nasoor hone laga,,,ghazal,,,jeet jainam saini

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mere kadmo,n ko koi  manjil koi  raah dijiyega,
phool naa  sahee  kaanto,n ko  bichaa dijiyega,

ye zindagi ka safar  abb  nasoor hone laga hai,
mil jaye insey  niyzaat  eysee  disha dijiyega,

tum be waffa  ho  fir  bhee  ahal e jahaa,n ko,
chaahe jhuthi hi sahi mohhobat  dikha dijiyega,

khat mere padhne se gar  aansu  aa jaye tumare,
to bikhre khato,n ko samet kar  mitta dijiyega,

tumari yaad main pather ki murat ban gaya jeet,
ho sake to  lout kar  thora  saa rula dijiyega,

bohat tadapa hoo,n ek pal chen se sone ke liye,
apni godh main seer rakh ek baar sula dijiyega,

hai dil se yahi duaa tu  jaha  rahe khush rahe,
gar koi lamha tadpaye to usko  bhoola dijiyega,
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«Reply #1 on: March 01, 2015, 08:05:04 PM »
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«Reply #2 on: March 01, 2015, 09:43:19 PM »
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waah waah waah bahut bahut khoob, Rau ke saath daad.
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«Reply #3 on: March 02, 2015, 05:00:56 AM »
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kyaa baat hai waah wah
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«Reply #4 on: March 02, 2015, 12:58:19 PM »
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shukriya hriday ji
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«Reply #5 on: March 02, 2015, 01:01:21 PM »
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bohat bohat shukriya surinder sir ji daaaaaadddd or rau kabool
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shukriya saini sir ji
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«Reply #7 on: March 03, 2015, 05:28:56 AM »
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Bahut umda jeet ji. dheron daad
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shukriya raji ji daaaaddddd kabool
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