NASAMAJH HO KISI KI JAAN NA LO

by SARVESH RASTOGI on March 24, 2009, 03:33:04 PM
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«Reply #30 on: June 30, 2009, 04:11:43 PM »
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Bahut shukriya Bekarar Ji
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«Reply #31 on: July 09, 2009, 06:27:53 AM »
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NAASAMAJH HO KISI KI JAAN NA LO
IS TARAH HAATH MAIN KAMAAN NA LO

KARO NA BAARISHON KI BAAT SANAM
HAMAARI CHHAT KA IMTIHAN NA LO

JAHAN ZAMIN SE RISHTA NA RAHE
AISI UNCHI KOI UDAAN NA LO

APNI KHUSHION KA INTAZAM KARO
HAMAARI MAUT KA SAAMAAN NA LO

JIS ILAKE MAIN HO POLICE CHOWKI
US ILAKE MAIN TUM MAKAAN NA LO

DHAAR KE SAATH HI BAHE JAAO
KISI MALLAH KA AHSAAN NA LO

APNE MAQSAD PE HI NAZAR RAKKHO
YUN HI DUNIYA SE BAIR THAAN NA LO

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ek ek line kamal ki.. simple magar gahre arth liye hue... wonderful creation sarvesh ji.... dil khush ho gaya... good work..
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«Reply #32 on: July 09, 2009, 02:41:12 PM »
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kya baat hai servesh sahab waah waah bhut hi khoob janab dil se daad hazir hai janaab qubool karen

Bahut bahut Shukriya Aaina Ji
Very sorry for delay in acknowledgement.
Thanks again
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«Reply #33 on: July 09, 2009, 03:06:03 PM »
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bahot khub sarveshji

Bahut bahut Shukriya Santosh Ji
Aapka swagat hai Yoindia me aur hamari mehfil me bhi
Shayad pahli baar aapka dhyan hamari shayari ki ore aaya hai
Ghazal section me meri darjano ghazels available hain jo aap ko zaroor pasand aayengi.  Time nikal kar padhiye aur apne vicharon se avgat karaiye.
Thanks a lot again.  All the Best.
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«Reply #34 on: July 09, 2009, 03:54:46 PM »
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ek ek line kamal ki.. simple magar gahre arth liye hue... wonderful creation sarvesh ji.... dil khush ho gaya... good work..

Thanks a lot Pooja Ji
Mera bhi dil khush hua aapse tarif paakar
Kadardani ka shukriya
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«Reply #35 on: July 14, 2009, 03:36:03 PM »
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wonderful
wah wah wah
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«Reply #36 on: July 14, 2009, 04:07:42 PM »
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Mashallah, Hum To Tareef Karne Ke Bhi Kabeel Layaakh Nahi Is Adbudh Be Nayaab Ghazal Ki,.

Har Ashaar Mein Aapne Sarwesh Bhai, Sachchai Basaa Di,.
YUnhi LIkhte Rahiye, Pardhne Ka Maukha Dete Rahiye,.

Aur Hume Aapki Ghazalon Se Seekh Dete Rahiye,.

May Allah Bless You,.
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«Reply #37 on: July 15, 2009, 06:21:13 AM »
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Mashallah, Hum To Tareef Karne Ke Bhi Kabeel Layaakh Nahi Is Adbudh Be Nayaab Ghazal Ki,.

Har Ashaar Mein Aapne Sarwesh Bhai, Sachchai Basaa Di,.
YUnhi LIkhte Rahiye, Pardhne Ka Maukha Dete Rahiye,.

Aur Hume Aapki Ghazalon Se Seekh Dete Rahiye,.

May Allah Bless You,.

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Dil bada khush hua aapse itni tarif pakar.  Kitna apnapan hai aapke message me.  Bahut bahut shukriya.
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«Reply #38 on: July 15, 2009, 06:23:21 AM »
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Azeem Bhai
Dil bada khush hua aapse itni tarif pakar.  Kitna apnapan hai aapke message me.  Bahut bahut shukriya.
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«Reply #39 on: July 15, 2009, 08:05:08 AM »
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AAPKI GHAZAL KEY SAAREY AS'SHAAR BEHATREEN HAIN ..MATURE PERSON KI YAHI PEHCHAAN HAI S.R SAHAB  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #40 on: July 15, 2009, 04:17:21 PM »
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AAPKI GHAZAL KEY SAAREY AS'SHAAR BEHATREEN HAIN ..MATURE PERSON KI YAHI PEHCHAAN HAI S.R SAHAB  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Bahut bahut shukriya Khamosh Ji
Badi himmat badhai hai aapne, thanks
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«Reply #41 on: July 15, 2009, 04:18:52 PM »
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wah Rastogi Ji wah, bahut hi lajawaab, wah


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«Reply #42 on: July 16, 2009, 05:31:00 AM »
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wah Rastogi Ji wah, bahut hi lajawaab, wah


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Shukriya Jasbir Ji
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«Reply #43 on: July 16, 2009, 06:38:20 AM »
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once again..bahut acche sarvesh bhai
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«Reply #44 on: July 16, 2009, 08:50:55 AM »
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once again..bahut acche sarvesh bhai

Bahut shukriya Pandit Ji
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