~~"NACHEEZ GIRAA SA HOO.N"~~by Shally.

by k.shael on June 26, 2009, 10:39:35 AM
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Hoo.n bahut naraz aur kuch mein khafa sa hoo.n,
Jaise apni hi zindagi ke dayre me na chah kar phasa sa hoo.n,

Mumkin nahi ki mulaqat ho meri uss se khawab me,
Jab har raat usi ki yaadon me bekarar mein jagaa sa hoo.n,

Bade anmol rishte the mere jo kho gaye hai kahii.n,
Zindagi ki raah pe akela mein bebas, mayoos, khada sa hoo.n ,

Chahat ki paa loo.n har khoobsurat shai iss jahaan ki,
Bass apne haalaton aur kuch waqt ki wajah se daba sa hoo.n,

Na maloom kisi ko gunaah jo behatasha maine kiye ,
Khushkismati meri ki khuda ke karam se aab talak chipa sa hoo.n,

Ehsaan tera manoo ya Duaon ka manoo khel mein Shally,
Ki tujhe paa liya maine, warna mein to nacheez gira sa hoo.n..

Shally.
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«Reply #1 on: June 26, 2009, 10:42:34 AM »
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Wow Shally ji,excellent,very beautiful creation. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley love4
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«Reply #2 on: June 26, 2009, 11:10:13 AM »
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wah wah bahoth qoob shally bahoth badi shayara banogi tum eak din iss jazbe ko yunhi barqarar rakhna ..ab tarif kya karen hum alfaz hi nahi hain ....allah tumhe khush rakhe !!!

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«Reply #3 on: June 26, 2009, 11:18:48 AM »
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bahut achche shally dear khoob likha hai aapne.........isi tarah likhte rahiye khuda aapko bulandi naseeb kare
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«Reply #4 on: June 26, 2009, 12:00:52 PM »
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Shallyyyyy Dear.. Kya Kahun.. Behad Hi Lajawab alfaaz Pesh kiye hain dear..!! Haalaaton Ke Aage Majboor Insaan ki Bebasi ko Lafzon ke zariye Behad Khubsoorati se Pesh kiya hai aapne...!!

Behtreen Soch ke sath Khubsoorat Peshkash hai aapki.. bahut Bahut Khoooooob.. Applause Applause


 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley


**~** Mann **~**
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«Reply #5 on: June 26, 2009, 12:28:57 PM »
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Bahut khuuuuuuuub Shally ji....behtrin...bahut pyari soch k sath likha hai aapne
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«Reply #6 on: June 26, 2009, 12:35:11 PM »
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Bohot Khoob Shally dear  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #7 on: June 27, 2009, 05:39:36 AM »
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Quote from: madhuwesh on June 26, 2009, 10:42:34 AM
Wow Shally ji,excellent,very beautiful creation. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley love4

Shukriya Madhu Dear..

Shally.
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«Reply #8 on: June 27, 2009, 05:48:54 AM »
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Hoo.n bahut naraz aur kuch mein khafa sa hoo.n,
Jaise apni hi zindagi ke dayre me na chah kar phasa sa hoo.n,

Bahut bahut khoob Shally Ji
very attractive composition, great

Vaise is naarazi aur khafa hone per hi maine likha hai ki

खफा हो तो मना लेंगे भले कुछ देर हो जाये
तुम्हे अपना बना लेंगे भले कुछ देर हो जाये

खिजाओं को मिटाने के कभी हामी नहीं हैं हम
बहारें भी बुला लेंगे भले कुछ देर हो जाये

अगर हक और फर्जों का सही मतलब समझ लोगे
नहीं अंधेर फिर होगा भले कुछ देर हो जाये

SARVESH RASTOGI
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«Reply #9 on: June 27, 2009, 07:26:39 AM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Bahaut bahaut acha likha hai apne Shally jee
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«Reply #10 on: June 28, 2009, 01:24:49 PM »
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Quote from: k.shael on June 26, 2009, 10:39:35 AM

Bade anmol rishte the mere jo kho gaye hai kahii.n,
Zindagi ki raah pe akela mein bebas, mayoos, khada sa hoo.n ,

Chahat hai ki paa loo.n har khoobsurat shai iss jahaan ki,
Bas apne haalaton aur kuch waqt ki wajah se daba sa hoo.n,

Ehsaan tera manoo ya Duaon ka manoo khel mein Shally,
Ki tujhe paa liya maine, warna mein to nacheez gira sa hoo.n..

Shally.
Aaj key haalaat mein eik ajeeb beybasee-see dil-o-dimaag ko kachotati hai! Achchhey tasawwuraat kaa mazaahiraa huaa hai! Patah naheenkyoun mein aapkee gazaloun ko gungunaa naheen paataa hoon? Kabhee roo-b-roo aap key hi 'mukhaarvind' sey sun ney ko miley, tabhee tarz ka andaaz ho paayegaa!
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«Reply #11 on: June 30, 2009, 08:49:40 AM »
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Quote from: k.shael on June 26, 2009, 10:39:35 AM
Hoo.n bahut naraz aur kuch mein khafa sa hoo.n,
Jaise apni hi zindagi ke dayre me na chah kar phasa sa hoo.n,

Mumkin nahi ki mulaqat ho meri uss se khawab me,
Jab har raat usi ki yaadon me bekarar mein jagaa sa hoo.n,

Bade anmol rishte the mere jo kho gaye hai kahii.n,
Zindagi ki raah pe akela mein bebas, mayoos, khada sa hoo.n ,

Chahat ki paa loo.n har khoobsurat shai iss jahaan ki,
Bass apne haalaton aur kuch waqt ki wajah se daba sa hoo.n,

Na maloom kisi ko gunaah jo behatasha maine kiye ,
Khushkismati meri ki khuda ke karam se aab talak chipa sa hoo.n,

Ehsaan tera manoo ya Duaon ka manoo khel mein Shally,
Ki tujhe paa liya maine, warna mein to nacheez gira sa hoo.n..

Shally.


bhut shally ji bhut hi acha likha daad hazir hai aapke is kalaam par
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«Reply #12 on: June 30, 2009, 12:49:38 PM »
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Quote from: SARVESH RASTOGI on June 27, 2009, 05:48:54 AM
Hoo.n bahut naraz aur kuch mein khafa sa hoo.n,
Jaise apni hi zindagi ke dayre me na chah kar phasa sa hoo.n,

Bahut bahut khoob Shally Ji
very attractive composition, great

Vaise is naarazi aur khafa hone per hi maine likha hai ki

खफा हो तो मना लेंगे भले कुछ देर हो जाये
तुम्हे अपना बना लेंगे भले कुछ देर हो जाये

खिजाओं को मिटाने के कभी हामी नहीं हैं हम
बहारें भी बुला लेंगे भले कुछ देर हो जाये

अगर हक और फर्जों का सही मतलब समझ लोगे
नहीं अंधेर फिर होगा भले कुछ देर हो जाये

SARVESH RASTOGI
Rastogi ji! Pahlaa wa doosraa sheir bahut hee sundar hai! Waah bhai waah!
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«Reply #13 on: June 30, 2009, 01:44:57 PM »
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Quote from: k.shael on June 26, 2009, 10:39:35 AM
Hoo.n bahut naraz aur kuch mein khafa sa hoo.n,
Jaise apni hi zindagi ke dayre me na chah kar phasa sa hoo.n,

Mumkin nahi ki mulaqat ho meri uss se khawab me,
Jab har raat usi ki yaadon me bekarar mein jagaa sa hoo.n,

Bade anmol rishte the mere jo kho gaye hai kahii.n,
Zindagi ki raah pe akela mein bebas, mayoos, khada sa hoo.n ,

Chahat ki paa loo.n har khoobsurat shai iss jahaan ki,
Bass apne haalaton aur kuch waqt ki wajah se daba sa hoo.n,

Na maloom kisi ko gunaah jo behatasha maine kiye ,
Khushkismati meri ki khuda ke karam se aab talak chipa sa hoo.n,

Ehsaan tera manoo ya Duaon ka manoo khel mein Shally,
Ki tujhe paa liya maine, warna mein to nacheez gira sa hoo.n..

Shally.


shally ji
dil jeet liya hai aapki ghazalon ne hamara
really aapki kalam mein bahut hunar hai
god bless u
nira
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«Reply #14 on: July 02, 2009, 10:48:37 AM »
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Quote from: madhuwesh on June 26, 2009, 10:42:34 AM
Wow Shally ji,excellent,very beautiful creation. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley love4

Shukriya Madhu Dear..

Shally.
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