Nishan dhund raha hun.

by saroj.sharma on May 19, 2007, 05:39:32 AM
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Nange paao chale the jo ret par sath-sath,
Aaj un kadamo ke nishan dhund raha hun.

Kuchh hasin pal jo bitaye the ham sath-sath,
Aaj un yadon ke nishan dhud raha hun.

Aaj sham aai teri itni yad ki,
jo zakhm mile the teri chahat se,
Aaj un zakhmo ke nishan dhund raha hun.

Tere us hawa ka rukh janane ki zid par,
taaron ko mutti me bhar uchhal to diya tha,
Aaj falak pe un taaron ka nishan dhund raha hun.

Teri ruswai ka asar mujhapar to hona hi tha,
Mai mit chuka hun kuchh is kadar ki,
Aaj apne hone ka nishan dhund raha hun.

-Saroj Sharma
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«Reply #1 on: May 19, 2007, 06:10:54 PM »
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Very nice, expressive.. !!

Umda !

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«Reply #2 on: May 19, 2007, 06:13:36 PM »
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Jaate hue un lamho sae poochta hun..
Dede mujhe uss pyaar ka pata..
Iss-se phel mit jaaon mein mitti mein !
Dede mujhe mere "USS" yaar ka pata !!
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«Reply #3 on: May 22, 2007, 03:18:52 AM »
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wah bahoot khoob saroj ji.... apka yoindia mai sawagat hai

Noce lines Ricky!!
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«Reply #4 on: May 30, 2007, 05:13:57 PM »
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Thankyou Pooja ji !
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bahut umda jazbaat hain!!
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