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«Reply #1 on: February 16, 2011, 02:25:51 PM » |
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naresh ji ek aur majedar peshkash apki........
waah ji waah maja aa gaya...
ek confusion he muje uske liye pm kar raha hu......
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«Reply #2 on: February 16, 2011, 02:56:15 PM » |
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Anshu ji badhiya nazm. achha laga parhkar  --- ek confusion mujhe bhi hai-- soch raha hu mai bhi PM karu ya yahi poochu. shayd Matrix Yaara ka bhi wahi confusion ho?? -- daad aapke post ko bahut saari |
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«Reply #3 on: February 16, 2011, 05:01:11 PM » |
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naresh ji ek aur majedar peshkash apki........
waah ji waah maja aa gaya...
ek confusion he muje uske liye pm kar raha hu......
Matrix Ji ... PM ke zariye Confusion toh theek ho gaya ... saath hi yeh bhi pata chalaa .. aap ko meri rachnaaoN se kitni mohabbat hai .... itni ijazat afzaai kaa bahut bahut shukriya ... aap bhi kam accha nahi likhte ... aapko padhnaa mujhe bahut pasand raha hai .. jab se main yahaaN aaya hoon ... ! |
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«Reply #4 on: February 16, 2011, 05:42:52 PM » |
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Tere Aansoo Se Bheege
HaathoN Ko Main
AankhoN Se Hataataa Kaise ... !
Jo Khud Se
Itnii Pareshaan Thii
Use Main Chhuu Ke
Aur Sataataa Kaise ... !
Uski SiskiyoN Ka Dard
Kaano MeN Utaar Ke
Bebas Saa KhaDhaa
Main Khud Ko Rulaataa Kaise ... !
Woh MuddatoN Se
Mere Dil MeN
Rooh Ki Tarha Basi Thii
Use YuN
Uske Haal Par ChhoD Ke
Ghar Aataa
Toh Aataa Kaise ... !
dil ko chhuu gaye ... Naresh Ji ! aapki kavita ke ehsaas ... bahut khoosurat likhi hai sabhi panktiyaa ... dil se daad hazir hai ... yunhi likhte rahiye ... ! |
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«Reply #5 on: February 16, 2011, 05:48:03 PM » |
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mastam mast creation hai ye aapki Naresh ji.....ise padhkar jagjit singh ji ki gazal yaad aagai........excellent post ji...feelings to bas kya kahun ab....
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«Reply #6 on: February 16, 2011, 06:22:54 PM » |
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Tere Aansoo Se Bheege
HaathoN Ko Main
AankhoN Se Hataataa Kaise ... !
Jo Khud Se
Itnii Pareshaan Thii
Use Main Chhuu Ke
Aur Sataataa Kaise ... !
Uski SiskiyoN Ka Dard
Kaano MeN Utaar Ke
Bebas Saa KhaDhaa
Main Khud Ko Rulaataa Kaise ... !
Woh MuddatoN Se
Mere Dil MeN
Rooh Ki Tarha Basi Thii
Use YuN
Uske Haal Par ChhoD Ke
Ghar Aataa
Toh Aataa Kaise ... !
GUD ONE AM |
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«Reply #7 on: February 16, 2011, 07:19:14 PM » |
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«Reply #8 on: February 17, 2011, 02:22:55 AM » |
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Anshu ji badhiya nazm. achha laga parhkar --- ek confusion mujhe bhi hai-- soch raha hu mai bhi PM karu ya yahi poochu. shayd Matrix Yaara ka bhi wahi confusion ho?? -- daad aapke post ko bahut saari Nirala Ji ! confusion ! toh kuch hona nahi chaahiye .. bahut seedhi aur saaf shabdoN meN nazm hai ... phir bhi lagtaa hai toh aap bhi matrix ji ki tarha puchh ke saaf kar le ... bahut bahut sukriya aapka ... jo itni gehraai se humari rachna ko padhte haiN aur saraahate haiN ... aise hi saath nibhaate rahen ... khush rahen ... ! duaaoN ke saath .. ! |
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«Reply #9 on: February 17, 2011, 06:05:25 AM » |
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Tere Aansoo Se Bheege
HaathoN Ko Main
AankhoN Se Hataataa Kaise ... !
Jo Khud Se
Itnii Pareshaan Thii
Use Main Chhuu Ke
Aur Sataataa Kaise ... !
Uski SiskiyoN Ka Dard
Kaano MeN Utaar Ke
Bebas Saa KhaDhaa
Main Khud Ko Rulaataa Kaise ... !
Woh MuddatoN Se
Mere Dil MeN
Rooh Ki Tarha Basi Thii
Use YuN
Uske Haal Par ChhoD Ke
Ghar Aataa
Toh Aataa Kaise ... !
Dil par asar chhoD thii hai aapki rachnaa ... Naresh Ji ! bahut khoobsurat likha hai aapne ... dil se daad ! |
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«Reply #10 on: February 17, 2011, 12:27:55 PM » |
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dil ko chhuu gaye ... Naresh Ji ! aapki kavita ke ehsaas ... bahut khoosurat likhi hai sabhi panktiyaa ... dil se daad hazir hai ... yunhi likhte rahiye ... !
Bahut bahut shukriya .... Radhika Ji ! |
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«Reply #11 on: February 17, 2011, 03:09:02 PM » |
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mastam mast creation hai ye aapki Naresh ji.....ise padhkar jagjit singh ji ki gazal yaad aagai........excellent post ji...feelings to bas kya kahun ab....
Bahut bahut shukriya ... kasak Ji ! ehsaasoN ko samajhne aur saraahane kaa ... khush rahen ... ! duaaoN ke saath ... ! |
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«Reply #12 on: February 17, 2011, 03:50:26 PM » |
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kamaal ki post Naresh ji
dil ko touch kar gai--
dili daad ji--
khus rahiye
sukriya
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«Reply #13 on: February 17, 2011, 05:54:45 PM » |
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GUD ONE AM
Thanksssssss ........ Khamosh Sahab ! |
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«Reply #14 on: February 18, 2011, 01:55:10 PM » |
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Bahut bahut shukriyaa ... Rahim Ji !! aapki dilee daad kaa !!!!!!! |
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