Nikhar gayi hoon mai........................................................Aqsh

by aqsh on January 07, 2013, 05:05:20 AM
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«Reply #15 on: January 07, 2013, 06:31:39 AM »
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Quote from: nandbahu on January 07, 2013, 06:28:30 AM
wah wah wah wah
thanx nand jee
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«Reply #16 on: January 07, 2013, 06:32:34 AM »
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Quote from: Abul Asad on January 07, 2013, 06:30:15 AM
Har misra ki tadap pukare mujhe
Har sher ki sukhan sikhaye mujhe
Daad deno alfaz kam pade
Tifl-e sukhan si samajh hai mujhe

Behad aala, bahut hi khoob andaaz
Bahut hi ache khayal aur pyari shayari aapki
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thank you so sooooooooo much asad jee
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«Reply #17 on: January 07, 2013, 07:08:18 AM »
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Bahot khoob aqsh ji. In ashar ko is tarah kahen to shayad zyada achha lage:

Simat sakun na kabhi yun bhikhar gayi hoon mai
Rawaa.n hain saanse magar jaise mar gai hun main

Tamam umr jise chaha zindagi ki tarah
Usi ke dard meiN, hadd se guzar gayi hooN mai
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«Reply #18 on: January 07, 2013, 08:34:58 AM »
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behtareen peshkash hai aqsh ji, dheroN daad-o-mubaarakbaad ki haqdaar hain aap, ise qubool karen!...haan jo kuchh wafa ji ne sujhaya hai wo waqai qaabile ghaur hai aur main bhi unke qayel hoon!

sorry, maine wafa ji ki jagah par asad ji likh diya tha chunki abhi kuchh der pahle unke kalaam par baat chal rahi thi is wajah se confusion ho gaya tha!
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«Reply #19 on: January 07, 2013, 08:52:38 AM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause :clap:behtareen nazm aqsh ji
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«Reply #20 on: January 07, 2013, 09:06:49 AM »
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waah wah wah
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«Reply #21 on: January 07, 2013, 09:39:40 AM »
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Quote from: aqsh on January 07, 2013, 05:05:20 AM
Phir na simat saki, aise bhikhar gayi hoon mai
SaansoN ke hote hui bhi, jaise mar gayi hooN mai

Tamam umr jise, zindagi samajhkar chahti rahi
Usi ke dard meiN, hadd se guzar gayi hooN mai

Kahani apne dard ki, ab kisko jaakar sunaaoN
Roshni ke hote, andhere meiN utar gayi hooN mai

Ehsaas mar gaye, na gam hai na khushi hai ab koi
Ek arse se mousam kee tarah, tehar gayi hooN mai

Uski yaadoN ki mehek, aur chamak hai yeh "Aqsh"
Aaina kehta hai, din ba din nikhar gayi hooN mai

gr88.ma'am
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«Reply #22 on: January 07, 2013, 09:45:48 AM »
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Quote from: wafa. on January 07, 2013, 07:08:18 AM
Bahot khoob aqsh ji. In ashar ko is tarah kahen to shayad zyada achha lage:

Simat sakun na kabhi yun bhikhar gayi hoon mai
Rawaa.n hain saanse magar jaise mar gai hun main

Tamam umr jise chaha zindagi ki tarah
Usi ke dard meiN, hadd se guzar gayi hooN mai
thank you sooooooo much wafa jee. haan is tarah gazhal ki khoobsurati aur badhegi. thank you for ur best comments
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«Reply #23 on: January 07, 2013, 09:46:30 AM »
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Quote from: shara63 on January 07, 2013, 08:34:58 AM
behtareen peshkash hai aqsh ji, dheroN daad-o-mubaarakbaad ki haqdaar hain aap, ise qubool karen!...haan jo kuchh asad sb. ne sujhaya hai wo waqai qaabile ghaur hai aur main bhi unke qayel hoon!
thank you so much shara jee
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«Reply #24 on: January 07, 2013, 09:46:54 AM »
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Quote from: azad mishra on January 07, 2013, 08:52:38 AM
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause :clap:behtareen nazm aqsh ji
thank you azad jee
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«Reply #25 on: January 07, 2013, 09:47:15 AM »
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Quote from: saahill on January 07, 2013, 09:06:49 AM
waah wah wah
thnx sahill jee
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«Reply #26 on: January 07, 2013, 09:48:20 AM »
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Quote from: marhoom bahayaat on January 07, 2013, 09:39:40 AM
gr88.ma'am
thnx marhoom bahayaat jee
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«Reply #27 on: January 07, 2013, 10:22:10 AM »
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++1 for this zabardast creation.
Fully immotional rachna hai. Sad sad sa kar dene waalii
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«Reply #28 on: January 07, 2013, 10:37:37 AM »
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Quote from: Masoom Shahzada on January 07, 2013, 10:22:10 AM
++1 for this zabardast creation.
Fully immotional rachna hai. Sad sad sa kar dene waalii
thank you masoom and many many many thnx for the rau
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«Reply #29 on: January 07, 2013, 11:35:39 AM »
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uuuuuuuffffff kyaa kehne Aqsh ji.. kyaa kehne... is rachna aki taarif ko shabdon me baandhnaa mushkil hai.. kyaa likhun iski taarif me... kahaan se shabd laaun... ek baar padhaa, do baar padhaa.. aur jitni baar padhaa fir padhne ka mann huwaa... sach me bahut pyaari rachnaa hai jise baar baar padhne ka mann kartaa hai.. bahut achcha likha hai aapne....!!!

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tumhaare  jaane   se  kyaa  khoyaa  hai  maine, kyaa  paayaa hai
isi soch  me  main  har   subah, har  shaam  guzaar  detaa hoon

tadaptaa  hoon,  khoyaa  saa rehtaa hoon tumhaari  yaad mein
jaam  ko  hothon   se  lagaa ke, har dard ko  bhulaa detaa hoon

ek waqt   thaa   tumhaari  tasveer  mujhe  dekh muskuraati thi
ab,   ek   aisaa  waqt  hai   main    akele  hi muskuraa letaa hoon

main   likhtaa  hoon  nagmein  ghum  ke,  dard-e-judaai ke, aur
unhi  geeton   ko  mehfilon  mein yaaron ko sunaa detaa hoon

main tumhaari yaad me doobke khud ko hi bhulaa detaa hoon
tumhaari  tasveer ko   zindaa samajh seene se lagaa letaa hoon


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