PANKHUDI SE GULAAB NIKLE GA..............HASAN

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Jab   woh   khil   kar   Gulaab   nikle ga ,
Ek    mukammal   Shabab    nikle  ga
  
Jab   khad - 0 - khaal   haiN   yeh  Bachpan  kay ,
Husn   bhee    La'jawaab   nikle  ga

Jaan   laynay   lagee   hai   Angdaai ,
Dheere - dheeray   shabab   nikle  ga

Zer - e - lab   jab   woh   muskuraay'eNge ,
Pankhudi   say   Gulab   nikle  ga

Hum   to   samjhe   thhe   Hum-qadam   haiN   humm ,
Kya   khabar   thhee   yeh   khwaab   nikle ga

Baat   nikle  gi   jab   Wafaa'oN   kee ,
Tumm   pe   hi   kuchh   Hisaab   nikle ga

Bus   chamak   deikh ,  iss ke   qadd pe   na jaa ,
Zarre   say   Aaftaab   nikle ga

Aye   'Hasan' ,  ChaudhweeN   ki   raat   hai  Aaj ,
Sabr   karr ,  Maahtaab   nikle ga[/color]
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«Reply #1 on: November 03, 2011, 08:20:04 AM »
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Jab   woh   khil   kar   Gulaab   nikle ga ,
Ek    mukammal   Shabab    nikle  ga Applause Applause Applause
 
Jab   khad - 0 - khaal   haiN   yeh  Bachpan  kay ,
Husn   bhee    La'jawaab   nikle  ga Applause Applause Applause

Jaan   laynay   lagee   hai   Angdaai ,
Dheere - dheeray   shabab   nikle  ga

Zer - e - lab   jab   woh   muskuraay'eNge ,
Pankhudi   say   Gulab   nikle  ga
 Applause Applause Applause Applause
Hum   to   samjhe   thhe   Hum-qadam   haiN   humm ,
Kya   khabar   thhee   yeh   khwaab   nikle ga

Baat   nikle  gi   jab   Wafaa'oN   kee ,
Tumm   pe   hi   kuchh   Hisaab   nikle ga Applause Applause Applause Applause

Bus   chamak   deikh ,  iss ke   qadd pe   na jaa ,
Zarre   say   Aaftaab   nikle ga Applause Applause

Aye   'Hasan' ,  ChaudhweeN   ki   raat   hai  Aaj ,
Sabr   karr ,  Maahtaab   nikle ga[/color]
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«Reply #2 on: November 03, 2011, 09:05:35 AM »
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baat nilegi jab vafaaoN ki
tum pe hi hisaab niklegaa

waah hasan saheb ye sher haasile ghazal hai.dili mubaarakbaad
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«Reply #3 on: November 03, 2011, 09:06:01 AM »
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Jab   woh   khil   kar   Gulaab   nikle ga ,
Ek    mukammal   Shabab    nikle  ga
 
Jab   khad - 0 - khaal   haiN   yeh  Bachpan  kay ,
Husn   bhee    La'jawaab   nikle  ga

Jaan   laynay   lagee   hai   Angdaai ,
Dheere - dheeray   shabab   nikle  ga

Zer - e - lab   jab   woh   muskuraay'eNge ,
Pankhudi   say   Gulab   nikle  ga

Hum   to   samjhe   thhe   Hum-qadam   haiN   humm ,
Kya   khabar   thhee   yeh   khwaab   nikle ga

Baat   nikle  gi   jab   Wafaa'oN   kee ,
Tumm   pe   hi   kuchh   Hisaab   nikle ga

Bus   chamak   deikh ,  iss ke   qadd pe   na jaa ,
Zarre   say   Aaftaab   nikle ga

Aye   'Hasan' ,  ChaudhweeN   ki   raat   hai  Aaj ,
Sabr   karr ,  Maahtaab   nikle ga[/color]

Hasan Sahab

Bahut khoob Hasan sahab
Bada kaatilana andaaj hai janab.Sabhi aashaar jaanleva hai... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #4 on: November 03, 2011, 09:08:53 AM »
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Jab   woh   khil   kar   Gulaab   nikle ga ,
Ek    mukammal   Shabab    nikle  ga
  
Jab   khad - 0 - khaal   haiN   yeh  Bachpan  kay ,
Husn   bhee    La'jawaab   nikle  ga

Jaan   laynay   lagee   hai   Angdaai ,
Dheere - dheeray   shabab   nikle  ga

Zer - e - lab   jab   woh   muskuraay'eNge ,
Pankhudi   say   Gulab   nikle  ga

Hum   to   samjhe   thhe   Hum-qadam   haiN   humm ,
Kya   khabar   thhee   yeh   khwaab   nikle ga

Baat   nikle  gi   jab   Wafaa'oN   kee ,
Tumm   pe   hi   kuchh   Hisaab   nikle ga

Bus   chamak   deikh ,  iss ke   qadd pe   na jaa ,
Zarre   say   Aaftaab   nikle ga

Aye   'Hasan' ,  ChaudhweeN   ki   raat   hai  Aaj ,
Sabr   karr ,  Maahtaab   nikle ga[/color]


Waah Waah Waah!!!!

Kya kehne Siddiqui Ji..Lajaawab!!

bahut bahut khoob Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #5 on: November 03, 2011, 10:42:57 AM »
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Hasan Sahab,

Aaj subh se hee ek she'r zubaan par baar baar aa raha tha.

Aur jab aapki ghazal dekhi to matle men bhi usee gulaab
ka zikra tha...

Bahut khoob...she'r bhi bahut achchhe hue..waah waah..

Yoon to sabhee she'r bahut achchhe hain likin ek she'r  

"baat niklegee jab wafaaoN kee
 tum pe hee kuchh hisaab niklega"

sabse jiyaadah pasand aaya.

Ab, Aseer Sahab ka woh she'r jiski main baat kar raha tha

"aai hawaa ke sar-fire jhhoNke tujhe kuchh hai khabar
 shaakh se ik phool naazuk toot kar gir jaayega"

                                           --- Aseer
 
Mubaarak ho! Aglee post ke liye shubhkaamnaayen.

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«Reply #6 on: November 03, 2011, 12:55:25 PM »
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Bahut Khoob Hasan Sahab
Bahut Hi KAmal Sher Kahen Hai Aapne
Dil Se Daaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaad
Mubark ho
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #7 on: November 04, 2011, 03:57:07 AM »
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Suresh ji,tah e dil se shukriya.
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«Reply #8 on: November 04, 2011, 09:00:47 AM »
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Quote from: sksaini4 on November 03, 2011, 09:05:35 AM
baat nilegi jab vafaaoN ki
tum pe hi hisaab niklegaa

waah hasan saheb ye sher haasile ghazal hai.dili mubaarakbaad
Saini saheb,Hausla afzai ke liye bahut mashkoor hoon.Khush rahiye.duago,Hasan
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«Reply #9 on: November 04, 2011, 11:53:54 AM »
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bht bht khoob hasan saheb...
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«Reply #10 on: November 04, 2011, 03:13:49 PM »
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mkv saheb,shukriya.Ash'aar to aashiqana kahne ki koshish ki thhi,lekin aapke qatilana tabsiron ne waqai hamein qaatilon ke darmiyan khada kar diya.Iss jaanleva andaz ke liye daad na dena nashukri hogi.HASAN
Quote from: mkv on November 03, 2011, 09:06:01 AM
Hasan Sahab

Bahut khoob Hasan sahab
Bada kaatilana andaaj hai janab.Sabhi aashaar jaanleva hai... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #11 on: November 05, 2011, 03:53:00 AM »
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Quote from: khwaish on November 03, 2011, 09:08:53 AM

Waah Waah Waah!!!!

Kya kehne Siddiqui Ji..Lajaawab!!

bahut bahut khoob Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Khwaish ji.Ghazal padhne aur hausla afzai ke liye bahut bahut shukriya.Khush rahiye.HASAN
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«Reply #12 on: November 05, 2011, 10:44:35 AM »
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Hasan Sahab,

Aaj subh se hee ek she'r zubaan par baar baar aa raha tha.

Aur jab aapki ghazal dekhi to matle men bhi usee gulaab
ka zikra tha...

Bahut khoob...she'r bhi bahut achchhe hue..waah waah..

Yoon to sabhee she'r bahut achchhe hain likin ek she'r 

"baat niklegee jab wafaaoN kee
 tum pe hee kuchh hisaab niklega"

sabse jiyaadah pasand aaya.

Ab, Aseer Sahab ka woh she'r jiski main baat kar raha tha

"aai hawaa ke sar-fire jhhoNke tujhe kuchh hai khabar
 shaakh se ik phool naazuk toot kar gir jaayega"

                                           --- Aseer
 
Mubaarak ho! Aglee post ke liye shubhkaamnaayen.

Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb' 

   

Satish ji,khoobsurat tabsire aur barmahal khoobsurat she'r ke liye bahut bahut shukriya.Hasan
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«Reply #13 on: November 05, 2011, 03:34:23 PM »
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 manzil e ishq ji,bahut bahut shukriya.Hasan

 Thankyou !
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«Reply #14 on: November 05, 2011, 03:38:50 PM »
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Quote from: Sanjeev kash on November 03, 2011, 12:55:25 PM
Bahut Khoob Hasan Sahab
Bahut Hi KAmal Sher Kahen Hai Aapne
Dil Se Daaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaad
Mubark ho
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Sanjeev Kash ji.Hausla afzai ke liye bahut shukrguzar hoon.Khush rahiye.HASAN
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