PARDES MEIN SAAJAN KAMAANE MEINLAGE HON GE...........HASAN

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Woh   Haal - e - Dil ,  saheli   ko ,  sunaane   meiN   lage   hoN ge  ,
Hain   kya   Shikwe - gile   humse ,   bataane   meiN   lage   hoN ge


Siyahh   gesoo  ,  Lab - o - Rukhsaar  ,  aur  yeh  til   dahaane  ka  ,
Khuda   ko , din  bahut  ,  tum   ko   banaane   meiN   lage   hoN ge


YahaaN   tanhaiyaaN   haiN   ,   aur   Aah - e - Sard    Sajnee   kee  ,
WahaaN   Pardes    meiN    Saajan   kamaane    meiN   lage   hoN   ge


Kiya   thha   waada   pakka  , par   naheeN  aaye  haiN  woh   abb tak  ,
Bahaana  ,  phir   naya   ko'ee  ,   banaane    meiN   lage   hoN   ge


Saveray   se  , 'Hasan'  ka   kuchh  pata   hai   naa   thhikaana   ha  ,
KaheeN   baithhe   huay   ,  GhazleiN   sunaane   meiN  lage   hoN  ge
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«Reply #1 on: December 03, 2012, 06:19:54 AM »
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waah waah bahut khoob hasan bhai dhrobn daat
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«Reply #2 on: December 03, 2012, 06:19:55 AM »
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Bahot khubsurat ghazal kahi hai Hasan Sahab. 2nd sher ke mutalliq kahna chahunga ke KUN-FAYAKUN Khuda ki ek shift hai.
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«Reply #3 on: December 03, 2012, 06:23:07 AM »
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Woh   Haal - e - Dil ,  saheli   ko ,  sunaane   meiN   lage   hoN ge  ,
Hain   kya   Shikwe - gile   humse ,   bataane   meiN   lage   hoN ge


Siyahh   gesoo  ,  Lab - o - Rukhsaar  ,  aur  yeh  til   dahaane  ka  ,
Khuda   ko , din  bahut  ,  tum   ko   banaane   meiN   lage   hoN ge icon_scratch icon_scratch icon_scratch


YahaaN   tanhaiyaaN   haiN   ,   aur   Aah - e - Sard    Sajnee   kee  ,
WahaaN   Pardes    meiN    Saajan   kamaane    meiN   lage   hoN   ge


Kiya   thha   waada   pakka  , par   naheeN  aaye  haiN  woh   abb tak  ,
Bahaana  ,  phir   naya   ko'ee  ,   banaane    meiN   lage   hoN   ge


Saveray   se  , 'Hasan'  ka   kuchh  pata   hai   naa   thhikaana   ha  ,
KaheeN   baithhe   huay   ,  GhazleiN   sunaane   meiN  lage   hoN  ge


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«Reply #4 on: December 03, 2012, 06:36:04 AM »
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wah wah wah wah wah kya baat hai, khas taur se ye shair to kamaal hai


Siyahh gesoo , Lab - o - Rukhsaar , aur yeh til dahaane ka

Khuda ko , din bahut , tum ko banaane meiN lage hoN ge,

dherroon daad qubool kareN.....
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«Reply #5 on: December 03, 2012, 07:23:03 AM »
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Woh   Haal - e - Dil ,  saheli   ko ,  sunaane   meiN   lage   hoN ge  ,
Hain   kya   Shikwe - gile   humse ,   bataane   meiN   lage   hoN ge  Applause Applause Applause Applause


Siyahh   gesoo  ,  Lab - o - Rukhsaar  ,  aur  yeh  til   dahaane  ka  ,
Khuda   ko , din  bahut  ,  tum   ko   banaane   meiN   lage   hoN ge  Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP


YahaaN   tanhaiyaaN   haiN   ,   aur   Aah - e - Sard    Sajnee   kee  ,
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Kiya   thha   waada   pakka  , par   naheeN  aaye  haiN  woh   abb tak  ,
Bahaana  ,  phir   naya   ko'ee  ,   banaane    meiN   lage   hoN   ge  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley BAHUT KHOOB


Saveray   se  , 'Hasan'  ka   kuchh  pata   hai   naa   thhikaana   ha  ,
KaheeN   baithhe   huay   ,  GhazleiN   sunaane   meiN  lage   hoN  ge
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Behad umda  ashaar kahe hai Sir
Maqta..kya kahne..jo pal me mahaul badal de
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DAAD qubool karen
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«Reply #7 on: December 03, 2012, 08:09:19 AM »
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hats off to you hasan sir, bahut hi lajawab peshkash rahi
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«Reply #8 on: December 03, 2012, 08:17:07 AM »
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Bahut shaandaar ghazal kahi hai Janab F.H. Siddiqui Saheb aapne. Apne doosre sher ko phir se dekh lijiyega...


Woh   Haal - e - Dil ,  saheli   ko ,  sunaane   meiN   lage   hoN ge  ,
Hain   kya   Shikwe - gile   humse ,   bataane   meiN   lage   hoN ge


Siyahh   gesoo  ,  Lab - o - Rukhsaar  ,  aur  yeh  til   dahaane  ka  ,
Khuda   ko , din  bahut  ,  tum   ko   banaane   meiN   lage   hoN ge


YahaaN   tanhaiyaaN   haiN   ,   aur   Aah - e - Sard    Sajnee   kee  ,
WahaaN   Pardes    meiN    Saajan   kamaane    meiN   lage   hoN   ge


Kiya   thha   waada   pakka  , par   naheeN  aaye  haiN  woh   abb tak  ,
Bahaana  ,  phir   naya   ko'ee  ,   banaane    meiN   lage   hoN   ge


Saveray   se  , 'Hasan'  ka   kuchh  pata   hai   naa   thhikaana   ha  ,
KaheeN   baithhe   huay   ,  GhazleiN   sunaane   meiN  lage   hoN  ge

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«Reply #10 on: December 03, 2012, 12:14:09 PM »
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lajawab kalaam oomda andaz e byan sir,....bohat bohat daad,......
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«Reply #11 on: December 03, 2012, 02:09:01 PM »
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Bahut shaandaar ghazal kahi hai Janab F.H. Siddiqui Saheb aapne. Apne doosre sher ko phir se dekh lijiyega...

Bahut  shukrguzar  hoon , Waquif saheb .... doosre sher mein mazmoon per nazar e saani ki zuroorat hai jaisa ki Riaz saheb ke tabsire se ishara mila hai ya bahr ki taqtee par - bilkhusoos kya alfaaz 'Siyahh' ya 'aur' ke istemaal mein nuqs hai? Barai mehrbani baghair takalluf ke khul kar wazahat farmaayein ,mere sath doosron ki bhi rahnumai hogi.duago,HASAN
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«Reply #12 on: December 03, 2012, 02:33:48 PM »
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«Reply #13 on: December 03, 2012, 03:04:54 PM »
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very very nice...
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«Reply #14 on: December 03, 2012, 06:04:31 PM »
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saini saheb , bahut shukriya.
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