PARDES MEIN SAAJAN KAMAANE MEINLAGE HON GE...........HASAN

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«Reply #30 on: December 06, 2012, 09:36:35 AM »
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Masoom  Shahzada  saheb , bahut shukiya  aur  duaaein.
Quote from: Masoom Shahzada on December 03, 2012, 07:38:32 AM
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«Reply #31 on: December 07, 2012, 04:54:56 AM »
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Quote from: aqsh on December 03, 2012, 08:09:19 AM
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hats off to you hasan sir, bahut hi lajawab peshkash rahi
Thanks  a  lot , Aqsh ji for  your very encouraging  remarks .Blessings.
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«Reply #32 on: December 07, 2012, 06:27:35 AM »
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Quote from: anmolarora on December 03, 2012, 09:49:42 AM
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T H A N K S , A N M O L  JI
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«Reply #33 on: December 08, 2012, 01:27:17 AM »
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Quote from: laaiba on December 03, 2012, 12:14:09 PM
lajawab kalaam oomda andaz e byan sir,....bohat bohat daad,......
LAAIBA JI , BAHUT SHUKRIYA AUR  DUAAEIN.
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«Reply #34 on: December 08, 2012, 05:36:42 AM »
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Dosto , doosre sheir  mein tarmeem ka mashwira hai jiska lihaaz rakhte hue aur asl sher ka mouzoo bhi qaaim rakhte hue sher ke mundarja zail shaklein zahan mein hain . Nazar e saani kar ke ya agar doston ki raai aati hai to unki roshni mein munasib tabdeeli kardoon ga.

Siyahh gesu,lab o rukhsaar aur yeh til dahaane ka ,
Sanamgar  kitne  but aisa  banaane mein lage honge

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Siyaah  gesu, lab o rukhsaar o jism e marmareen tera
Kai Aazar  sanam /(ai but)/ tujhko banaane mein lage honge

Ba'sad shukriya,HASAN
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«Reply #35 on: December 09, 2012, 03:18:25 PM »
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HRIDAY JI , HAUSLA AFZAI KE LIYE BAHUT BAHUT SHUKRIYA . DUAGO , HASAN
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«Reply #36 on: December 09, 2012, 03:32:19 PM »
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Waah Hasan saheb, laajawaab, maza aa gaya padh kar. Hamesha ki tarah ek aur shaandaar ghazal kahi aapne. Ek Rau.
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«Reply #37 on: December 10, 2012, 04:46:43 AM »
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THANKS , RITESH  MODI JI .
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«Reply #38 on: December 10, 2012, 11:05:22 AM »
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Bemisaal!  itne khoobsurat ehsaas aur utni hi dilkash adaayegi.. ke bass waah aur sirf waah kahne ko jee chahta hai!..... bahut Mubarak Hasan Sb!
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«Reply #39 on: December 10, 2012, 12:15:02 PM »
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Hasan Sahab,

waah waah kya she'r kaha hai...bahut khoob.....Raqeeb

"Siyahh gesoo, Lab-o-Rukhsaar, aur yeh til dahaane ka
 Khuda ko, din bahut, tum ko banaane meiN lage hoN ge"
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«Reply #40 on: December 10, 2012, 04:01:23 PM »
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Quote from: vimmi singh on December 03, 2012, 06:18:15 PM
waah waah bahut khoob......
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Vimmi  ji  ,  pasandeedgi  aur  hausla  afzai  ke  liye  bahut  mashkoor hoon . duaaein
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«Reply #41 on: December 11, 2012, 02:49:23 AM »
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Quote from: qadeer_junaid on December 04, 2012, 10:50:24 AM
Mahutram FH Siddiuee Sahib ....Aadab

Kya Tilism Angez ghazal kahi hai wah wah wah ....ik ik sher ne teer ba hadaf ka kaam kiya hai .......Aaj yahan se guzra to aapki ghazal ne ruk liya ,riyaz Sahib aur waquif Sahib ke tabsere bhi parhe aur mustafeed hua yaqeenan dusre sher ko aap ik nazar dekh le'n .....Chunke zameen o asmaan aur uske darmiyan ki tamam chizo'n ko Allah rub ul izzat ne sirf 6 din me banaya hai aur phir ye bhi arz kiya ke inhe banane me maine zara bhi thakkan mahesos nahi ki ..Subhan Allah ...

Jaise ke Aapne Waquif Ansari Sahib se pucha hai ke Lafz Siyah aur Lafz aur ka wazn thik hai ke nahi ......Mai aapni janib se Is baat ka jawab dena chahita hun Chunke Waquif Bhai Shayad masroof hun ...Aapne lafz siyah ko bataur qafiya istemaal nahi kiya hai issiliye Siyah ke HA ko girana jayez hai issi liye ye sahi hai .....Lafz aur ka to sawal hi nahi chunke lafz-e-aur ko qodama ne 2 yaani FAA 21 Yaani Faa-e- ( FAAL ) dono tarhan bandha hai ...Aur jahan tak mai jaanta hun Aapka misra bhr ke mutabiq bilkul rawan dawan hai ......

Al batta Maqte ke misra-e-oola me lafz na 2 harfi ho giya jabke ye ik harfi lena chahiye ...Ab baandhne wale 2 harfi bhi bandhte hain magar usool to 1 harfi ka hi hai ...........Ek baar aapki is shandaar wa jaandaar ghazal pe beshumaar dad o mubarak baad..

Dua go

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mashwire  ke  liye   mamnoon  hoon  .  Hattalimkaan
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«Reply #42 on: December 12, 2012, 07:03:00 AM »
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VIMMI JI , HAUSLA  AFZAI  KE  LIYE  BAHUT  SHUKRIYA  .  DUAAEIN .
Quote from: vimmi singh on December 03, 2012, 06:18:15 PM
waah waah bahut khoob......
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«Reply #43 on: December 13, 2012, 05:31:22 AM »
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Quote from: livingbytheday on December 04, 2012, 01:08:18 PM
bahut khoob, bahut khoob
BAHUT  SHUKRIYA , DEEPAK JI .
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«Reply #44 on: December 13, 2012, 02:48:27 PM »
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Quote from: ParwaaZ on December 05, 2012, 10:20:24 AM
Siddiqui Sahaab Aadaab O As salaam!



Wallaah kia umdaa gazal kahi hai janab waaH dil ko jhaNkjhor jaate
hai is kalaam ke ahsaas O khayaal ... Usual Smile

Sabhi ashaar behad laa jawaab rahe janab... Usual Smile
Behad umdaa gazal rahi.... is khoobsurat aur dilkash gazal par hazaaroN
dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye... Usual Smile


Likhate rahiye... aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...
Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile
parwaaz  saheb , hausla afzai ke liye bahut mashkoor hoon .
Aapka sath milta rahe . duago , HASAN
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