Nazdikiyaan na sahi faaslaa toh raha

by livingbytheday on August 04, 2012, 04:33:33 AM
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Yeh dua bhi mili uss khuda ki tarah,
Jo miley na miley aasraa toh raha
Ishq mein yaar –e-dil kuch toh haasil hua,
Nazdikiyaan na sahi faaslaa toh raha

Woh na chaahey magar naam judd hi gaaye
Log sochengey kuch maazraa toh raha

Tootkar kaanch-e-dil, ab yeh janaa sanam
Jaane ko shehr-e-pathar, raastaa toh raha

Mout ki karwatein deke ishq so gayi
Mar gaya hans ke woh baawafaa to raha

uss sirfirey se koi rishta nahi kehti rahi
aankhon se uske magar woh jhaanktaa toh raha

“Deepak” milayega khuda ab unko jaane kis janam
Par milayega zaroor yeh aasraa toh raha
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«Reply #1 on: August 04, 2012, 04:46:47 AM »
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waah waah bahut khoob deepak ji badhaai detaa hoon aap ko
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«Reply #2 on: August 04, 2012, 04:56:02 AM »
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Bohut Khoob deepak jee , bohut umda, mubarakbad qubool karen
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«Reply #3 on: August 04, 2012, 10:12:34 AM »
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bahut khoob Deepak Ji, badhai ho
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«Reply #4 on: August 04, 2012, 10:28:57 AM »
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वाह वाह
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«Reply #5 on: August 04, 2012, 09:30:07 PM »
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Bahot hi achcha sher, bahot khub bahot khub!!
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«Reply #6 on: August 05, 2012, 03:01:58 AM »
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Quote from: sksaini4 on August 04, 2012, 04:46:47 AM
waah waah bahut khoob deepak ji badhaai detaa hoon aap ko

saini sir, bahut bahut shukriyaa
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«Reply #7 on: August 05, 2012, 03:02:36 AM »
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Quote from: Aarish on August 04, 2012, 04:56:02 AM
Bohut Khoob deepak jee , bohut umda, mubarakbad qubool karen

Thank you sir
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«Reply #8 on: August 05, 2012, 03:03:08 AM »
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Quote from: amit_prakash_meet on August 04, 2012, 10:12:34 AM
bahut khoob Deepak Ji, badhai ho

thank you sir
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«Reply #9 on: August 05, 2012, 03:05:51 AM »
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Bahut umda Deepak jee
Applause Applause
shaandaar khayaalaat
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«Reply #10 on: August 05, 2012, 06:18:59 AM »
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«Reply #11 on: August 06, 2012, 03:04:40 AM »
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good loving boy
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«Reply #12 on: August 07, 2012, 04:52:07 PM »
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Quote from: nandbahu on August 04, 2012, 10:28:57 AM
वाह वाह

shukriyaa
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«Reply #13 on: August 07, 2012, 04:52:37 PM »
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Quote from: Sps on August 04, 2012, 09:30:07 PM
Bahot hi achcha sher, bahot khub bahot khub!!

thank you
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«Reply #14 on: August 07, 2012, 04:53:24 PM »
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Quote from: mkv on August 05, 2012, 03:05:51 AM
Bahut umda Deepak jee
Applause Applause
shaandaar khayaalaat

thank you sir
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