PAAON MERE ZAMEEN PE REHNE DO.....,Hasan

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Mai.n  jahaa.n  hoo.n  wahee.n  pe  rehne  do,
Paao.n  mere  zamee.n  pe  rehne  do

Har  jagah  se  mitaa  do  naam  mera,
Bus  lab-e-naaznee.n   pe  rehne  do

Kah  chuke  ho  jo  tum ko  kehna  thha,
Faisla   saama'ee.n   pe  rehne  do

Khud  ko  her  zaaviye  se  dekh  liya,
Aa'ina  ab  wahee.n   pe  rehne  do

Bhool  jaaoo.n  na  dosto.n  ko 'Hasan',
Kychh  nishaa.n  aastee.n  pe  rehne  do
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«Reply #1 on: August 12, 2011, 11:00:57 AM »
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Quote from: F.H.SIDDIQUI on August 12, 2011, 10:56:34 AM
Mai.n  jahaa.n  hoo.n  wahee.n  pe  rehne  do,
Paao.n  mere  zamee.n  pe  rehne  do

Har  jagah  se  mitaa  do  naam  mera,
Bus  lab-e-naaznee.n   pe  rehne  do

Kah  chuke  ho  jo  tum ko  kehna  thha,
Faisla   saama'ee.n   pe  rehne  do

Khud  ko  her  zaaviye  se  dekh  liya,
Aa'ina  ab  wahee.n   pe  rehne  do

Bhool  jaaoo.n  na  dosto.n  ko 'Hasan',
Kychh  nishaa.n  aastee.n  pe  rehne  do

Bahut Bahut Khoob Hassan Saheb Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #2 on: August 12, 2011, 11:05:56 AM »
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Corrigendum:Maqte mein lafz KUCHH ki jagah kychh likh gaya hai .sahi farmaa lein.
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«Reply #3 on: August 12, 2011, 11:08:21 AM »
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Andaza Laga Liya Tha Hasan Saheb
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«Reply #4 on: August 12, 2011, 11:11:57 AM »
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Sanjeev Kash ji,bahut baut shukriya.Sukhanwaro.n se yahi ummeed hai.Phir bhi ghalti ki tas'heeh zaroori hai.
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«Reply #5 on: August 12, 2011, 11:28:44 AM »
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bht acha hai…
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«Reply #6 on: August 12, 2011, 11:39:20 AM »
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dil-e-daad... icon_flower

 Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #7 on: August 12, 2011, 11:54:59 AM »
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Hasan Sahab,

Waah...waah..kya baat hai
Bahut khoobsoorat ghagal..
Daad qubool farmaayen..

Aapki ghazal padhkar bahut pahle
padha hua ek she'r yaad aa gaya
shayar ka naam yaad naheen..

She'r kuchh aaisa tha...

"paavoN ko sar pe rakh ke hawaaoN ke saath chal
 aahista chalne waaloN ki baaree na aayegee"

Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'
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«Reply #8 on: August 12, 2011, 01:23:52 PM »
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DIL JEET LIYA HAMARA SIR..........JIYO JIYO Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #9 on: August 12, 2011, 04:34:08 PM »
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sarfira ji,hausla afai ke liye shukriya.khush rahiye.
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«Reply #10 on: August 12, 2011, 05:56:00 PM »
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Touhid saheb,hausla afzai ke liye bahut shukriya.Khush rahiye.
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«Reply #11 on: August 12, 2011, 06:41:10 PM »
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Satish ji,ghazal padhne aur hausla afzaai ke khoobsurat alfaaz ke liye aap ka tah e dil se mashkoor hoon.Eik baar phir aap ne mauqay ki munaasibat se eik pyaara she'r diya.Bahut shukriya.Hasan
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«Reply #12 on: August 13, 2011, 05:47:48 AM »
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Dil k jazbaat ji,hausla afai k liye bahut bahut shukriya.Hasan
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«Reply #13 on: August 13, 2011, 07:26:56 AM »
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Hassan Sahab aadab ,,

Itni choti bhr me aise sher ,,,kahena kamal nahi balke kamale fun hai sahab ,,,ye bus ap hi ki shaqsiyat ka hissa hai ,,allah apko mazeed nawaze ,,,bazm ki tajaliyat me izafa farmate rahe.N ,,,,Bus eak baat ye puchni thi ,,kay Lafz Samee'N" Noon-e-gunna pe girta hai ,,,jahan tak mujhe ilm hai iske saat Non ka Aailaan zarori hai ,,,Ap hi bahetar bata sakte hain ,,,Ye sirf apne ilm me izafa karne ke liye pcuh raha hun ,,mujhe umid hai ap khiyal nahi karene ,,,Allah apko khush rakhe ,,,Eak baar phir apki is pur acar o purmaghaz ghazal ki nazar hai meri dad khubool karen..Allah apko khush rakhe ...

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Qadeer Junaid saheb,Aadab.Aap ke purkhuloos tabsire ke liye behad mashkoor hoon.Aap ne jis tashweesh ka izhaar kiya hai,haqeeqat yeh hai ki usske baare mein wasooq ke saath main bhi kuchh naheen kah sakta.Mera khayaal hai ki jis tarah ZAMEEN , NAAZNEEN , AASTEEN waghaira alfaaz saakin noon ke saath iste'maal ho sakta hai ussi tarah lafz SAAMA'EEN bhi iste'maal ho sakta hai.Iss tarah ki ghaltiyaan umooman khud hi khatakne lagti hain aur iste'maal karte waqt shakk paida karti hain.Magar aisa kuchh ehsaas bhi mujhe nahee.n hua.Bahar'haal yeh meri laailmi ho sakti hai.Behtar hai--aur yeh meri guzaarish bhi hai--ki YOINDIA ke koi aur saaheb e nazar ,agar ilm rakhte ho.n to apni garaanqadr raai se nawaazein.Iss tarah aap ke saath mere bhi ilm mein izaafa ho jaaye ga....Khair andesh,Hasan
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