NAFRAT ~~~~ SAAHIL

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lehron k saath beh kar badi door nikal aaya hoon
dekhta hoon ,meri yaad main ab kaun palkein bichhata hai

kaahin aaye kinaara , toh kucch der main thehroon
dekhta hoon, kiska sang mere dil ko lubhata hai

nazar bhar gayi mujhse toh tasveer badal di
dekhta hoon , kaun tumhe dil main basata hai

yeh panchhi chala aaya hai badi door saath main
dekhta hoon, kaun isko ab daana chugaata hai

tanhaayi jab bikhregi ,toh alam bhi toh tarsega
dekhta hoon, ab kaun yahan mehfil sajata hai

saaqee ne bhi tha keh diya, aakhiri jaam pesh karoon
dekhta hoon , kaun uske labon se ab peeta pilaata hai

sheeshe k sehar main reh kar patthar se kii dushmani
dekhta hoon , ab kaun tumhe mujhse bachata hai
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«Reply #1 on: July 31, 2009, 02:16:28 PM »
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Quote from: -Saahil- on July 31, 2009, 01:59:25 PM
lehron k saath beh kar badi door nikal aaya hoon
dekhta hoon ,meri yaad main ab kaun palkein bichhata hai

kaahin aaye kinaara , toh kucch der main thehroon
dekhta hoon, kiska sang mere dil ko lubhata hai

nazar bhar gayi mujhse toh tasveer badal di
dekhta hoon , kaun tumhe dil main basata hai

yeh panchhi chala aaya hai badi door saath main
dekhta hoon, kaun isko ab daana chugaata hai

tanhaayi jab bikhregi ,toh alam bhi toh tarsega
dekhta hoon, ab kaun yahan mehfil sajata hai

saaqee ne bhi tha keh diya, aakhiri jaam pesh karoon
dekhta hoon , kaun uske labon se ab peeta pilaata hai

sheeshe k sehar main reh kar patthar se kii dushmani
dekhta hoon , ab kaun tumhe mujhse bachata hai

 Applause Applause Applause

Wah wah bahut accha likha hai aapne dear saahil. her alfaz mein dard hai, shikayat hai....bebasi bi hai... wah  bahut khoob dear
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«Reply #2 on: July 31, 2009, 02:52:57 PM »
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Waah waaah Kya Khoob likha hai Saahil Tumne .. Superb! Bahoot Khoob!
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«Reply #3 on: July 31, 2009, 02:56:00 PM »
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Bohot khoob Salil  Applause Applause Applause Is shayari main ek dard ke saath ek zid si bhi nazar ayai hai.....Bohot achche !
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«Reply #4 on: July 31, 2009, 04:01:43 PM »
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Yu to har chehra ek muskan liye hain

Badi mushkil se yaha lekin koi dost nazar aata hain...


Auro ko zaleel karna jiska maqsad hain yaha yaro

Rehbari ka zimma woh shaks hi uthata hain...
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«Reply #5 on: July 31, 2009, 07:09:49 PM »
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Wonderful gazal Saahil ji ,very nice and beautiful creation icon_thumleft Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley :clapping:excellent
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«Reply #6 on: August 02, 2009, 03:38:27 PM »
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bahut achha likha hai aapne saahil ji....aapke in alfaazo me dard to hai hi
aur sath hi kahi na kahi bahut gussa bhi hai....khuch lines yaad aayi aapki iss peshkash par...ummid hai pasand aayegi


Paani mein utarna aur lehron me beh jaana
Beh kar pahuch gaye jha,shayad wahi hai asli thikana

Gila-shikwa to ek din khud-b-khud mit jayenga
Tum khud ko kabhi na patthar banaana

Khuda ki khudai par yakeen karo dost,
Wo kisi ko tanha nahi rakhta
Panchhi ko kisi na kisi ne to hai daana chugaana
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«Reply #7 on: August 02, 2009, 04:32:51 PM »
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Bahut Khoooooooooob Salil Bhai.. Lajawab Alfaazon se Saji Gazal Pesh ki hai aapne.. Bahut Hi Behtreen Peshkash hai.. Applause Applause


Pooja Aapne Bhi Bahut Hi Umda Likha hai.. Bahut Bahut Khoooooooob.. Applause Applause


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«Reply #8 on: August 03, 2009, 11:20:06 AM »
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shukriya Mann ji
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«Reply #9 on: August 03, 2009, 11:22:21 AM »
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Very nice reply, Pooja
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«Reply #10 on: August 03, 2009, 11:25:38 AM »
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khushi hui aapko pasand aaya Celmira ji
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«Reply #11 on: August 04, 2009, 07:14:11 AM »
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Wah Wah Bahut Khoob Salil, Bade Katilana sawal hai...very good Clapping Smiley  Clapping Smiley

Shally.
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«Reply #12 on: August 04, 2009, 07:24:04 AM »
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Quote from: Roja on July 31, 2009, 02:16:28 PM
Applause Applause Applause

Wah wah bahut accha likha hai aapne dear saahil. her alfaz mein dard hai, shikayat hai....bebasi bi hai... wah  bahut khoob dear
Quote from: Sophi on July 31, 2009, 02:52:57 PM
Waah waaah Kya Khoob likha hai Saahil Tumne .. Superb! Bahoot Khoob!
Quote from: Celmira on July 31, 2009, 02:56:00 PM
Bohot khoob Salil  Applause Applause Applause Is shayari main ek dard ke saath ek zid si bhi nazar ayai hai.....Bohot achche !
Quote from: madhuwesh on July 31, 2009, 07:09:49 PM
Wonderful gazal Saahil ji ,very nice and beautiful creation icon_thumleft Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley :clapping:excellent
Quote from: k.shael on August 04, 2009, 07:14:11 AM
Wah Wah Bahut Khoob Salil, Bade Katilana sawal hai...very good Clapping Smiley  Clapping Smiley

Shally.
BAHUT BAHUT SHUKRIYA SOPHI DEAR,ROJA DEAR,SHALLY TALAT DI, LAILA DEAR,
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«Reply #13 on: August 04, 2009, 07:27:10 AM »
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Quote from: Dastbardaar on July 31, 2009, 04:01:43 PM
Yu to har chehra ek muskan liye hain

Badi mushkil se yaha lekin koi dost nazar aata hain...


Auro ko zaleel karna jiska maqsad hain yaha yaro

Rehbari ka zimma woh shaks hi uthata hain...
Quote from: Mann on August 02, 2009, 04:32:51 PM
Bahut Khoooooooooob Salil Bhai.. Lajawab Alfaazon se Saji Gazal Pesh ki hai aapne.. Bahut Hi Behtree Peshkas hai.. Applause Applause


Pooja Aapne Bhi Bahut Hi Umda Likha hai.. Bahut Bahut Khoooooooob.. Applause Applause


**~** Mann **~**
Quote from: poppoetry on August 02, 2009, 03:38:27 PM
bahut achha likha hai aapne saahil ji....aapke in alfaazo me dard to hai hi
aur sath hi kahi na kahi bahut gussa bhi hai....khuch lines yaad aayi aapki iss peshkash par...ummid hai pasand aayegi


Paani mein utarna aur lehron me beh jaana
Beh kar pahuch gaye jha,shayad wahi hai asli thikana

Gila-shikwa to ek din khud-b-khud mit jayenga
Tum khud ko kabhi na patthar banaana

Khuda ki khudai par yakeen karo dost,
Wo kisi ko tanha nahi rakhta
Panchhi ko kisi na kisi ne to hai daana chugaana
DASTARBARDAR SAAHEB ,POOJA DEAR AAP DONO NE BAHUT HI KHOOB LIKHA HAI DAAD KABOOL KARE MERI AUR SE..VICKY BHAI AAPKA BHI SHUKRIYA

BEKHAYALI MAIN JAB HAATH APNA DEKHA MAINE
TOH LAHOO DEKH KAR BAHUT GHABRAAYA
JEHAN PAR JO DALA KUCCH ZOR
TOH TERE HAATHON MAIN KHANJAR YAAD AAYA
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«Reply #14 on: August 04, 2009, 06:05:08 PM »
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Quote from: -Saahil- on August 04, 2009, 07:27:10 AM
DASTARBARDAR SAAHEB ,POOJA DEAR AAP DONO NE BAHUT HI KHOOB LIKHA HAI DAAD KABOOL KARE MERI AUR SE..VICKY BHAI AAPKA BHI SHUKRIYA

BEKHAYALI MAIN JAB HAATH APNA DEKHA MAINE
TOH LAHOO DEKH KAR BAHUT GHABRAAYA
JEHAN PAR JO DALA KUCCH ZOR
TOH TERE HAATHON MAIN KHANJAR YAAD AAYA
bahut dard bhare alfaaz kahe hai aapne saahil ji....
Gar wo khanjar mere haatho me aaya na hota
To tune bhi mujh par ye ilzaam lagaaya na hota
Aankho k saamne jo hota hai wo sach nahi hota aksar
Kaash ye khyaal bhi tere jehan me aaya hota
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