Nikhar gayi hoon mai........................................................Aqsh

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Phir na simat saki, aise bhikhar gayi hoon mai
SaansoN ke hote hui bhi, jaise mar gayi hooN mai

Tamam umr jise, zindagi samajhkar chahti rahi
Usi ke dard meiN, hadd se guzar gayi hooN mai

Kahani apne dard ki, ab kisko jaakar sunaaoN
Roshni ke hote, andhere meiN utar gayi hooN mai

Ehsaas mar gaye, na gam hai na khushi hai ab koi
Ek arse se mousam kee tarah, tehar gayi hooN mai

Uski yaadoN ki mehek, aur chamak hai yeh "Aqsh"
Aaina kehta hai, din ba din nikhar gayi hooN mai
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«Reply #1 on: January 07, 2013, 05:13:59 AM »
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waah waah badaa hee khoobsoorst ehsaas dheron daad
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«Reply #2 on: January 07, 2013, 05:23:01 AM »
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Quote from: aqsh on January 07, 2013, 05:05:20 AM
Phir na simat saki, aise bhikhar gayi hoon mai
SaansoN ke hote hui bhi, jaise mar gayi hooN mai

Tamam umr jise, zindagi samajhkar chahti rahi
Usi ke dard meiN, hadd se guzar gayi hooN mai

Kahani apne dard ki, ab kisko jaakar sunaaoN
Roshni ke hote, andhere meiN utar gayi hooN mai

Ehsaas mar gaye, na gam hai na khushi hai ab koi
Ek arse se mousam kee tarah, tehar gayi hooN mai

Uski yaadoN ki mehek, aur chamak hai yeh "Aqsh"
Aaina kehta hai, din ba din nikhar gayi hooN mai


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«Reply #3 on: January 07, 2013, 05:25:03 AM »
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Quote from: sksaini4 on January 07, 2013, 05:13:59 AM
waah waah badaa hee khoobsoorst ehsaas dheron daad
thank you saini sir
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«Reply #4 on: January 07, 2013, 05:25:29 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriya aap ka qalb jee
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«Reply #5 on: January 07, 2013, 05:43:34 AM »
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Quote from: aqsh on January 07, 2013, 05:05:20 AM
Phir na simat saki, aise bhikhar gayi hoon mai
SaansoN ke hote hui bhi, jaise mar gayi hooN mai

Tamam umr jise, zindagi samajhkar chahti rahi
Usi ke dard meiN, hadd se guzar gayi hooN mai

Kahani apne dard ki, ab kisko jaakar sunaaoN
Roshni ke hote, andhere meiN utar gayi hooN mai

Ehsaas mar gaye, na gam hai na khushi hai ab koi
Ek arse se mousam kee tarah, tehar gayi hooN mai

Uski yaadoN ki mehek, aur chamak hai yeh "Aqsh"
Aaina kehta hai, din ba din nikhar gayi hooN mai
WOW HOW WONDERFUL....REALLY BEAUTIFUL
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«Reply #6 on: January 07, 2013, 05:44:34 AM »
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Quote from: sahal on January 07, 2013, 05:43:34 AM
WOW HOW WONDERFUL....REALLY BEAUTIFUL
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thank you so much sahal
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«Reply #7 on: January 07, 2013, 05:54:13 AM »
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kya baat hai
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«Reply #8 on: January 07, 2013, 06:08:55 AM »
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Quote from: kavyanjali on January 07, 2013, 05:54:13 AM
kya baat hai
thnx kavyanjali jee
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«Reply #9 on: January 07, 2013, 06:09:06 AM »
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Phir na simat saki, aise bhikhar gayi hoon mai
SaansoN ke hote hui bhi, jaise mar gayi hooN mai

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Tamam umr jise, zindagi samajhkar chahti rahi
Usi ke dard meiN, hadd se guzar gayi hooN mai

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Kahani apne dard ki, ab kisko jaakar sunaaoN
Roshni ke hote, andhere meiN utar gayi hooN mai

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Ehsaas mar gaye, na gam hai na khushi hai ab koi
Ek arse se mousam kee tarah, tehar gayi hooN mai

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Uski yaadoN ki mehek, aur chamak hai yeh "Aqsh"
Aaina kehta hai, din ba din nikhar gayi hooN mai

Wah Wah!!! Lajawaab!!!



Ashq Jee aap ki ab tak ki sab se aachi ghazal hai yeh mere liye. Behtareen!!!! Saare Ashaar Lajawaab rahe!!! Bohat Bohat Bohat Khub!!!

Mujhe Bohat hi jyaada pasand aayi hai!!! Aaise hi likhte rahiye!!!



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«Reply #10 on: January 07, 2013, 06:20:28 AM »
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Quote from: Shireen Hakani on January 07, 2013, 06:09:06 AM

Ashq Jee aap ki ab tak ki sab se aachi ghazal hai yeh mere liye. Behtareen!!!! Saare Ashaar Lajawaab rahe!!! Bohat Bohat Bohat Khub!!!

Mujhe Bohat hi jyaada pasand aayi hai!!! Aaise hi likhte rahiye!!!



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aapka bahut bahut bahut hi shukriya shireen jee.
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«Reply #13 on: January 07, 2013, 06:30:15 AM »
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Quote from: aqsh on January 07, 2013, 05:05:20 AM
Phir na simat saki, aise bhikhar gayi hoon mai
SaansoN ke hote hui bhi, jaise mar gayi hooN mai

Tamam umr jise, zindagi samajhkar chahti rahi
Usi ke dard meiN, hadd se guzar gayi hooN mai

Kahani apne dard ki, ab kisko jaakar sunaaoN
Roshni ke hote, andhere meiN utar gayi hooN mai

Ehsaas mar gaye, na gam hai na khushi hai ab koi
Ek arse se mousam kee tarah, tehar gayi hooN mai

Uski yaadoN ki mehek, aur chamak hai yeh "Aqsh"
Aaina kehta hai, din ba din nikhar gayi hooN mai

Har misra ki tadap pukare mujhe
Har sher ki sukhan sikhaye mujhe
Daad deno alfaz kam pade
Tifl-e sukhan si samajh hai mujhe

Behad aala, bahut hi khoob andaaz
Bahut hi ache khayal aur pyari shayari aapki
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thank you so much suman jee
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