Nazm__KhudKushiii:Ghazals

vipul kumar

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Jab Dil Me Teri Yaad thi, Lafz bhi Roushan the.....
Har Waraq se Tere jism ki Khushbu aati Thi......
Har Misra Jaise Shiiri.n Tere Lab sa Tha,
Tab Kalam Meri Bin Soche Hi Chal Jaati Thi.....

Aur ab Jo Tujhko Bhoolne ki Koshish ki hai,
Lafzo.n ne Jaise Mujhse Bagaavat Kar di Hai.....
Mere Khayaal mere aangan me ab nahi rahte,
Meri Tahriir hi ab meri Mudda_ii si hai....
[Tahriir=writing;Mudda_i=Enemy]

Yu.n Khafa hai meri Ghazal ka Har Misra Mujhse,
Main k Paimaan-e-wafaa se Mukar gaya Jaise....
Bina tere ye dil ab is kadar viiraana hai,
Wo Jo ik shakhs tha Dil me, Wo Mar gaya Jaise......
Ab nahi Jalte Mere Lafzo.n se Har simt Chiraag,
Wo Tilism-e-Masiihaayi Bikhar Gaya Jaise......

Jab se Bhoole Hai.n sanam Tujhko, Tere Dard ko ham,
Kya kahe.n Kaisi Gira.n_Baar Zindgi kar Li.....
Aaj Mahsoos ki Teri Yaad ki Shidddat Hamne,
Tujhko Bhoole to...........................
Nazmo.n Ne Khudkushi Kar li........


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ParwaaZ

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Re: Nazm__KhudKushiii

«Reply #1 on: June 01, 2011, 06:50:42 PM »

Janab Vipul Sahaab Aadaab!

Aapki tareef meiN kia kaheN janab... aapne to bazm
ko roshan kar diyaa hai... behad umdaa gazaleN aur
nazmeN pesh karte hai...

Aapki yeH nazm bhi har baar ki tarhaa laa jawaab rahi
behad dikash aur dilfareb andaaz hai aapka..

Likhate rahiye... Alaah aapki kalam meiN aur bhi zor e
kuwat bakhshe...

Aap se yehi guzarish hai ke waqt nikal kar is mehfil
ko roshan karte rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...
aate rahiye.....
Khuda Hafez

Humne kia unse dosti kar lii
Nazmo GazloN ne khudkashi kar lii


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manjum

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Re: Nazm__KhudKushiii

«Reply #2 on: June 02, 2011, 03:54:23 AM »

wah wah vipulji... kamaalji.... bahut bahut khub....

Applause


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Re: Nazm__KhudKushiii

«Reply #3 on: June 02, 2011, 04:38:19 AM »

Quote from: vipul kumar on June 01, 2011, 05:42:39 PM

Jab Dil Me Teri Yaad thi, Lafz bhi Roushan the.....

Har Waraq se Tere jism ki Khushbu aati Thi......
Har Misra Jaise Shiiri.n Tere Lab sa Tha,
Tab Kalam Meri Bin Soche Hi Chal Jaati Thi.....

Aur ab Jo Tujhko Bhoolne ki Koshish ki hai,
Lafzo.n ne Jaise Mujhse Bagaavat Kar di Hai.....
Mere Khayaal mere aangan me ab nahi rahte,
Meri Tahriir hi ab meri Mudda_ii si hai....
[Tahriir=writing;Mudda_i=Enemy]

Yu.n Khafa hai meri Ghazal ka Har Misra Mujhse,
Main k Paimaan-e-wafaa se Mukar gaya Jaise....
Bina tere ye dil ab is kadar viiraana hai,
Wo Jo ik shakhs tha Dil me, Wo Mar gaya Jaise......
Ab nahi Jalte Mere Lafzo.n se Har simt Chiraag,
Wo Tilism-e-Masiihaayi Bikhar Gaya Jaise......

Jab se Bhoole Hai.n sanam Tujhko, Tere Dard ko ham,
Kya kahe.n Kaisi Gira.n_Baar Zindgi kar Li.....
Aaj Mahsoos ki Teri Yaad ki Shidddat Hamne,
Tujhko Bhoole to...........................
Nazmo.n Ne Khudkushi Kar li........


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vipul kumar

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Re: Nazm__KhudKushiii

«Reply #4 on: June 02, 2011, 02:03:39 PM »

Quote from: ParwaaZ on June 01, 2011, 06:50:42 PM

Bahut Bahut Shukriya Parwaaz Sahab. Aur Roshni sirf hamse nahi Aap jaise ahl-e-Bazm se Hoti hai, Jo apna kiimati waqt nikaalkar Hame padhte hai.n aur daad aur Duaye.n dete hai.n....
Aur jo yaha.n aane ki baat hai to Jab tak Saans me Shayri aur sukhan rahenge, Ham mahfile.n Kaise chhoD sakte hai.... Usual Smile

Aate rahiye... Khush Rahiye....
SHukriya.


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vipul kumar

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Re: Nazm__KhudKushiii

«Reply #5 on: June 02, 2011, 02:04:41 PM »

Quote from: manjum on June 02, 2011, 03:54:23 AM

wah wah vipulji... kamaalji.... bahut bahut khub....

Applause

Padhne aur Pasanad karne ka bahut bahut shukriya Manjum ji....
Shaad-o-aabad Rahe.n.....


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vipul kumar

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Re: Nazm__KhudKushiii

«Reply #6 on: June 02, 2011, 02:05:22 PM »

Quote from: MANOJ6568 on June 02, 2011, 04:38:19 AM

Waqt dene ka Shukriya Manoj ji...
Khush rahe.n......


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