Parchaai bana loon................................................Aqsh

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Sochti hooN tumko, tumhi se chura looN
BahoN meiN jakadhkar, bas apna bana looN

Jis par tumhara, naam likha hua hai
Us kagaz ko, apne hontoN se laga looN

Chupakar tumhe, apne dil meiN kahiN
Har ek buri, nazar se bacha looN

Tumhare har ek, dard ko gale lagakar
Apne khwaboN ko, haqeeqat bana looN

Tumhare laboN ki, madhoshi meiN
Apne armaaN, apni wafa saja looN

"Aqsh" se wabasta, ho jaao is qadar
Ke tumko mai, apni parchai bana looN
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«Reply #1 on: December 22, 2012, 11:31:56 AM »
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Quote from: aqsh on December 22, 2012, 11:24:11 AM
Sochti hooN tumko, tumhi se chura looN
BahoN meiN jakadhkar, bas apna bana looN

Jis par tumhara, naam likha hua hai
Us kagaz ko, apne hontoN se laga looN

Chupakar tumhe, apne dil meiN kahiN
Har ek buri, nazar se bacha looN

Tumhare har ek, dard ko gale lagakar
Apne khwaboN ko, haqeeqat bana looN

Tumhare laboN ki, madhoshi meiN
Apne armaaN, apni wafa saja looN

"Aqsh" se wabasta, ho jaao is qadar
Ke tumko mai, apni parchai bana looN
Wah wah lajab aqsh ji
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«Reply #2 on: December 22, 2012, 11:33:53 AM »
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Quote from: sahal on December 22, 2012, 11:31:56 AM
Wah wah lajab aqsh ji
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thnx sahal
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«Reply #3 on: December 22, 2012, 11:39:47 AM »
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Kyaa mast poetry likhi hai.
Mazaa aa gaya.
Etni romantic gazal. Dil kar rahaa hai baar-baar padoN.
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«Reply #4 on: December 22, 2012, 11:40:47 AM »
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Kyaa mast poetry likhi hai.
Mazaa aa gaya.
Etni romantic gazal. Dil kar rahaa hai baar-baar padoN.
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«Reply #5 on: December 22, 2012, 11:47:01 AM »
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Quote from: Masoom Shahzada on December 22, 2012, 11:40:47 AM
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Kyaa mast poetry likhi hai.
Mazaa aa gaya.
Etni romantic gazal. Dil kar rahaa hai baar-baar padoN.
thank you masoom
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«Reply #6 on: December 22, 2012, 11:48:52 AM »
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Aqsh Jee Aadaab!


WaaH jee waaH waaH kia kahne waaH bahut khooob .. Badi hi pyaari
aur umdaa kalaam kahi hai ... behad khoobsurat ahsaas O khayaal
aur umdaa adaygi... Usual Smile


Is khoobsurat kalaam par humari dheroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul
lijiye...


Likhate rahiye... Aate rahiye..
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda hafez.. Usual Smile
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«Reply #7 on: December 22, 2012, 11:49:33 AM »
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Sochti hooN tumko, tumhi se chura looN
BahoN meiN jakadhkar, bas apna bana looN   Applause

Jis par tumhara, naam likha hua hai
Us kagaz ko, apne hontoN se laga looN  Applause

Chupakar tumhe, apne dil meiN kahiN
Har ek buri, nazar se bacha looN  Applause Applause Applause

Tumhare har ek, dard ko gale lagakar
Apne khwaboN ko, haqeeqat bana looN  Applause Applause

Tumhare laboN ki, madhoshi meiN
Apne armaaN, apni wafa saja looN  Applause

"Aqsh" se wabasta, ho jaao is qadar
Ke tumko mai, apni parchai bana looN  Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP

Bahut accha likha hai aapne..
beautiful..
taaliyaN to bajengi..par
inki aavaaj se rukiyega naheen..
Just keep moving ahead.
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«Reply #8 on: December 22, 2012, 11:54:57 AM »
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Quote from: aqsh on December 22, 2012, 11:24:11 AM
Sochti hooN tumko, tumhi se chura looN
BahoN meiN jakadhkar, bas apna bana looN

Jis par tumhara, naam likha hua hai
Us kagaz ko, apne hontoN se laga looN

Chupakar tumhe, apne dil meiN kahiN
Har ek buri, nazar se bacha looN

Tumhare har ek, dard ko gale lagakar
Apne khwaboN ko, haqeeqat bana looN

Tumhare laboN ki, madhoshi meiN
Apne armaaN, apni wafa saja looN

"Aqsh" se wabasta, ho jaao is qadar
Ke tumko mai, apni parchai bana looN


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«Reply #9 on: December 22, 2012, 11:59:57 AM »
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excellent excellent excellent excellent
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«Reply #10 on: December 22, 2012, 12:44:53 PM »
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bahut hi umda
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«Reply #11 on: December 22, 2012, 12:50:32 PM »
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BAHUT KHOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOB
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«Reply #12 on: December 22, 2012, 03:22:38 PM »
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Quote from: ParwaaZ on December 22, 2012, 11:48:52 AM
Aqsh Jee Aadaab!


WaaH jee waaH waaH kia kahne waaH bahut khooob .. Badi hi pyaari
aur umdaa kalaam kahi hai ... behad khoobsurat ahsaas O khayaal
aur umdaa adaygi... Usual Smile


Is khoobsurat kalaam par humari dheroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul
lijiye...


Likhate rahiye... Aate rahiye..
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda hafez.. Usual Smile
bahut bahut shukriya apka parwaz jee
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«Reply #13 on: December 22, 2012, 03:23:15 PM »
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Quote from: mkv on December 22, 2012, 11:49:33 AM
Sochti hooN tumko, tumhi se chura looN
BahoN meiN jakadhkar, bas apna bana looN   Applause

Jis par tumhara, naam likha hua hai
Us kagaz ko, apne hontoN se laga looN  Applause

Chupakar tumhe, apne dil meiN kahiN
Har ek buri, nazar se bacha looN  Applause Applause Applause

Tumhare har ek, dard ko gale lagakar
Apne khwaboN ko, haqeeqat bana looN  Applause Applause

Tumhare laboN ki, madhoshi meiN
Apne armaaN, apni wafa saja looN  Applause

"Aqsh" se wabasta, ho jaao is qadar
Ke tumko mai, apni parchai bana looN  Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP

Bahut accha likha hai aapne..
beautiful..
taaliyaN to bajengi..par
inki aavaaj se rukiyega naheen..
Just keep moving ahead.
thank you so so soooooooooooo much mukesh jee
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«Reply #14 on: December 22, 2012, 03:23:43 PM »
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Quote from: qalb on December 22, 2012, 11:54:57 AM

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thank you soo much qalb jee
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