PAINDE PARDON PE......................................SAINI

by sksaini4 on September 05, 2016, 08:52:00 AM
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Galee meN jab se meree aap aane-jaane lage.
Galee ke but bhee adaaoN se gungunaane lage.

“Parinde pardoN pe jab ghosle banaane lage.”
Ujadte pedoN kee aankhoN se aansoo aane lage.

Hameshaa aap to aage rahe zamaane se.
Ye aap kab se zamaane se maat khaane lage.

Ve haath jinko banaayaa thaa qaum kee taaqat.
Vahee ye haath haiN jo bastiyaaN jalaane lage.

Nazar se aaj nazar kaa huaa jo takraanaa .
Khayaal us ghadee kea ab to gudgudaane lage.

Sune jo aapke gham aapko taS****e de.
Vo dost kyaa hai jo bas sun ke muskuraane lage.

Ye kaisee aaj kee tahzeeb ho gayee saahib.
Bhale vo din the hamaare hee yaad aane lage.

MaiN aajkal kee nashishtoN meN aataa-jaataa naheeN.
Ghazal ke log bhee ab chutkule sunaane lage.

Badalte waqt ne tujhko bhee badlaa hai ‘saini’.
Tere kalaam bhee raste se dagmagaane lage.

Dr Surendra Saini

गली में जब से मेरी आप आने-जाने लगे |
गली के बुत भी अदाओं से गुनगुनाने लगे ||

“परिंदे पर्दों पे जब घोसले बनाने लगे |”
उजड़ते पेड़ों की आँखों से आंसू आने लगे ||

हमेशा आप तो आगे रहे ज़माने से |
ये आप कब से ज़माने से मात खाने लगे ||

वे हाथ जिनको बनाया था कौम की ताक़त |
वही ये हाथ हैं जो बस्तियां जलाने लगे ||

नज़र से आज नज़र का हुआ जो टकराना |
ख़याल उस घड़ी के अब तो गुदगुदाने लगे ||

सुने जो आपके ग़म आपको तसल्ली दे |
वो दोस्त क्या है जो बस सुनके मुस्कुराने लगे ||

ये कैसी आज की तहज़ीब हो गयी साहिब |
भले वो दिन थे हमारे ही याद आने लगे ||

मैं आजकल की नशिश्तों में आता-जाता नहीं |
ग़ज़ल के लोग भी अब चुटकुले सुनाने लगे ||

बदलते वक़्त ने तुझको भी बदला है ‘सैनी’ |
तेरे कलाम भी रस्ते से डगमगाने लगे ||

डा० सुरेन्द्र सैनी
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«Reply #1 on: September 05, 2016, 02:15:30 PM »
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Hameshaa aap to aage rahe zamaane se.
Ye aap kab se zamaane se maat khaane lage.

Ve haath jinko banaayaa thaa qaum kee taaqat.
Vahee ye haath haiN jo bastiyaaN jalaane lage.

waah waah waah saari ghazal hee bahut khoobsurat hai Saini Sahib, phir bhi ooper ke do sher to bas waah hee waaaaaaaaaaaah +RAU baad mein add hogaa)
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«Reply #2 on: September 05, 2016, 02:45:18 PM »
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Bas waaaaah hi waah Bahot khoob  Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #3 on: September 06, 2016, 09:49:19 AM »
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«Reply #4 on: September 08, 2016, 03:16:58 AM »
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Ve haath jinko banaayaa thaa qaum kee taaqat.
Vahee ye haath haiN jo bastiyaaN jalaane lage.

Bahut Khub Sir Ji  Applause



Shad o Aabaad  Rahiye


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«Reply #5 on: September 09, 2016, 09:52:21 PM »
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aapka yaha koi jod nahi sir.... ab kam hi likhte hai... par jab bhi likhte hai kya khoob likhte hain.... mashaallah!!
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