NASAMAJH HO KISI KI JAAN NA LO

by SARVESH RASTOGI on March 24, 2009, 03:33:04 PM
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«Reply #15 on: April 14, 2009, 02:10:19 PM »
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Waah Waah waah, Kya KHoob Once Again A Great Job,.
Bohat Achche,.
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«Reply #16 on: April 14, 2009, 05:16:06 PM »
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Waah Waah waah, Kya KHoob Once Again A Great Job,.
Bohat Achche,.

Aaj to aapne dil khol ke daad di hain Azeem,
Shukriya meharbani,
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«Reply #17 on: April 15, 2009, 09:50:35 AM »
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Aaj to aapne dil khol ke daad di hain Azeem,
Shukriya meharbani,
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U are Always welcome Ji,.
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«Reply #18 on: April 15, 2009, 11:09:51 AM »
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Bahoot ache Rastogi ji... Aapse bahoot kuch sikhne ko milega Thumbs UP
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«Reply #19 on: April 15, 2009, 11:35:02 AM »
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Bahoot ache Rastogi ji... Aapse bahoot kuch sikhne ko milega Thumbs UP

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«Reply #20 on: April 30, 2009, 04:08:40 PM »
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Nice One Sarvesh Ji,.

SHUKRIYA DOST
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«Reply #21 on: June 10, 2009, 04:15:46 AM »
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नासमझ हो किसी की जान न लो
इस तरह हाथ में कमान न लो

करो न बारिशों की बात सनम
हमारी छत का इम्तिहान न लो

जहाँ ज़मीन से रिश्ता न रहे
ऐसी ऊँची कोई उड़ान न लो

अपनी खुशिओं का इंतजाम करो
हमारी मौत का सामान न लो

जिस इलाके में हो पुलिस चौकी
उस इलाके में तुम मकान न लो

धार के साथ ही बहे जाओ
किसी मल्लाह का अहसान न लो

अपने मकसद पे ही नज़र रक्खो
यूँ ही दुनिया से बैर ठान न लो

सर्वेश रस्तोगी
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«Reply #22 on: June 10, 2009, 04:23:15 AM »
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Sarvesh Sahib,
Wah wah... lutf aa gaya yeh sundar rachna parh kar...
Maan gaye aap ke qalam ki dhaar ko... zabardast...
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«Reply #23 on: June 11, 2009, 02:27:26 AM »
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Kuchh baat hai Syednaami Saheb ki jab aap tarif karte hain to ghazal mukammal lagti hai.  Bahut bahut shukriya Janab.  Filmi geet ka mukhda yaad aa raha hai -
Chehare pe khushi chha jaati hai aankhon me suroor aa jata hai
Jab tum mujhe apna kahate ho apne pe guroor aa jata hai
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«Reply #24 on: June 11, 2009, 06:22:46 AM »
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Rastogi Sahib,
Bahut shukriya hamen is qabil samjhe aap...
Waise kalaam ko dekh kar hi andaza lag jata shayir ki qaabiliyat ka... Aur aap to MashaAllah shama-e-mahfil hain...
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«Reply #25 on: June 16, 2009, 04:30:19 PM »
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Rastogi Sahib,
Bahut shukriya hamen is qabil samjhe aap...
Waise kalaam ko dekh kar hi andaza lag jata shayir ki qaabiliyat ka... Aur aap to MashaAllah shama-e-mahfil hain...


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«Reply #26 on: June 29, 2009, 03:51:28 PM »
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Waah bahut hi khoob
Too good

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«Reply #27 on: June 29, 2009, 04:19:11 PM »
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bahoot khoob rastogi ji.....
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«Reply #28 on: June 30, 2009, 08:47:37 AM »
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NAASAMAJH HO KISI KI JAAN NA LO
IS TARAH HAATH MAIN KAMAAN NA LO

KARO NA BAARISHON KI BAAT SANAM
HAMAARI CHHAT KA IMTIHAN NA LO

JAHAN ZAMIN SE RISHTA NA RAHE
AISI UNCHI KOI UDAAN NA LO

APNI KHUSHION KA INTAZAM KARO
HAMAARI MAUT KA SAAMAAN NA LO

JIS ILAKE MAIN HO POLICE CHOWKI
US ILAKE MAIN TUM MAKAAN NA LO

DHAAR KE SAATH HI BAHE JAAO
KISI MALLAH KA AHSAAN NA LO

APNE MAQSAD PE HI NAZAR RAKKHO
YUN HI DUNIYA SE BAIR THAAN NA LO

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नासमझ हो किसी की जान न लो
इस तरह हाथ में कमान न लो

करो न बारिशों की बात सनम
हमारी छत का इम्तिहान न लो

जहाँ ज़मीन से रिश्ता न रहे
ऐसी ऊँची कोई उड़ान न लो

अपनी खुशिओं का इंतजाम करो
हमारी मौत का सामान न लो

जिस इलाके में हो पुलिस चौकी
उस इलाके में तुम मकान न लो

धार के साथ ही बहे जाओ
किसी मल्लाह का अहसान न लो

अपने मकसद पे ही नज़र रक्खो
यूँ ही दुनिया से बैर ठान न लो

सर्वेश रस्तोगी

kya baat hai servesh sahab waah waah bhut hi khoob janab dil se daad hazir hai janaab qubool karen
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«Reply #29 on: June 30, 2009, 08:51:55 AM »
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bahot khub sarveshji
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