Nikhar gayi hoon mai........................................................Aqsh -Panna 3:Ghazals

vimmi singh

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«Reply #30 on: January 07, 2013, 11:45:57 AM »

bahut bahut bahut hi khubsooorat aqsh ji...... wonderful...
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aqsh

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Re: Nikhar gayi hoon mai........................................................Aqsh

«Reply #31 on: January 07, 2013, 11:57:29 AM »

Quote from: ~Hriday~ on January 07, 2013, 11:35:39 AM

uuuuuuuffffff kyaa kehne Aqsh ji.. kyaa kehne... is rachna aki taarif ko shabdon me baandhnaa mushkil hai.. kyaa likhun iski taarif me... kahaan se shabd laaun... ek baar padhaa, do baar padhaa.. aur jitni baar padhaa fir padhne ka mann huwaa... sach me bahut pyaari rachnaa hai jise baar baar padhne ka mann kartaa hai.. bahut achcha likha hai aapne....!!!

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tumhaare jaane se kyaa khoyaa hai maine, kyaa paayaa hai
isi soch me main har subah, har shaam guzaar detaa hoon

tadaptaa hoon, khoyaa saa rehtaa hoon tumhaari yaad mein
jaam ko hothon se lagaa ke, har dard ko bhulaa detaa hoon

ek waqt thaa tumhaari tasveer mujhe dekh muskuraati thi
ab, ek aisaa waqt hai main akele hi muskuraa letaa hoon

main likhtaa hoon nagmein ghum ke, dard-e-judaai ke, aur
unhi geeton ko mehfilon mein yaaron ko sunaa detaa hoon

main tumhaari yaad me doobke khud ko hi bhulaa detaa hoon
tumhaari tasveer ko zindaa samajh seene se lagaa letaa hoon

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hriday jee its so nice to hear from you ki aapko meri kalam itni achchi lagi.aur aapki kalam bhi kuch kam nahi hai kisi din hum bhi aapki yeh hunar ko seekh jayenge. by the way many many thnx for ur beautiful reply


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Re: Nikhar gayi hoon mai........................................................Aqsh

«Reply #32 on: January 07, 2013, 11:58:07 AM »

Quote from: vimmi singh on January 07, 2013, 11:45:57 AM

bahut bahut bahut hi khubsooorat aqsh ji...... wonderful...
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thank you soooooooooo much vimmi jee


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Re: Nikhar gayi hoon mai........................................................Aqsh

«Reply #33 on: January 07, 2013, 12:16:10 PM »

Aqsh ji...!!!

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Re: Nikhar gayi hoon mai........................................................Aqsh

«Reply #34 on: January 07, 2013, 12:35:44 PM »

Quote from: ~Hriday~ on January 07, 2013, 12:16:10 PM

Aqsh ji...!!!

thnx sooooo much once again


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Re: Nikhar gayi hoon mai........................................................Aqsh

«Reply #35 on: January 07, 2013, 12:46:51 PM »

Quote from: aqsh on January 07, 2013, 05:05:20 AM

Phir na simat saki, aise bhikhar gayi hoon mai
SaansoN ke hote hui bhi, jaise mar gayi hooN mai
wah wah bahut khoob.........!
Tamam umr jise, zindagi samajhkar chahti rahi
Usi ke dard meiN, hadd se guzar gayi hooN mai
kyaa kahne.............!
Kahani apne dard ki, ab kisko jaakar sunaaoN
Roshni ke hote, andhere meiN utar gayi hooN mai
kya baat hai wahwah.........!
Ehsaas mar gaye, na gam hai na khushi hai ab koi
Ek arse se mousam kee tarah, tehar gayi hooN mai
bahi,mausam to badalta rahta hai...........!
Uski yaadoN ki mehek, aur chamak hai yeh "Aqsh"
Aaina kehta hai, din ba din nikhar gayi hooN mai
mashaalaah, aap aise hi khoobsoorat rahein........! icon_flower

bahut khoob aqsh.......!


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Re: Nikhar gayi hoon mai........................................................Aqsh

«Reply #36 on: January 07, 2013, 12:49:59 PM »

Quote from: Sheba on January 07, 2013, 12:46:51 PM

bahut khoob aqsh.......!

thnx so much sheba jee


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Aarish

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Re: Nikhar gayi hoon mai........................................................Aqsh

«Reply #37 on: January 08, 2013, 02:40:58 AM »

bohut khoob aqsh jee daadqubool karen


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aqsh

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Re: Nikhar gayi hoon mai........................................................Aqsh

«Reply #38 on: January 08, 2013, 04:38:43 AM »

Quote from: Aarish on January 08, 2013, 02:40:58 AM

bohut khoob aqsh jee daadqubool karen

thank you so much aarish jee


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