Paas Aane Ki Baat Karte Hain / पास आने की बात करते हैं........Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'

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«Reply #15 on: April 21, 2013, 02:56:53 PM »
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Quote from: saahill on April 20, 2013, 08:49:39 PM
bohut khub satish ji bohut umda


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bahut bahut shukriya....

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«Reply #16 on: April 21, 2013, 03:20:15 PM »
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पास आने की बात करते हैं
मुस्कुराने की बात करते हैं

लूट कर दौलते सुकूँ आख़िर
किस ख़ज़ाने की बात करते हैं

दिल तो मानिन्दे संग है फिर भी
दिल लगाने की बात करते हैं

रूठने का नहीं है ढब जिनको
वो मनाने की बात करते हैं

मालो-ज़र के लिए फ़क़त देखो
गिड़गिड़ाने की बात करते हैं

छोड़ जाना ही गर है याँ सब कुछ
क्यों बचाने की बात करते हैं

चोट लगती है मेरे दिल पे 'रक़ीब'
जब वो जाने की बात करते हैं

--- सतीश शुक्ला 'रक़ीब'


paas aane kee baat karte haiN
Muskuraane kee baat karte haiN

loot kar adulate sukooN aakhir
kis khazaane kee baat karte haiN

dil to maaniNde saNg hai fir bhee
dil lagane kee baat karte haiN

roothne ka naheeN hai dhab jinko
wo manane kee baat karte haiN

maalo-zar ke liye faqat dekho
gidgidane kee baat karte haiN

chhod jaana hi gar hai yaaN sab kuchh
kyoN bachane kee baat karte haiN

chot lagtee hai mere dil pe ‘Raqeeb’
jab wo jaane kee baat karte haiN

--- Satish Shukla ‘Raqeeb’

वाह भाई शतीश शुक्ला  'रक़ीब, जी बेहद उम्दा .....!! बहुत खूब ...!! हर शेर बेहद खूबसूरत ...!! बस इतना ही कहना चाहूँगा। 

"कुछ रफीक़ों के सिलसिले के रक़ीब
इस ज़माने की बात करते हैं .......!!

डा एच पी पाण्डेय 'अदब'
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«Reply #17 on: April 21, 2013, 05:07:49 PM »
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Quote from: Satish Shukla on April 20, 2013, 08:16:57 PM

पास आने की बात करते हैं
मुस्कुराने की बात करते हैं
main to hamesha hi khishmizaaj hoon kisi ke paas aane na aane se farq nahin padta mujhe icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower
लूट कर दौलते सुकूँ आख़िर
किस ख़ज़ाने की बात करते हैं
 Laughing hard Laughing hard =))acha meri qurbat mein janaab ka sakoo.n chalaa jata hai. acha babaa nahin aati paas tumhaare .ab khush
दिल तो मानिन्दे संग है फिर भी
दिल लगाने की बात करते हैं
kis ka dil, mera to bahut soft hai ji. tumhara hi sakht hai.bilkul bhi emotional nahin ho .jaane khuda ne kis mitti se banayaa hai Embarrased Embarrased Embarrased Embarrased Embarrased Embarrased
रूठने का नहीं है ढब जिनको
वो मनाने की बात करते हैं
tumhein mananaa bhi to nahin ataa hai. chalo hum dono mein hi ye khaami hai Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard
मालो-ज़र के लिए फ़क़त देखो
गिड़गिड़ाने की बात करते हैं
tauba -tauba meri aisi aadat nahin hai. jo hai khuda ka shukr hai. haan imaandaari se koshish jaari rakho icon_silent icon_silent icon_silent icon_silent icon_silent
छोड़ जाना ही गर है याँ सब कुछ
क्यों बचाने की बात करते हैं
kya karein zindagi hai, nizaam hi aisa hai.majboor hai insaan. koi peeri fakeeri nahin haasil hai. kamzor hai insaan icon_silent icon_silent icon_silent icon_silent
चोट लगती है मेरे दिल पे 'रक़ीब'
जब वो जाने की बात करते हैं

acha nahin jaati.ab khush icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower

--- सतीश शुक्ला 'रक़ीब'


paas aane kee baat karte haiN
Muskuraane kee baat karte haiN

loot kar adulate sukooN aakhir
kis khazaane kee baat karte haiN

dil to maaniNde saNg hai fir bhee
dil lagane kee baat karte haiN

roothne ka naheeN hai dhab jinko
wo manane kee baat karte haiN

maalo-zar ke liye faqat dekho
gidgidane kee baat karte haiN

chhod jaana hi gar hai yaaN sab kuchh
kyoN bachane kee baat karte haiN

chot lagtee hai mere dil pe ‘Raqeeb’
jab wo jaane kee baat karte haiN

--- Satish Shukla ‘Raqeeb’


bahut bahut khoob satish ji..................!
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«Reply #18 on: April 22, 2013, 01:08:05 PM »
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Quote from: khamosh_aawaaz on April 20, 2013, 09:01:33 PM

VERIIIIIIIIIII NAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAICE-SS

khamosh_aawaaz ji,

Nazre inayat aur hausala afzai ka
bahut bahut shukriya.....

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«Reply #19 on: April 22, 2013, 03:33:50 PM »
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Quote from: F.H.SIDDIQUI on April 20, 2013, 10:09:23 PM
Bahut khoob , Satish ji.Hamesha ki tarah eik khubsurat ghazal se nawaaza hai, Aur yeh sher behad haseen hai :

Loot kar daulat e sukoon aakhir .
Kis khazaane ki baat karte hain

Bahut bahut daad aur mubarakbad
                               
                          HASAN

Hasan Sahab,
             Aadaab !

Nazre inaayt aur hausala afzai ka bahut
bahut shukriya..........

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«Reply #20 on: April 22, 2013, 07:58:52 PM »
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Quote from: mkv on April 20, 2013, 10:48:58 PM
Jai shri krishna Satish Sir
bahut dino ke baad padhne ko mila..behatreen ghazal
par maza aa gaya..
Ye ashaar to ..kya kahne..
लूट कर दौलते सुकूँ आख़िर
किस ख़ज़ाने की बात करते हैं

दिल तो मानिन्दे संग है फिर भी
दिल लगाने की बात करते हैं

रूठने का नहीं है ढब जिनको
वो मनाने की बात करते हैं

छोड़ जाना ही गर है याँ सब कुछ
क्यों बचाने की बात करते हैं

चोट लगती है मेरे दिल पे 'रक़ीब'
जब वो जाने की बात करते हैं
Bahut khoob Sir


mkv ji,

Nazre inaayat aur hausala afzai ka
bahut bahut shukriya....

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«Reply #21 on: April 22, 2013, 08:57:52 PM »
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Quote from: Sudhir Ashq on April 20, 2013, 11:44:40 PM
Wah,Wah,Wah Satish ji,
Bahut umda ghazal kahi hai aapne.Mubarak ho aapko.

Sudhir Ashq Ji,

Jawab dene aur hausala afzai ka
bahut bahut shukriya....

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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
waah waah waah bahut hi khoob Shukla jee, sabhi ash'aar khoob rahe aur maqta khaastaur pe bahut pasand aaya.
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«Reply #23 on: April 23, 2013, 01:58:48 PM »
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Quote from: adil bechain on April 20, 2013, 11:50:51 PM

waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah 2nd sher khaas raha Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Adil Bechain Sahab,

Hausala afzai ka bahu bahut shukriya...

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«Reply #24 on: April 23, 2013, 04:04:37 PM »
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Satish Ji Bahut Hi Umda Likha Hai Jaewab Nahi. Bahut Pasad Aya.

dksaxenabsnl ji,

Nazre inaayat aur hausala afzai ka
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«Reply #25 on: April 23, 2013, 06:09:07 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Advo.RavinderaRavi Ji,

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वाह भाई शतीश शुक्ला  'रक़ीब, जी बेहद उम्दा .....!! बहुत खूब ...!! हर शेर बेहद खूबसूरत ...!! बस इतना ही कहना चाहूँगा। 

"कुछ रफीक़ों के सिलसिले के रक़ीब
इस ज़माने की बात करते हैं .......!!

डा एच पी पाण्डेय 'अदब'
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drpandey Ji,

Ghazal pasand karne, Jawab dene aur hausala
afzai ka bahut bahut shukriya....

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Quote from: Sheba on April 21, 2013, 05:07:49 PM

bahut bahut khoob satish ji..................!

Sheba Ji,

Hamesha kee tarah bahut hee pur asar jawaab...

Hausala afzai ka bahut bahut shukriya...

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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
waah waah waah bahut hi khoob Shukla jee, sabhi ash'aar khoob rahe aur maqta khaastaur pe bahut pasand aaya.

Iftakhar Ahmad Sahab,

Jawab dene aur hausala afzai ka
bahut bahut shukriya....

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