Paas aatey hain: tah-e-dil mein utartee hai adaa!

by abdbundeli on June 27, 2009, 04:08:41 PM
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Paas aatey hain: tah-e-dil mein utartee hai adaa!
Geet gaatey hain: tah-e-dil mein utartee hai sadaa!!

Deykh khiltey huye gunchoun ko, khairmaqdam  mein:
Muskuraatey hain: tah-e-dil mein utartee hai adaa!

Suroor-e-wasl-e-noujawaan sey, bin piye, yaa Rab!
Dagmagaatey hain: tah-e-dil mein utartee hai adaa!

Haar kar minnateyn kartaa hun! Jeet kar bhee woh,
Taish khaatey hain: tah-e-dil mein utartee hai adaa!

Door hat, deykhtey huye jawoun mein jaaney kyaa:
Paas aatey hain: tah-e-dil mein utartee hai adaa!

Aankh sey aankh milaatey hi shafaq hotey hain:
Lout jaatey hain: tah-e-dil mein utartee hai adaa!

Eid key din bhi, galey mil na luun, bachtey hain woh;
Sakpakaatey hain: tah-e-dil mein utartee hai adaa!

Raat taareek ho, pur noor sitaaroun jaisey,
Jhilmilaatey hain: tah-e-dil mein utartee hai adaa!

Ghoortaa deykh leyn mujhey, to, na jaaney kyaa-kyaa
Budbudaatey hain: tah-e-dil mein utartee hai adaa!

Kabhee nigaah mein bhartey hain, 'abd', chupkey sey;
Phir sataatey hain: tah-e-dil mein utartee hai adaa!

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«Reply #1 on: June 27, 2009, 07:08:49 PM »
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Wah wah Abd ji,bahut khoob,bahut acha likha aapne Applause Applause Applause
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Rajesh Harish
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«Reply #2 on: June 27, 2009, 07:27:17 PM »
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Bahut Khoob Abd Ji
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«Reply #3 on: June 28, 2009, 04:34:19 AM »
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kya baat hai abd jee..
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«Reply #4 on: June 28, 2009, 04:54:09 AM »
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Wah Wah Abd Ji, Bahut Khoob! Applause Applause
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«Reply #5 on: June 28, 2009, 05:30:42 AM »
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lajawab abd ji ,is metre pe ghazal kahna bahut badi baat hai,
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«Reply #6 on: June 28, 2009, 05:47:43 AM »
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Quote from: madhuwesh on June 27, 2009, 07:08:49 PM
Wah wah Abd ji,bahut khoob,bahut acha likha aapne Applause Applause Applause
Bahut-bahut Shukriyah Madhu ji!
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«Reply #7 on: June 28, 2009, 05:50:51 AM »
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Quote from: Rajesh Harish on June 27, 2009, 07:27:17 PM
Bahut Khoob Abd Ji
Quote from: pandit on June 28, 2009, 04:34:19 AM
kya baat hai abd jee..
Bahut-bahut Shukriyah Rajesh Harish ji/pandit ji!
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«Reply #8 on: June 28, 2009, 05:53:16 AM »
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Quote from: Deepati on June 28, 2009, 04:54:09 AM
Wah Wah Abd Ji, Bahut Khoob! Applause Applause
Bahut-bahut Shukriyah, Deepati ji! I'm happy you're back home happily!
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«Reply #9 on: June 28, 2009, 05:56:06 AM »
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Quote from: saaz_haldwanvi on June 28, 2009, 05:30:42 AM
lajawab abd ji ,is metre pe ghazal kahna bahut badi baat hai,

Bahut-bahut Shukriyah saaz_haldwanvi ji! Mujhey khushee hai aap ko gazal wa us kaa metre pasand aaye!
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«Reply #10 on: June 28, 2009, 08:40:06 AM »
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Bahut Khoobsurat Gazal Hai Abd Ji.Bahut Khoob. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #11 on: June 28, 2009, 08:47:47 AM »
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Bahoot hi Shandaar.. Bahoot hi khusurat ghazal likhi hai aapne..e behad khoob!
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«Reply #12 on: June 28, 2009, 12:18:34 PM »
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Quote from: Sammual on June 28, 2009, 08:40:06 AM
Bahut Khoobsurat Gazal Hai Abd Ji.Bahut Khoob. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Bahut-bahut Shukriyah Sammual ji! Mujhey khushee hai aap ko yah gazal pasand aayee!
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«Reply #13 on: June 28, 2009, 12:20:21 PM »
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Quote from: Sophi on June 28, 2009, 08:47:47 AM
Bahoot hi Shandaar.. Bahoot hi khusurat ghazal likhi hai aapne..e behad khoob!

Bahut-bahut Shukriyah Sophi ji! Mujhey khushee huyee. ki, aap ko meyree yah gazal pasand aayee!
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«Reply #14 on: June 28, 2009, 12:27:52 PM »
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Quote from: abdbundeli on June 28, 2009, 05:50:51 AM
Bahut-bahut Shukriyah Rajesh Harish ji/pandit ji!
             - abd bundeli


welcome jee..
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