PINJDAA..(K_A):Ghazals

khamosh_aawaaz

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   AA KAR CHAMAN MAIN HUM MAHAKNEY LAGEY,
   THEY KHAMOSH LUBB AB CHAHAKNEY LAGEY,

   TUJHSEY WAABASTAA TO NAHIN MERAA WAJOOD,
   PHIR KYON LOG TERI KHAIRIYAT POOCHNEY LAGEY,

   AAZADI KAA JASHAN ZARAA HUM BHI MANAA LAIN,
   BINAA JAAM KEY HI HUM BAHAKNEY LAGEY,

   TEREY AANGAN MAIN AAJ BAHUT UJAALA HAIN DOST,
   MEREY GHAR KEY CHIRAAG BHI AB DAMAKNEY LAGEY,

   KAUN KAHTAA HAI HAMAIN AAZADI NAHI PYAARI KHAMOSH,
   ISS KHYAAL HER PINJDEY KO HUM AB KHOLNEY LAGEY...!!


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madhuwesh

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Re: PINJDAA..(K_A)

«Reply #1 on: October 20, 2009, 09:59:41 AM »

Bahut bahut khoob Khamosh ji lovely creation.excellent icon_thumleft


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Roja

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Re: PINJDAA..(K_A)

«Reply #2 on: October 20, 2009, 02:21:38 PM »

Quote from: khamosh_aawaaz on October 20, 2009, 09:01:26 AM

AA KAR CHAMAN MAIN HUM MAHAKNEY LAGEY,
THEY KHAMOSH LUBB AB CHAHAKNEY LAGEY,

TUJHSEY WAABASTAA TO NAHIN MERAA WAJOOD,
PHIR KYON LOG TERI KHAIRIYAT POOCHNEY LAGEY,

AAZADI KAA JASHAN ZARAA HUM BHI MANAA LAIN,
BINAA JAAM KEY HI HUM BAHAKNEY LAGEY,

TEREY AANGAN MAIN AAJ BAHUT UJAALA HAIN DOST,
MEREY GHAR KEY CHIRAAG BHI AB DAMAKNEY LAGEY,

KAUN KAHTAA HAI HAMAIN AAZADI NAHI PYAARI KHAMOSH,
ISS KHYAAL HER PINJDEY KO HUM AB KHOLNEY LAGEY...!!

Bahut khoob KA


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khamosh_aawaaz

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Re: PINJDAA..(K_A)

«Reply #3 on: October 26, 2009, 08:43:52 AM »

Quote from: Roja on October 20, 2009, 02:21:38 PM

Bahut khoob KA

THANX ROJA JI


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khamosh_aawaaz

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Re: PINJDAA..(K_A)

«Reply #4 on: October 26, 2009, 08:44:15 AM »

Quote from: madhuwesh on October 20, 2009, 09:59:41 AM

Bahut bahut khoob Khamosh ji lovely creation.excellent icon_thumleft

THANX MADHU JI


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Rishi Agarwal

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Re: PINJDAA..(K_A)

«Reply #5 on: October 26, 2009, 08:56:06 AM »

Bahut bahut khoob Khamosh ji lovely creation Applause


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waquif ansari

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Re: PINJDAA..(K_A)

«Reply #6 on: October 28, 2009, 09:15:27 AM »

Dear Khamosh! Whether this is ghazal or something else.


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khamosh_aawaaz

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Re: PINJDAA..(K_A)

«Reply #7 on: October 29, 2009, 05:11:23 AM »

Quote from: waquif ansari on October 28, 2009, 09:15:27 AM

Dear Khamosh! Whether this is ghazal or something else.


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khamosh_aawaaz

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Re: PINJDAA..(K_A)

«Reply #8 on: October 29, 2009, 05:11:47 AM »

Quote from: madhuwesh on October 20, 2009, 09:59:41 AM

Bahut bahut khoob Khamosh ji lovely creation.excellent icon_thumleft

THANX MADHU JI


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khamosh_aawaaz

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Re: PINJDAA..(K_A)

«Reply #9 on: October 29, 2009, 05:12:15 AM »

Quote from: Roja on October 20, 2009, 02:21:38 PM

Bahut khoob KA

THANKS ROJA JI


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khamosh_aawaaz

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Re: PINJDAA..(K_A)

«Reply #10 on: October 29, 2009, 05:13:21 AM »

Quote from: Rishi Agarwal on October 26, 2009, 08:56:06 AM

Bahut bahut khoob Khamosh ji lovely creation Applause

THANKS R.A


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deepika_divya

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Re: PINJDAA..(K_A)

«Reply #11 on: October 29, 2009, 05:15:16 AM »

Bahoot Bahoot khoob Khamosh ji Usual Smile


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waquif ansari

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Re: PINJDAA..(K_A)

«Reply #12 on: October 29, 2009, 11:13:49 AM »

Dear Khamosh aawaaz! Your comments are not visible. Apne taasuraat roman meiN post kareN.


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khamosh_aawaaz

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Re: PINJDAA..(K_A)

«Reply #13 on: October 31, 2009, 12:56:37 PM »

Quote from: waquif ansari on October 29, 2009, 11:13:49 AM

Dear Khamosh aawaaz! Your comments are not visible. Apne taasuraat roman meiN post kareN.

PLZ GUIDE ME WHAT IS GHAZAL WITH EXAMPLE ...THANKS FOR YOUR COMMENT..!!!!!!!!!!


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waquif ansari

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Re: PINJDAA..(K_A)

«Reply #14 on: November 03, 2009, 09:32:18 AM »

Dear Khaamosh Aawaaz! Bura na maane aap to kuchh arz karooN. Ghazal ke kuchh usul hote haiN. Sirf qaafiya-radeef mila dena hi ghazal nahiN hai. Ghazal meiN zabaan-o-bayaan ke saath saath bahr (meter) ka hona laazmi hai warna ye ghazal nahin kahi jaayegi, ise aap kavita kah lijiye. Kisi arooz janne waale shaayar ko apni ghazal dikha dijiye uske baad hi post kijiye. Saari khaami door ho jaayegi. Ghazal ko ik meyaar ata kijiye. Bhai maiN aapki bhale ke liye likh raha hooN, koi bad intension nahin hai. Agar aap ko koi baat buri lagi hai to please maaf karenge. Baaqui maiN aapki shaayari ko urooj par dekhna chaahta hooN.


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