Nibhaye khoob vaade usne dekho ....................MKV

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Dawa kamzori kee,  eezaad meri
Banee hai baazueN faulaad meri

Pakadne aaya hai meeloN se chalkar
Khada hai taak me Sayyaad meri

Nibhaye khoob vaade usne dekho
Huee hai zindgee barbaad meri

Bharose kee imaarat dhah gayee hai  
DharaNshaai huee buniyaad meri

Khuda bhi bekhabar haalaat se hai
Bhala vo kyoN sune faryaad meri

Sahara dene valoN ne hai loota
Koyee ab kyon kare imdaad meri

Nah pooche haal jeeta huN ya marta
Budhaape me koi aulaad meri

Lagaana fansi, uska farz hai ye
Sunega kyuN bhala Jallaad meri

Nah rah paate the bin mere kabhee jo
UnheN bhee ab nah aaye yaad meri

Isi ummeed meN baitha ‘Chiragh’ ab  
Ki hogee zindgee dilshaad meri
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«Reply #1 on: August 21, 2013, 09:10:25 PM »
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Nah pooche haal jeeta huN ya marta
Budhaape me koi aulaad meri

WAAH WAAH MUKESH JI BOHUT DARD NAZAR AYA APKI GHAZAL MEIN,

BOHUT UMDA,,
ApplauseApplauseApplauseApplauseApplauseApplause
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«Reply #2 on: August 21, 2013, 09:23:38 PM »
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bahot khoob dheron daad bas waah hi waah  Applause Clapping Smiley Applause
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«Reply #3 on: August 21, 2013, 09:54:02 PM »
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waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah, maiN sirf ek hi lafz nikaaluNga- Laaaaaaaaaaaaaaaajawaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaab. Jitni taareef karuN iss ghazal ki kam hai. HazaaroN daad aur ek Rau qubool kijiye iss ghazal pe.

Magar 5th sher meiN Khuda se maayoosi jhalak rahi hai. Insaan ko kisi soorat Khuda se naa-ummeed nahiN hona chahiye. Insaan chahe jo bhi kar le ya jo bhi kahe, ek din Khuda hi uski madad ko aata hai.
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«Reply #4 on: August 21, 2013, 11:14:50 PM »
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Bahut achhi ghazal kahi hai, Mukesh ji .
Yeh ashaar  khususan  bahut achhe lage .
Dheron daad aur mubarakbaad.

Khuda bhi bekhabar haalaat se hai
Bhala vo kyoN sune faryaad meri

Sahara dene valoN ne hai loota
Koyee ab kyon kare imdaad meri

Nah pooche haal jeeta huN ya marta
Budhaape me koi aulaad meri

Lagaana fansi, uska farz hai ye
Sunega kyuN bhala Jallaad meri
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«Reply #5 on: August 21, 2013, 11:29:23 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
waah waah waah waah kyaa kehne Mukesh ji, bahut khoob likha hai aapne....!!!
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«Reply #6 on: August 22, 2013, 12:14:27 AM »
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waah......kya baat hai Chirag ji....bahut khoob....dheron daad......
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«Reply #7 on: August 22, 2013, 12:36:16 AM »
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Khuda bhi bekhabar haalaat se hai
Bhala vo kyoN sune faryaad meri

Bahut Khoob, Applause Applause Applause
Aaj kal to yehi lagta hai.
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«Reply #8 on: August 22, 2013, 12:38:18 AM »
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bahut bahut khoob likha hai Mukesh ji aapne Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #9 on: August 22, 2013, 12:49:43 AM »
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kya kahu mukesh bhai.. Behad khoob behad umdaa.

beshumar daad kubul kare ish ghazal par.

Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #10 on: August 22, 2013, 01:47:18 AM »
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Bahut Umda MKV ji..Dheron daad... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #11 on: August 22, 2013, 12:36:53 PM »
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Quote from: mkv on August 21, 2013, 08:16:34 PM
Dawa kamzori kee,  eezaad meri
Banee hai baazueN faulaad meri

1kg lohaa kam par rahaa hai yaar milegaa kyaa.... Udhaar.... Jaldi lauta dungaa

Pakadne aaya hai meeloN se chalkar
Khada hai taak me Sayyaad meri

tension naai lene ka boss apun hai naa

Nibhaye khoob vaade usne dekho
Huee hai zindgee barbaad meri

he he he

Bharose kee imaarat dhah gayee hai 
DharaNshaai huee buniyaad meri

Ambuja cement ka proyog karna tha... Pahle hi bola tha

Khuda bhi bekhabar haalaat se hai
Bhala vo kyoN sune faryaad meri

Sunegaa.... Jaror sunegaa.... Uske ghar der hai... Adher nahii bachchaa

Sahara dene valoN ne hai loota
Koyee ab kyon kare imdaad meri

maiN karungaaaa

Nah pooche haal jeeta huN ya marta
Budhaape me koi aulaad meri

ha ha ha

Lagaana fansi, uska farz hai ye
Sunega kyuN bhala Jallaad meri

Zabardast...... Haasil-ae-gazal sher

Nah rah paate the bin mere kabhee jo
UnheN bhee ab nah aaye yaad meri

Yehi dastoor hai duniyaa kaa mere bhaai.....
 Jab pas rakhaa to yaad rakhkhaaaa...
Jo door gaye to bhoool gaye

Isi ummeed meN baitha ‘Chiragh’ ab 
Ki hogee zindgee dilshaad meri


Aaiiiiiiilaaaaa ye chiraaag kaun hai
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«Reply #12 on: August 22, 2013, 12:37:23 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause waah waah waah bahut khoob dheron daad
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«Reply #13 on: August 22, 2013, 02:49:33 PM »
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Ghazab ka qalaam raha Mukesh ji .... Dili daad o mubaarakbaad !
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«Reply #14 on: August 22, 2013, 02:51:16 PM »
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Saath hi naye takhallus par bhi badhaiyaan Usual Smile

Quote from: zarraa on August 22, 2013, 02:49:33 PM
Ghazab ka qalaam raha Mukesh ji .... Dili daad o mubaarakbaad !
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