PANKHUDI SE GULAAB NIKLE GA..............HASAN

by F.H.SIDDIQUI on November 03, 2011, 07:07:05 AM
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«Reply #15 on: November 05, 2011, 10:58:00 PM »
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Jab   woh   khil   kar   Gulaab   nikle ga ,
Ek    mukammal   Shabab    nikle  ga
 
Jab   khad - 0 - khaal   haiN   yeh  Bachpan  kay ,
Husn   bhee    La'jawaab   nikle  ga

Jaan   laynay   lagee   hai   Angdaai ,
Dheere - dheeray   shabab   nikle  ga

Zer - e - lab   jab   woh   muskuraay'eNge ,
Pankhudi   say   Gulab   nikle  ga

Hum   to   samjhe   thhe   Hum-qadam   haiN   humm ,
Kya   khabar   thhee   yeh   khwaab   nikle ga

Baat   nikle  gi   jab   Wafaa'oN   kee ,
Tumm   pe   hi   kuchh   Hisaab   nikle ga

Bus   chamak   deikh ,  iss ke   qadd pe   na jaa ,
Zarre   say   Aaftaab   nikle ga

Aye   'Hasan' ,  ChaudhweeN   ki   raat   hai  Aaj ,
Sabr   karr ,  Maahtaab   nikle ga[/color]
Siddiqui saaheh aap ke kalaam phir hume chounkaa diyaa........kitani khoobsooratee se lafzoN kaa khel khelte haiN ...bahut khoob!
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«Reply #16 on: November 06, 2011, 05:45:54 AM »
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Quote from: Shihab on November 03, 2011, 05:17:49 PM
hmhmmh bahut khub hasan sahab...
Ab aisi baaten to aap jaisa jauhari hi
Kar sakta hai...kyon ki asli parakh to
Usse hi hoti hai...khair

Shad o aabad rahiye...

Shihab

Shihab mian,shukriya...Magar ye aakhir mein KHAIR ki khoob rahi.Lagta hai abhi khair naheen.Khair ,agli post per duaa-e-khair ka talabgaar rahunga.Kanjoosi mat kijiyega.Khair andesh,HASAN
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«Reply #17 on: November 06, 2011, 11:39:00 AM »
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Quote from: mamta bajpai on November 05, 2011, 10:58:00 PM
Siddiqui saaheh aap ke kalaam phir hume chounkaa diyaa........kitani khoobsooratee se lafzoN kaa khel khelte haiN ...bahut khoob!

Mamta ji.Bahut mamnoon hoon.Itne khoobsurat tabsiron se hauslon mein khud ba khud tawanai aa jaati hai.Bahut shukriya.Hasan
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«Reply #18 on: November 06, 2011, 05:09:41 PM »
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 Applause Applause
Hasan sahab,bahut achhi ghazal hai.sabhi sher bhut umda hai.Maqte bahut sada aur khoobsurat hai.
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«Reply #19 on: November 07, 2011, 07:23:48 AM »
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Quote from: Qais on November 06, 2011, 05:09:41 PM
Applause Applause
Hasan sahab,bahut achhi ghazal hai.sabhi sher bhut umda hai.Maqte bahut sada aur khoobsurat hai.

Qais ji,ghazal parhne aur hausla afzai ke liye bahut bahut shukriya.
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«Reply #20 on: November 08, 2011, 07:48:47 AM »
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Quote from: Shihab on November 06, 2011, 06:04:04 PM
janaab hasan sahab mafi chahta hun
Mera maksad aapka dil dukhana nahi tha bas
Woh kya hai na ki kahin baar aap aisa kuch
Likh jaate hain ki samajh nahi aata aapki tareef
Karun bhi to aakhir kaise karun..khair se mera
Matalab wohi tha phir bhi aapko bura laga ho
To maafi chahta hun sab meri kam ilmi ki wajah
Se hua...

Shad o aabad rahiye...

Shihab

Nahin Shihab saheb,Mujhe qatai bura nahin laga.Har shakhs ki apni soch hoti hai aur eik baar aap ne apna kalaam sab ke saamne pesh kar diya to har shakhs ko uss per comment karne ka akhtiyaar hai.Aur main hamesha issko welcome karta hoon .Kabhi bhi main ne koi tanqeed ko taalne ki koshish nahin ki.Bulki kuchh sikhne ki koshish ki hai.Ab raha sawaal kuch qism ke ashaar ka, sharaab o shabab ki baatein,to yeh ghazal ka laazmi juz hai.Ghazal ka lughvi maani bhi yahi ishara karte hain.Aur agar  ghazal ko mahez bahut sanjeeda , philosophical ash'aar tak hi mahdood rakhna hai to YO ki beshtar Categories jin mein posts ko classify kiya  gayaa hai be-maani ho jaayeingi.Yehi wajah hai ki Ziyada sanjeeda ash'aar per mabni ghzlein kabhi kabhi hi post karta hoon...Ummeed karta hoon aap ka taawwun,constructive criticism,ke saath milta rahega.HASAN
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«Reply #21 on: July 20, 2013, 04:41:04 PM »
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«Reply #22 on: July 20, 2013, 07:09:30 PM »
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wah wah wahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh Janab Hasan Saheb bahut khoobsurat ghazal se nawaazah aapne wah wah wahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh hhhhhhh
Quote from: F.H.SIDDIQUI on November 03, 2011, 07:07:05 AM

Jab   woh   khil   kar   Gulaab   nikle ga ,
Ek    mukammal   Shabab    nikle  ga
 
Jab   khad - 0 - khaal   haiN   yeh  Bachpan  kay ,
Husn   bhee    La'jawaab   nikle  ga

Jaan   laynay   lagee   hai   Angdaai ,
Dheere - dheeray   shabab   nikle  ga

Zer - e - lab   jab   woh   muskuraay'eNge ,
Pankhudi   say   Gulab   nikle  ga

Hum   to   samjhe   thhe   Hum-qadam   haiN   humm ,
Kya   khabar   thhee   yeh   khwaab   nikle ga

Baat   nikle  gi   jab   Wafaa'oN   kee ,
Tumm   pe   hi   kuchh   Hisaab   nikle ga

Bus   chamak   deikh ,  iss ke   qadd pe   na jaa ,
Zarre   say   Aaftaab   nikle ga

Aye   'Hasan' ,  ChaudhweeN   ki   raat   hai  Aaj ,
Sabr   karr ,  Maahtaab   nikle ga[/color]
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«Reply #23 on: July 30, 2013, 10:51:31 PM »
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Quote from: waquif ansari on July 20, 2013, 07:09:30 PM
wah wah wahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh Janab Hasan Saheb bahut khoobsurat ghazal se nawaazah aapne wah wah wahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh hhhhhhh
waquif bhai  adaab aur shukriya.bahut khushi hoti hai jab aap is website par aate hain . magar guest ki tarah hi kyuun . yeh aap ki purani site hai aur aap ke maddaah yahan bahut hain.ummeed hai jald aap apne khubsurat kalaam se is bazm ko nawazeinge.
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«Reply #24 on: July 30, 2013, 10:57:15 PM »
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Waah Waah Bahut Khoob.
Quote from: F.H.SIDDIQUI on November 03, 2011, 07:07:05 AM

Jab   woh   khil   kar   Gulaab   nikle ga ,
Ek    mukammal   Shabab    nikle  ga
 
Jab   khad - 0 - khaal   haiN   yeh  Bachpan  kay ,
Husn   bhee    La'jawaab   nikle  ga

Jaan   laynay   lagee   hai   Angdaai ,
Dheere - dheeray   shabab   nikle  ga

Zer - e - lab   jab   woh   muskuraay'eNge ,
Pankhudi   say   Gulab   nikle  ga

Hum   to   samjhe   thhe   Hum-qadam   haiN   humm ,
Kya   khabar   thhee   yeh   khwaab   nikle ga

Baat   nikle  gi   jab   Wafaa'oN   kee ,
Tumm   pe   hi   kuchh   Hisaab   nikle ga

Bus   chamak   deikh ,  iss ke   qadd pe   na jaa ,
Zarre   say   Aaftaab   nikle ga

Aye   'Hasan' ,  ChaudhweeN   ki   raat   hai  Aaj ,
Sabr   karr ,  Maahtaab   nikle ga[/color]
Hasanji.
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«Reply #25 on: August 17, 2013, 12:29:22 AM »
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Quote from: Advo.RavinderaRavi on July 30, 2013, 10:57:15 PM
Waah Waah Bahut Khoob.Hasanji.
Ravinder ji , Bahut shukrguzar hoon.duaaein.
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«Reply #26 on: August 17, 2013, 01:01:36 AM »
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bahut bahut khoob waah
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«Reply #27 on: August 17, 2013, 01:22:19 AM »
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«Reply #28 on: August 18, 2013, 07:56:27 PM »
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is behad naazuk ghazal pe sir ji meri dilli daad qubool farmaayeN, aur mehfil ko yuNhi aur umda kalaamoN se nawaazte raheN...!!
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«Reply #29 on: August 20, 2013, 02:06:32 AM »
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