nazoomi,,,,,ghazal,,,,,jeet jainam saini

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nazoomi mere hatho,n ki lakeerain daikh zaraa,
kiya haal beyaan kar rahi,n hai   daikh zaraa,

ekk ekk kar rishte choth gaye mare hatho,n se,
koi lout kar aayega  zindagi main daikh zaraa,

chalte chalte raah bhatak gaya  hoo,n shaayad,
kahi,n kisi orr toh manzil  hogee daikh zaraa,

gardish ka mahol hai har taraf andhkaar chaya,
roshan ho mari hasti bhi woh waqt daikh zaraa,

naa saanse chalti hai naa dil dhadkta hai mera,
kiyon betaab hai rooh juda hone ko daikh zaraa,

mare alfaaz mare saath mel nahi khate hai jeet,
dard hota hai har ghazal main yeh  daikh zaraa,
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«Reply #1 on: August 18, 2015, 01:27:04 AM »
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Awesome!
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«Reply #2 on: August 18, 2015, 03:45:42 AM »
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nazoomi mere hatho,n ki lakeerain daikh zaraa,
kiya haal beyaan kar rahi,n hai   daikh zaraa,

ekk ekk kar rishte choth gaye mare hatho,n se,
koi lout kar aayega  zindagi main daikh zaraa,

chalte chalte raah bhatak gaya  hoo,n shaayad,
kahi,n kisi orr toh manzil  hogee daikh zaraa,

gardish ka mahol hai har taraf andhkaar chaya,
roshan ho mari hasti bhi woh waqt daikh zaraa,

naa saanse chalti hai naa dil dhadkta hai mera,
kiyon betaab hai rooh juda hone ko daikh zaraa,

mare alfaaz mare saath mel nahi khate hai jeet,
dard hota hai har ghazal main yeh  daikh zaraa,

nazoomi-----pandit

वाह वाह.. बहुत अच्छी गजल।
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«Reply #3 on: August 18, 2015, 06:25:24 AM »
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Bahut khubsurat Waaaaaaaaahhhhhhh
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