Nikharne lagi hoon mai.................................................Aqsh

by aqsh on January 14, 2013, 04:28:37 AM
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«Reply #15 on: January 14, 2013, 11:47:54 AM »
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Aqsh Jee Aadaab!



Behad khoob jee behad khoob... badi achchi kalaam kahi hai aapne...
Kafi rumaani aur khoobsurat kalaam rahi...


Humari dheroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...

Likhate rahiye... aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez..

shukriya aapka bahut bahut parwaaz jee
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«Reply #16 on: January 14, 2013, 11:48:19 AM »
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very very nice aqsh ji...Usual Smile
very nice
thnx ritesh jee
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Aarish
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«Reply #17 on: January 14, 2013, 12:31:49 PM »
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bohut khoob umda peshkash
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«Reply #18 on: January 14, 2013, 12:35:36 PM »
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bohut khoob umda peshkash
thnx aarish jee
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«Reply #19 on: January 14, 2013, 02:51:09 PM »
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beautiful .
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«Reply #20 on: January 14, 2013, 03:09:03 PM »
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Sochkar tujhko nikharne lagi hooN mai
Bina aaine ke sanwarane lagi hooN mai

Teri mohabbat ka mujhpe hua aisa asar
Kushboo si sansoN mein utarne lagi hooN mai

Sunai de rahi hai teri hi sada har soo
Chalte chalte ab toh teherne lagi hooN mai

Chahat ka har dariya paar kar ke jaana
BanhoN meiN teri bikharne lagi hooN mai

Hairan hooN mai is haalath par "Aqsh"
Shayad ab tumse pyaar karne lagi hooN mai


bahut bahut khoob aqsh
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«Reply #21 on: January 14, 2013, 03:19:07 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

bahut sundar, bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne Aqsh ji.. mohabbat me doobi apki ye rachnaa bahut bahut khoobsurat rahi...!!!


naa  kabhi  huwaa  aisaa pehle  naa  kabhi  dekhaa humne
jabse  tumhe  dekhaa hai, bas  tum  hi  ko  dekhaa humne

jab  tak  tumse  naa  mile the koi khwaab naa  dekha thaa
khwaabon me bhi bas ek hi chehraa ab to dekhaa  humne
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«Reply #22 on: January 14, 2013, 03:26:33 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

bahut sundar, bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne Aqsh ji.. mohabbat me doobi apki ye rachnaa bahut bahut khoobsurat rahi...!!!


naa  kabhi  huwaa  aisaa pehle  naa  kabhi  dekhaa humne
jabse  tumhe  dekhaa hai, bas  tum  hi  ko  dekhaa humne

jab  tak  tumse  naa  mile the koi khwaab naa  dekha thaa
khwaabon me bhi bas ek hi chehraa ab to dekhaa  humne
wah kya reply diya aapne v.nice hriday jee
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«Reply #23 on: January 14, 2013, 03:36:47 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaaa Suman ji....!!!

wah kya reply diya aapne v.nice hriday jee
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«Reply #24 on: January 14, 2013, 06:04:33 PM »
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beautiful .
thnx hasan jee
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«Reply #25 on: January 14, 2013, 06:04:59 PM »
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bahut bahut khoob aqsh
thank you soooooo much suman jee
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«Reply #26 on: January 14, 2013, 06:05:53 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

bahut sundar, bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne Aqsh ji.. mohabbat me doobi apki ye rachnaa bahut bahut khoobsurat rahi...!!!


naa  kabhi  huwaa  aisaa pehle  naa  kabhi  dekhaa humne
jabse  tumhe  dekhaa hai, bas  tum  hi  ko  dekhaa humne

jab  tak  tumse  naa  mile the koi khwaab naa  dekha thaa
khwaabon me bhi bas ek hi chehraa ab to dekhaa  humne
thank you hriday jee for ur beautiful reply
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«Reply #27 on: January 15, 2013, 04:02:36 AM »
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Waah waah, excellent, bahut hi khoob Aqsh jee. Meri taraf se dheroN daad aur ek Rau bhi.
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«Reply #28 on: January 15, 2013, 05:19:02 AM »
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Waah waah, excellent, bahut hi khoob Aqsh jee. Meri taraf se dheroN daad aur ek Rau bhi.
thank you sooooooooooo much iftakhar jee for apreciating me and for the rau
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«Reply #29 on: January 16, 2013, 02:04:43 PM »
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beautiful and lovely....... Applause Clapping Smiley Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause : love4
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