Pardes MeN Kitni Bhi MushkileN Kyun Naa Ho "Khwahish"

by khwaish on August 04, 2013, 08:25:20 PM
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Main Roya Pardes meN Bheega Maa Ka Pyaar
Dukh Ne Dukh Se Baat ki Bin Chitti Bin Taar
Chota Kar Ke Dekhiye Zindagi Ka Vistaar..!!
AankhoN Bhar Aakaash Hai,BaahoN Bhar Sansaar

      ~~~~Nida Fazli~~~~~


Yeh Ghazal Jo Main Likh Raha Hoon, Kisi Khaas Dost Ki Farmayish Par Likhi Gayi Hai Jo "Pardes" Mein Baitha,Rozi-Roti Kamaane Ke Apno Se Door Eid Ki Tayaari Kar Raha Hai..Aur iss Taraf Maa-Baap Kaise Apne Bete Ko Yaad karte Honge...Meri Dua Hai ke Khuda Kisi Ko Apno Se Bichadne Ka Gham Naa De....Apna Waqt Zaroor Dijiyega...


Bete Ko Dhundhne MeN Maa Ki AankheN Thak Jaati HaiN
Eid Ke Din Be-Sabab AankheN Maa Ki Chalak Jaati HaiN

Pardes meN Kitni Bhi MushkileN Kyun Naa Ho Sabr Kar
Suuna Hai Maa Ki DuayeN ,FarishtoN Tak Jaati HaiN

Maa Tujhe Dekh To Nahi Sakta par Mehsus Kar Sakta Hoon
Maa Ka Haath Sar Par Ho To Soi KismateN Jag Jaati HaiN

Mere Abbu Tum Bhi Apna Khayal Rakhna,Main Theek Hoon..!!
ZimmedariyoN Ko Nibhane MeN Vaakai Zindagi Kat Jaati HaiN

Maathe Pe Paseena,Mere Aankhon MeN Ek Nami Si Hai..!!!!!
Bin Mehnat Ke Kya Kabhi TaqdeereN Bhi Chamak Jaati HaiN

"Khwahish" Kisi Paude Ko Paani Diya Karo Umar Bhar..!!!
Waqt Ka Pata Bhi Nahi chalta, Apni Fasle Pak Jaati HaiN


    
             ~~~~Khwahish~~~~~
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«Reply #1 on: August 04, 2013, 08:27:27 PM »
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khwaish ji ............. chummeshwari post ........

 tearyeyed tearyeyed tearyeyed tearyeyed

aankhein num ho aai aaj ye padhkar....

u hv tat word power to touch Any heart
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«Reply #2 on: August 04, 2013, 08:31:48 PM »
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nice and  heart touching thoughts
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«Reply #3 on: August 04, 2013, 08:35:02 PM »
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phir wahi baat kahunga yoindia par aane aur yahan ki shayari padhne ka sabse bada kaaran aap hai khawahish bhai......aapki gazal shayari padh padh kar hee yoindia join kia tha....ek bahut hee khubsurat qalaam maa ka dard bete ki majburi....phir pyar ki dor kitni majbut hai bahut hee gehre ehsas ke sath aapne piroya hai shabdon ko..LAKHON DILII DAAD O MUBARAKBAAD... salut u...


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«Reply #4 on: August 04, 2013, 09:31:08 PM »
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bahut khoob
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«Reply #5 on: August 04, 2013, 09:36:27 PM »
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Quote from: khwahish on August 04, 2013, 08:25:20 PM
Main Roya Pardes meN Bheega Maa Ka Pyaar
Dukh Ne Dukh Se Baat ki Bin Chitti Bin Taar
Chota Kar Ke Dekhiye Zindagi Ka Vistaar..!!
AankhoN Bhar Aakaash Hai,BaahoN Bhar Sansaar

      ~~~~Nida Fazli~~~~~


Yeh Ghazal Jo Main Likh Raha Hoon, Kisi Khaas Dost Ki Farmayish Par Likhi Gayi Hai Jo "Pardes" Mein Baitha,Rozi-Roti Kamaane Ke Apno Se Door Eid Ki Tayaari Kar Raha Hai..Aur iss Taraf Maa-Baap Kaise Apne Bete Ko Yaad karte Honge...Meri Dua Hai ke Khuda Kisi Ko Apno Se Bichadne Ka Gham Naa De....Apna Waqt Zaroor Dijiyega...


Bete Ko Dhundhne MeN Maa Ki AankheN Thak Jaati HaiN
Eid Ke Din Be-Sabab AankheN Maa Ki Chalak Jaati HaiN

Pardes meN Kitni Bhi MushkileN Kyun Naa Ho Sabr Kar
Suuna Hai Maa Ki DuayeN ,FarishtoN Tak Jaati HaiN

Maa Tujhe Dekh To Nahi Sakta par Mehsus Kar Sakta Hoon
Maa Ka Haath Sar Par Ho To Soi KismateN Jag Jaati HaiN

Mere Abbu Tum Bhi Apna Khayal Rakhna,Main Theek Hoon..!!
ZimmedariyoN Ko Nibhane MeN Vaakai Zindagi Kat Jaati HaiN

Maathe Pe Paseena,Mere Aankhon MeN Ek Nami Si Hai..!!!!!
Bin Mehnat Ke Kya Kabhi TaqdeereN Bhi Chamak Jaati HaiN

"Khwahish" Kisi Paude Ko Paani Diya Karo Umar Bhar..!!!
Waqt Ka Pata Bhi Nahi chalta, Apni Fasle Pak Jaati HaiN


    
             ~~~~Khwahish~~~~~

khwaish ji this is another master piece of urs beautiful passions in poetry ............,inspiring.awesome $ mindblowing ,...........
salut to urs pure passions,...........
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«Reply #6 on: August 04, 2013, 11:02:04 PM »
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bahut umda janaab, ghar se door rehne waale khaas taur pe desh se baahar rehne wale log bahut hche se isse connect kr sakeNge... bas aage bhi aap yunhi likhte rahiye... sukoon milta hai aapko padh kar...
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«Reply #7 on: August 04, 2013, 11:52:03 PM »
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bahut khoob , khwahish ji.main hamesha kahta hoon ki aap ka kalaam hamesha kisi mouzoo ke pas manzar main hota hai ...aur sochne par majboor kar deta hai . aaj ka kalaam bhi waqt aur mouqe ki munasibat se hai aur aise har shakhs ki aankhein  nam kar dega jiske apne talash e maash mein  ghar se door hain.
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«Reply #8 on: August 05, 2013, 12:08:29 AM »
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Just awesome khwaishji...apnon se door rehne ka dard mai bakhoobi samajhti hoon. aur aapne is dard ko badi hi khoobi ke saath lafzon mein piroya hai. aapki yeh rachna ne meri aankh nam kar dee hai. aapko is khoob kalam ke liye dehron dheron dheron daad..
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«Reply #9 on: August 05, 2013, 02:39:56 AM »
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Bahut Umda...really heart touching... Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Hats off to you! Hats off to you! Hats off to you! Hats off to you! Hats off to you! Hats off to you! Hats off to you!
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«Reply #10 on: August 05, 2013, 03:03:07 AM »
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Quote from: khwahish on August 04, 2013, 08:25:20 PM
Main Roya Pardes meN Bheega Maa Ka Pyaar
Dukh Ne Dukh Se Baat ki Bin Chitti Bin Taar
Chota Kar Ke Dekhiye Zindagi Ka Vistaar..!!
AankhoN Bhar Aakaash Hai,BaahoN Bhar Sansaar

      ~~~~Nida Fazli~~~~~


Yeh Ghazal Jo Main Likh Raha Hoon, Kisi Khaas Dost Ki Farmayish Par Likhi Gayi Hai Jo "Pardes" Mein Baitha,Rozi-Roti Kamaane Ke Apno Se Door Eid Ki Tayaari Kar Raha Hai..Aur iss Taraf Maa-Baap Kaise Apne Bete Ko Yaad karte Honge...Meri Dua Hai ke Khuda Kisi Ko Apno Se Bichadne Ka Gham Naa De....Apna Waqt Zaroor Dijiyega...


Bete Ko Dhundhne MeN Maa Ki AankheN Thak Jaati HaiN
Eid Ke Din Be-Sabab AankheN Maa Ki Chalak Jaati HaiN

Pardes meN Kitni Bhi MushkileN Kyun Naa Ho Sabr Kar
Suuna Hai Maa Ki DuayeN ,FarishtoN Tak Jaati HaiN

Maa Tujhe Dekh To Nahi Sakta par Mehsus Kar Sakta Hoon
Maa Ka Haath Sar Par Ho To Soi KismateN Jag Jaati HaiN

Mere Abbu Tum Bhi Apna Khayal Rakhna,Main Theek Hoon..!!
ZimmedariyoN Ko Nibhane MeN Vaakai Zindagi Kat Jaati HaiN

Maathe Pe Paseena,Mere Aankhon MeN Ek Nami Si Hai..!!!!!
Bin Mehnat Ke Kya Kabhi TaqdeereN Bhi Chamak Jaati HaiN

"Khwahish" Kisi Paude Ko Paani Diya Karo Umar Bhar..!!!
Waqt Ka Pata Bhi Nahi chalta, Apni Fasle Pak Jaati HaiN


     
             ~~~~Khwahish~~~~~

So beutiful
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«Reply #11 on: August 05, 2013, 04:55:30 AM »
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bahot khoob tarif se baala'tar Applause Clapping Smiley Applause
main isey mahsoos karsakta hoon kyonke main Maa se door Saudi may kaam karta hoon  tearyeyed
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«Reply #12 on: August 05, 2013, 12:34:35 PM »
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Hats offfffffffffffffffffffffffffff 2U. Superb Write up with such a true & deep feelings one feels when staying in any foreign country & I like the way u portrayed it, simply marvelous.
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«Reply #13 on: August 05, 2013, 03:43:33 PM »
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Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on August 04, 2013, 08:27:27 PM
khwaish ji ............. chummeshwari post ........

 tearyeyed tearyeyed tearyeyed tearyeyed

aankhein num ho aai aaj ye padhkar....

u hv tat word power to touch Any heart


icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower Thanks a Million Annu  icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower
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«Reply #14 on: August 05, 2013, 05:04:19 PM »
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sach me khwahish bhai dil ko chhu gayi ye nazm..  sad10

subject bhi liya to EID ka.. kuchh hi dino me EID hai aur pehli baar apne gharwaalo se door hoon.. akele eid manane ka ehsaas mujhse behtar koun jaan payega..
aisa laga jaise meri hi kahani bayaan kar di khwahish bhai aapne.. Thank you so much for this lovely post..


behad umdaa peshkash.. bahut bahut aur bahut khoob..  Usual Smile

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