Phoolon se nazuk wo pal...Premdeep

by premdeep on September 16, 2013, 04:51:22 PM
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Aankhon mein aanshu jo late hain
Log kyun apno ko itna rulate hain

Pahle to pyaar se kareeb aate hain
Phir ek mod par kaheen kho jate hain

Phoolon se nazuk wo pal
Jane kab shool ban jate hain

palkon par bithane wale woh
Ab dekh kar nazarein churate hain

Jinse nafrat thi kabhi unhe
Aaj unke ghar nazar aate hain

Itne barson ka apna saath
Ek pal mein chod jate hain

Meri ek shikan par roo dene wale
Mere gam par hansh kar chale jate hain

pyaar mohabaat jazbaat ajkal
Daulat ke bazaar mein bik jate hain

Dil ki baazi lagane wale
Aksar kyun haar jate hain

khoye khoye tanha tanha
bas aise hi jiye jate hain

Hum raah par chalte jate
bas nishaan reh jate hain
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«Reply #1 on: September 16, 2013, 05:23:05 PM »
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good 1 premdeep ji......
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«Reply #2 on: September 16, 2013, 05:28:17 PM »
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bahutb ahut bahut bahut hee khub kalaam dheron daad o mubarakbaad Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #3 on: September 16, 2013, 06:05:19 PM »
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«Reply #4 on: September 16, 2013, 07:12:05 PM »
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very nice, keep it up
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«Reply #5 on: September 16, 2013, 08:09:16 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
Bahut bahut khoob.. bahut hi khoobsurat jazbaat premdeep.. Is khoobsurat peshkash par hazaron dili daad qubool kijiye..

Pahle to pyaar se kareeb aate hain
Phir ek mod par kaheen kho jate hain

pyaar mohabaat jazbaat ajkal
Daulat ke bazaar mein bik jate hain

 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #6 on: September 16, 2013, 10:28:52 PM »
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bahut khoob.. Usual Smile
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«Reply #7 on: September 17, 2013, 02:01:31 AM »
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waah waah bahut khoob Premdeep jee.
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«Reply #8 on: September 17, 2013, 03:16:30 AM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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WaaH WaaH WaaH aur WaaH  icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower
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«Reply #10 on: September 18, 2013, 08:48:07 AM »
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bahut khoob premdeep ji
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«Reply #11 on: September 18, 2013, 07:18:55 PM »
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thanks to all for appreciation
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«Reply #12 on: September 19, 2013, 01:58:00 PM »
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