Pani Pani Ban Behti hai Aag Mohabbat mein

by p1dhillon on June 08, 2010, 04:27:20 AM
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Ayina hoga jo toot gaya museebat mein
Dil na hoga jo toot gaya mohabbat mein

Kyun wo kartey hain mohabbat jo toot jatey hain
kyun ho parwana jal sakey na jo mohabbat mein

kanton mein khil sakey wahi to gulab hota hai
Andherey karey jo noor wo shama hai mohabbat mein

Ho jaye ishq husn se badi baat nahin koi
Jab husn doob jaye kya karein.ge mohabbat mein

Behta hai lahu ishq mein ashq ban ban kar
Pani pani ban behti hai aag mohabbat mein
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«Reply #1 on: June 10, 2010, 10:27:25 AM »
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Wah janab, likhte rahiye aur aage baRhte rahiye.

Ayina hoga jo toot gaya museebat mein
Dil na hoga jo toot gaya mohabbat mein

Kyun wo kartey hain mohabbat jo toot jatey hain
kyun ho parwana jal sakey na jo mohabbat mein

kanton mein khil sakey wahi to gulab hota hai
Andherey karey jo noor wo shama hai mohabbat mein

Ho jaye ishq husn se badi baat nahin koi
Jab husn doob jaye kya karein.ge mohabbat mein

Behta hai lahu ishq mein ashq ban ban kar
Pani pani ban behti hai aag mohabbat mein

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«Reply #2 on: June 14, 2010, 04:37:27 PM »
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Aap ne jo haunslaafzai ki Waquif Ansari Sahib us ke liye shuqriya. AAp jaise qadrdaan hi likhne aur aagey badhne ka raasta dikhate hain. Aap ka mashwara sar-aankhon par. Shukriya. P1dhillon
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«Reply #3 on: June 14, 2010, 04:42:54 PM »
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bahut khoob dhillon ji. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Ayina hoga jo toot gaya museebat mein
Dil na hoga jo toot gaya mohabbat mein

Kyun wo kartey hain mohabbat jo toot jatey hain
kyun ho parwana jal sakey na jo mohabbat mein

kanton mein khil sakey wahi to gulab hota hai
Andherey karey jo noor wo shama hai mohabbat mein

Ho jaye ishq husn se badi baat nahin koi
Jab husn doob jaye kya karein.ge mohabbat mein

Behta hai lahu ishq mein ashq ban ban kar
Pani pani ban behti hai aag mohabbat mein

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«Reply #4 on: June 14, 2010, 05:00:31 PM »
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Suresh Sangwan Sahib, bahut bahut shukriya aap ne jo apna keemti waqt nikal kar merey liye likha. Shukriya ek baar phir. P1 Dhillon 
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«Reply #5 on: June 15, 2010, 12:24:41 AM »
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Bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne Dhillon ji... aapne bahut khoobsurti se ek ek shabd joda hai... bahut khoob...!!!
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«Reply #6 on: June 15, 2010, 08:16:06 AM »
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«Reply #7 on: June 15, 2010, 10:40:00 PM »
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acha kaha hai..........keep it up........................


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«Reply #8 on: June 25, 2010, 10:34:13 AM »
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Aslam Sahib,
I am grateful for your appreciation. Many thanks for your encouragement.

Dhillon.
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«Reply #9 on: June 25, 2010, 10:37:01 AM »
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Ayina hoga jo toot gaya museebat mein
Dil na hoga jo toot gaya mohabbat mein

Kyun wo kartey hain mohabbat jo toot jatey hain
kyun ho parwana jal sakey na jo mohabbat mein

kanton mein khil sakey wahi to gulab hota hai
Andherey karey jo noor wo shama hai mohabbat mein

Ho jaye ishq husn se badi baat nahin koi
Jab husn doob jaye kya karein.ge mohabbat mein

Behta hai lahu ishq mein ashq ban ban kar
Pani pani ban behti hai aag mohabbat mein


Wah! Dhillon Ji Bahut khoob
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«Reply #10 on: June 25, 2010, 10:40:53 AM »
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Khwaish  Ji,
Kindly accept my grateful thanks for your appreciation. Dhillon.
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«Reply #11 on: June 25, 2010, 10:44:52 AM »
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Rajesh Harish Sahib
Aap ka bahut 2 shukriya. Aap ki ek 2 Wah bahut keemti hai. Shukriya. Dhillon.
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«Reply #12 on: June 25, 2010, 10:52:03 AM »
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Klaskar Ji,
Aap ne jo taareef ki mere liye bahut keemti hai. Bahut bahut shukriya. Dhillon
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