Phir ata hun....premdeep

by premdeep on August 26, 2013, 02:41:38 PM
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Ye shaam guzar jane do phir ata hun
Bas botal khatam ho jane do phir ata hun

Log to peete hain gam bhulane ke liye
Mujhko gam mein doob jane do phir ata hun

Jiske naam se chodi thi kabhi humne
Aj usi ke naam se pee jane do phir ata hun

jis baat par roothe hain wo mujhse
Wo baat to yaad aane do phir ata hun

Jo hosh na khoye wo jawani kis kaam ki
Jara kadamon ko ladkadane do phir ata hun

Sharaab hi mehbooba hai meri ab to yahan
Toda ishq aur farmane do phir ata hun

Shama abhi roushan hai jo is mehkhane mein
Kuch parwane aur jal jane do phir ata hun

Abhi to mehfil jami hi hai shayaron ki
Toda suroor to ban jane do phir ata hun

Wah wah to bahut sun li kadardano se yahan
Ab jara tali bhi baj jane do phir ata hun
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«Reply #1 on: August 26, 2013, 03:02:56 PM »
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«Reply #6 on: August 26, 2013, 04:38:32 PM »
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kya baat hai.. achha nibhaya hai aapne.. Usual Smile

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«Reply #9 on: August 26, 2013, 09:02:38 PM »
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uuuuffff kyaa kehne Premdeep ji, aapne shabdon kaa aisaa teer chalaayaa hai ki zakhmi ho gaye buri tarhaa, bahut bahut khoobsoorti se aapne ise rachaa hai, bahut khoob janaab...!!!
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hmmmm kya baat hai bahut bahut khoob premdeep ji.. hazaron dili daaaaaaaaad...
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«Reply #11 on: August 27, 2013, 07:04:00 PM »
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thanks to all for appreciation
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