Nazar.....:Ghazals

satish-Aman

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naakaam.e.mohabbat ka akhir anjaam kya hua,
mere luute dil ka be.nang.o.naam.... kya hua.

har shay aaj parayi haiN bekhabar hawa si,
unka sukun.e.dil.o.labz.e.dawaam kya hua .

socha tha tumhe bhi kabhi apna.. rahguzar.
gujre haseen khayalo ka ikhtitaam kya hua.

dhunda maine hamesha dhuNd me kya..... na jane
Dam.ba.khud khwabho ka masum ikraam kya hua

tere aane se jo karti thi 'aman' amn char-soo,
vo khamoshiyoka naama.o.payaam kya hua.

Be.nang.o.naam- character
dawaam- lasting
labz.e.dawaam- forever words/endless talking
ikhtitaam- end
Dam.ba.khud- silent
ikraam- kindness
naama.o.payaam-correspondence


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laaiba

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Re: Nazar.....

«Reply #1 on: May 14, 2013, 09:39:50 PM »

bohat khoob,..........


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ParwaaZ

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Re: Nazar.....

«Reply #2 on: May 15, 2013, 05:07:40 PM »

Satish Jee Aadaab....!

Badi achchi kalaam kahi hai aapne.. aapke khayaaloN se toH maraathi kalaamoN meiN rubaru ho gaye the... par Urdu kalaam meiN bhi behad khoob khayaal pesh kiye haiN aapne....

Humare khayaal se aap lughat ( dictionary ) ka istemaal karte haiN... jisse itne sare hard words aapne use kar liye...
Par janab misre jitne simple lafzoN meiN ho utne hi khoob hote haiN...

Khair humari dheroN daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...
Likhate rahiye... bazm meiN aate rahiye...

Shaad O aabaad rahiye...
Khuda Hafez...


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Re: Nazar.....

«Reply #3 on: May 15, 2013, 07:13:02 PM »

waah waah waah


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Iftakhar Ahmad

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Re: Nazar.....

«Reply #4 on: May 15, 2013, 08:40:07 PM »

HaaN Satish jee, agar aap simple urdu words se hi misre construct kareiN to kaafi achha hoga. Ye words kaafi tough ho gaye haiN.


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aqsh

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Re: Nazar.....

«Reply #5 on: May 15, 2013, 10:14:40 PM »

bahut khoob. dictionary use karna padha. but behad achcha likhe ho. dheron daad..


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