Nahi kehta yeh tumsey laut kar wapas nahi jana

by Syed Mohd Mahzar on November 03, 2012, 11:43:32 AM
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Nahi kahta yeh tumsey laut kar  wapas nahi jana
zara kuch aur thahro,roshni hay,din tou dhal jaye

sanwaro laakh apney jism ko jo bhi jatan kar lo
yeh jate hi lahad me chand ghantoun hi me gal jaye

paani se  banana barf, nahi  koi karnama hay
yeh phir ban jayega paani, baraf yeh jo pighal jaye

jo gamley me lagaya hay, usey kuch chaoun me rakho
naram paudha,kari hay dhoop, garmi se na jal jayee

bahut mohtaat hay bachcha yahi hay justuju uski
na aa paye muththi me aur yeh jugnu nikal jaye

is naye daur me rayej yeh chalan aam hua
kapre jo badalte hain saathi bhi badal jaye

          ..........Syed Mohd Mahzar
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«Reply #1 on: November 03, 2012, 11:47:13 AM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
bahut bahut bahut hi khoooooooob likha hai aapne
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«Reply #2 on: November 03, 2012, 03:02:43 PM »
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jo gamley me lagaya hay, usey kuch chaoun me rakho
naram paudha,kari hay dhoop, garmi se na jal jayee

Waah Bahut Khoob  Applause Applause
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«Reply #3 on: November 03, 2012, 04:38:41 PM »
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Quote from: Syed Mohd Mahzar on November 03, 2012, 11:43:32 AM
Nahi kahta yeh tumsey laut kar  wapas nahi jana
zara kuch aur thahro,roshni hay,din tou dhal jaye

sanwaro laakh apney jism ko jo bhi jatan kar lo
yeh jate hi lahad me chand ghantoun hi me gal jaye

paani se  banana barf, nahi  koi karnama hay
yeh phir ban jayega paani, baraf yeh jo pighal jaye

jo gamley me lagaya hay, usey kuch chaoun me rakho
naram paudha,kari hay dhoop, garmi se na jal jayee

bahut mohtaat hay bachcha yahi hay justuju uski
na aa paye muththi me aur yeh jugnu nikal jaye

is naye daur me rayej yeh chalan aam hua
kapre jo badalte hain saathi bhi badal jaye

          ..........Syed Mohd Mahzar


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«Reply #4 on: November 04, 2012, 12:52:37 AM »
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«Reply #5 on: November 04, 2012, 01:50:17 AM »
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bahut khoob soorat
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«Reply #6 on: November 04, 2012, 06:32:38 AM »
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Wah Wah Wah Wah Wah Behad Shandaar  Creation Syed Ji...
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«Reply #7 on: November 05, 2012, 11:22:37 AM »
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Bahot achhi ghazal kahi hai Mahzar sahab. Parhkar insaan ki haqiqat ka ahsaas hua.Ye sher to kamaal ka hai:

sanwaro laakh apney jism ko jo bhi jatan kar lo
yeh jate hi lahad me chand ghantoun hi me gal jaye

Hazaron daad pesh karta hun.
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«Reply #8 on: November 08, 2012, 08:40:35 AM »
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Quote from: Ram Saraswat on November 03, 2012, 03:02:43 PM
jo gamley me lagaya hay, usey kuch chaoun me rakho
naram paudha,kari hay dhoop, garmi se na jal jayee

Waah Bahut Khoob  Applause Applause
  Ram Saraswat bhai,aapko yeh sher pasan aaya....iska bahut bahut shukriya...
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«Reply #9 on: November 08, 2012, 08:44:02 AM »
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Quote from: aqsh on November 03, 2012, 11:47:13 AM
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
bahut bahut bahut hi khoooooooob likha hai aapne
   bahut bahut shukriya
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Quote from: Kaushal Sharma on November 04, 2012, 06:32:38 AM
Wah Wah Wah Wah Wah Behad Shandaar  Creation Syed Ji...
kaushal sharma ji , pasand karne ka shukriya, jo dil me hote hain hamesha unki yaad bhi rahti hay
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Quote from: sksaini4 on November 04, 2012, 01:50:17 AM
bahut khoob soorat
    bahut shukriya bhai....
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