Nafrat Ki koi Umar Nahi Hoti,Yeh Sab Ko Bata Dena "Khwaish"

by khwaish on May 02, 2010, 12:27:02 PM
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Mera Apna Tajurba Hai Sab ko Bata Dena
Duniya mein Asaan Har Ek Ke Liye Mashwara Dena...

Khud Ko Insaaf Ke Aaene Mein Koi Utaarta Nahi
Bahut Asaan Hai Dusre Par Apni Ungli Utha Dena...

Aaj Hum Hai Kal Sirf Humaari Baatein Hongi,
Zindagi Mein Bahut Mushkil Hota Hai Kisi Ki Yaadon Ko Mita Dena..

Pyaar Mohabbat Ki umar Sadiyon Tak Zinda Rehti Hai
Nafrat Ki Koi Umar nahi Hoti,Yeh Sabko Zara Bata Dena...

Apne Bache ko Sirf Bhooka Dekh Kar Ro Padhti Hai Aankhein!!!
Par Aakhir kyon Asaan Hai Logon ke liye ek Duje ke ghar ko Jala Dena...

Jashn-e-Mehfilon Mein Haste To sabhi Hai....!!!!
Par Jigar Chaahiye Apne Hi Mushkilo Mein kabhi Muskura dena..

"Khwaish" Kehta Hai Shayar woh hai Jo Dil Ki Gehrai Se Likhe!!
Apne Jazbaaton se Kisi Aur Ke Aankhon Ko Rula Dena...


                        ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~
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«Reply #1 on: May 02, 2010, 12:31:32 PM »
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wah khawish sahab wah ,, pahele do misron me kya qoob sachai bayan ki hai wo bhi kis asaan tariqe .. badi inkesaari ki saath apni sach baton ki turjumani ki hai .. wah janab kya kahene yehi to apka fun hai ke asaan lafzon me badi se badi baath kahe dete ho..bhai dad qubool ho ..allah apko khush rakhe ..


duwa go

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«Reply #2 on: May 02, 2010, 12:37:24 PM »
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wah khawish sahab wah ,, pahele do misron me kya qoob sachai bayan ki hai wo bhi kis asaan tariqe .. badi inkesaari ki saath apni sach baton ki turjumani ki hai .. wah janab kya kahene yehi to apka fun hai ke asaan lafzon me badi se badi baath kahe dete ho..bhai dad qubool ho ..allah apko khush rakhe ..


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Aapne Apna Waqt Diya Aur Inn jazbaaton ko Samjha, Aapka Bahut Bahut Shukriya..

Yeh Umeed karta Hoon ke Aap Humesha Yuhi Hausla Badhate Rahenge..Shukriya icon_salut
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«Reply #3 on: May 02, 2010, 03:33:55 PM »
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Nice Work Khwaish Saheb.......daad kabool kare.
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«Reply #4 on: May 02, 2010, 04:59:47 PM »
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Very Very Gud Khwaish ji.....................

Jst Supreb!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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«Reply #5 on: May 02, 2010, 07:08:42 PM »
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bahut khoob likha hai Khwaish ji.... bahut hi umda... kadwe sach ko aapne hamesha ki tarah is baar bhi khoobsurti se shabdon me utaara hai...bahut khoob...!!!


bahut khoob kahaa aapne ki dikhti nahi apni khudki galtiyaan kisi ko,
manaate hain apne ghar me log deewali jalake ke kisi aur k ghar ko,
aasaan bahut hai dekh k kisi ko uski buraiyaan nikaalna yahaan,
par koshish bhi nahi karte ek nazar dekh le aur sudhaar le khud ko...
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«Reply #6 on: May 02, 2010, 08:16:54 PM »
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Wah wah Khwaish ji.very touching,lovely ,mindblowing creation.too good.Kapil ji aapne bhi bahut khoob likha. icon_salut Hats off to you! icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #7 on: May 02, 2010, 09:03:50 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Madhu ji...!!!

Wah wah Khwaish ji.very touching,lovely ,mindblowing creation.too good.Kapil ji aapne bhi bahut khoob likha. icon_salut Hats off to you! icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #8 on: May 03, 2010, 03:37:33 AM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause
hamesha ki tarah bahoot umda likha hai khwaish bro
 Applause Applause
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«Reply #9 on: May 03, 2010, 04:18:40 AM »
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Waah Waah Bahoot Bahoot Khoob Khwaish ji..Hamesha ki tarah .. Bahoot Umda peshkash... Keep Rocking !
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«Reply #10 on: May 03, 2010, 07:10:20 AM »
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Nice Work Khwaish Saheb.......daad kabool kare.

Bahut Bahut Shukriya Sajid Bhai..
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«Reply #11 on: May 03, 2010, 07:32:08 AM »
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Wah Wah Wah Kya Baaat hai Khwaaish Bhai.. Har ek Jumla Behad Khubsoorat Likha hai aapne.. Shuru Se Lekar Aakhiri tak aapke Alfaazon ne Baandhe Rakha..!!   icon_thumleft icon_thumleft

Pahala Aur Aakhiri Jumla Mujhe Khaas Kar Behad Accha laga.. Jisme Ek Such Ko Bakhobi Bayan kiya Hai aapne.. Bahut Hi Lajawab aur Umda Peshkash...!!!  Applause Applause Applause

Daad Kubooooooool karen..  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley



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Very Very Gud Khwaish ji.....................

Jst Supreb!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Thankyou Soooooooooo Much neelgoldji..
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«Reply #13 on: May 03, 2010, 08:28:03 AM »
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bahut khoob likha hai Khwaish ji.... bahut hi umda... kadwe sach ko aapne hamesha ki tarah is baar bhi khoobsurti se shabdon me utaara hai...bahut khoob...!!!


bahut khoob kahaa aapne ki dikhti nahi apni khudki galtiyaan kisi ko,
manaate hain apne ghar me log deewali jalake ke kisi aur k ghar ko,
aasaan bahut hai dekh k kisi ko uski buraiyaan nikaalna yahaan,
par koshish bhi nahi karte ek nazar dekh le aur sudhaar le khud ko...


Bahut Bahut Shukriya Klaskarji..Aapne Iss Ghazal Ko padha Aur saraha,Aapka Teh Dil Se Shukriya.. icon_flower

Aur Bahut Ache..Bahut Khoob Likha Hai Aapne Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #14 on: May 03, 2010, 08:41:02 AM »
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khwaishji aapne bahut khoobsurati se apne zazbaaton ko sajaya hai. bahut khoob. icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower

aasaan aur mushkil mein choice ho to
zayaadatar log aasaan ko hi choose karenge.

kyon ek hi dil mein rehte hain nafrat aur mohabbat.
time to time log dono ko hi use karenge.



Mera Apna Tajurba Hai Sab ko Bata Dena
Duniya mein Asaan Har Ek Ke Liye Mashwara Dena...

Khud Ko Insaaf Ke Aaene Mein Koi Utaarta Nahi
Bahut Asaan Hai Dusre Par Apni Ungli Utha Dena...

Aaj Hum Hai Kal Sirf Humaari Baatein Hongi,
Zindagi Mein Bahut Mushkil Hota Hai Kisi Ki Yaadon Ko Mita Dena..

Pyaar Mohabbat Ki umar Sadiyon Tak Zinda Rehti Hai
Nafrat Ki Koi Umar nahi Hoti,Yeh Sabko Zara Bata Dena...

Apne Bache ko Sirf Bhooka Dekh Kar Ro Padhti Hai Aankhein!!!
Par Aakhir kyon Asaan Hai Logon ke liye ek Duje ke ghar ko Jala Dena...

Jashn-e-Mehfilon Mein Haste To sabhi hai
Par "Khwaish" Jigar Chaahiye Apne Hi Mushkilo Mein kabhi Muskura dena..

"Khwaish" Kehta Hai Shayar woh hai Jo Dil Ki Gehrai Se Likhe!!
Apne Jazbaaton se Kisi Aur Ke Aankhon Ko Rula Dena...


                        ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~

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