaya...

                  ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~
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«Reply #21 on: May 25, 2010, 01:59:40 PM »
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Quote from: madhuwesh on May 17, 2010, 07:23:37 PM
Wah Khwaish ji ,aankh bhar aayi aapke gazal padke,bahut hi dard aur khoobsurti se likha aapne.mindblowing creation. Hats off to you! icon_salut icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Thankyou Sooooooooooooooooooooo Much Dear!!!

Thanks For Reading ANd Appreciating Madhu.. icon_flower
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«Reply #22 on: May 27, 2010, 02:35:36 PM »
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Quote from: qadeer_junaid on May 18, 2010, 09:15:04 AM
wah khawish sahab ,, app ke to kya kahene hamesha hi khuch naya padne ko naseeb hota hai , bahoth qoob dad hazir hai qubool karen ,, khush rahe hamesha ..


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«Reply #23 on: May 31, 2010, 06:38:05 AM »
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Quote from: aaina on May 18, 2010, 09:32:03 PM
kya baat hai khwaish sahab bhut hi umda likhte rahiye


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«Reply #24 on: May 31, 2010, 08:15:57 AM »
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Quote from: riyaz106 on May 19, 2010, 12:26:30 PM
Khwaish ji bahot achhi poem likhi hai aapne.Bahot khoob.

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«Reply #25 on: June 09, 2010, 10:32:30 AM »
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Quote from: brokenbyluv on May 20, 2010, 11:29:13 AM
shukriya khwaish ji ki apko merra comment karne acha lagta hai,aap hamesha lafzo mein ek msg ek acha sandesh likhte hai aur wahi sandesh apki khasiyat bhi hai aur apki kabliyat bhi...keep writing apki behetareen rachnao ka mujhe hamesha intezaar rehta hai....

Izzat Afzaai Ke Liye Teh Dil se Shukriya Geetji.. notworthy notworthy

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«Reply #26 on: June 10, 2010, 10:12:18 AM »
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Very nice poetry Janaab khwaish Ji! Isi tarah apna jauhar dikhaate rahiye aur hamesha khush rahiye.

Quote from: khwaish on May 15, 2010, 11:35:55 AM
kuch Yuh woh Ashko Ko Aankhon Se Apni Bahaa Gaya
Jaise Ek Karz Tha Unn Aankhon par Jisse Woh Utaar Gaya

Kuch Na Kehkar Bhi uski Nazrein Keh Gaysi Sab
Apni Khushi Se Jaise Koi Zindagi Ki Baazi Haar Gaya...

Kadam Uthe Bhi The Aur Phir Piche Mud Bhi Gaye!!
Pyaasa Samundar Mein rehkar Bhi Bekarar Gaya...

Dil To Ek hi tha Par Saath mein Hazaar Aazmayishe Thi Gham Ki,
Inn sab Ke Ba-wajood Woh Zindagi Apni Sawaar Gaya...

Hausle Buland The Isliye Har Haal mein Muskurata Raha
Kabhi Khud Par Bhi Gire Hue Patharo Ko Bhi Woh Nikhaar Gaya...

"Khwaish" Kehta Hai Kuch Bhi Halaaat Mein Apni pehchaan Ko Naa Khona!!!
Samundar Ke Gehrai mein jaise Ek Dariya Giraftaar Gaya..

Jo Apne Har Gham Par Bhi Muskurata Hai!!!!!
Naa Jaane Kis Raah Par Woh Fankaar Gaya...

                  ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~
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Quote from: waquif ansari on June 10, 2010, 10:12:18 AM
Very nice poetry Janaab khwaish Ji! Isi tarah apna jauhar dikhaate rahiye aur hamesha khush rahiye.


Waquif Bhai, Aap ka Teh Dil Se shukriya Jo Aapne Apna keemti waqt Humein Diya..Bas Yuhi hausla-Afzaai Karte rahiyega.. Usual Smile
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«Reply #28 on: June 11, 2010, 08:06:28 AM »
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Quote from: SURESH SANGWAN on May 20, 2010, 03:59:27 PM
khwaishji bahut khoosurati se apne zazbaat likhte hain aap .aapki taareef mein alfazon ki kya majaal jo kuch bol paayen. icon_flower icon_flower Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley



Tareef suuna kisse pasand naa hoga..Aur Agar tareef ke bol aap jaise doston se mile to humein aur kya chahaiye Sureshji..

Suresh ji..aapka Bahut Bahut Aur Bahut Shukriya..Bas yuhi saath dete rahiyega icon_flower
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Quote from: brokenbyluv on May 20, 2010, 11:29:13 AM
shukriya khwaish ji ki apko merra comment karne acha lagta hai,aap hamesha lafzo mein ek msg ek acha sandesh likhte hai aur wahi sandesh apki khasiyat bhi hai aur apki kabliyat bhi...keep writing apki behetareen rachnao ka mujhe hamesha intezaar rehta hai....

Thankyou Sooooooooooooooooo Much For those Words!!!!

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