PINJDAA..(K_A)

by khamosh_aawaaz on October 20, 2009, 09:01:26 AM
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«Reply #15 on: November 05, 2009, 10:21:05 AM »
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Quote from: waquif ansari on November 03, 2009, 09:32:18 AM
Dear Khaamosh Aawaaz! Bura na maane aap to kuchh arz karooN. Ghazal ke kuchh usul hote haiN. Sirf qaafiya-radeef mila dena hi ghazal nahiN hai. Ghazal meiN zabaan-o-bayaan ke saath saath bahr (meter) ka hona laazmi hai warna ye ghazal nahin kahi jaayegi, ise aap kavita kah lijiye. Kisi arooz janne waale shaayar ko apni ghazal dikha dijiye uske baad hi post kijiye. Saari khaami door ho jaayegi. Ghazal ko ik meyaar ata kijiye. Bhai maiN aapki bhale ke liye likh raha hooN, koi bad intension nahin hai. Agar aap ko koi baat buri lagi hai to please maaf karenge. Baaqui maiN aapki shaayari ko urooj par dekhna chaahta hooN.


shukriya janab mujhey bhi aapsey yeh baat samajh aai ......adil bechain
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«Reply #16 on: November 06, 2009, 10:14:29 AM »
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My Dear Adil Bechain Sahib! AOA!
Aapka shukriya janaab k bande ko is qaabil samjha aapne. Ghazal ko uske tamaamtar lawaazimaat k saath baratna hi asal shayari hai warna ye waqt zaaya karna hi hai. Har sinf k kuchh oosool-o-zawaabit hote haiN, use jaanna behad zaroori hai. Ghazal shaayari ki woh mashhoor-o-maaroof fun hai jiski zulfoN maiN aal wa adna sab giraftar haiN. Is sinf ko theek tarah baratne meiN kabhi kabhi kai saal lag jaate haiN. Is liye ye mushkil fun bhi hai. Tamaam sher aur ghazal kahne waaloN se ye tawaqqo ki jaati hai k woh saare qaanoon qaayede k hisaab se ghazal kaheNge. Ghazal ko aap jaise log hi ik meyaar ata kar sakte haiN jis se ki ye fun qayaamat tak ke liye taabindah rahe. Aap ne yaad kiya is k liye aapka azhad mashkoor-o-mamnoon hooN. Kisi ko meri baat kuchh buri lagi ho to is ke liye maiN maa-zarat khwaah hooN. Maaf kareNge. Baaqui khush raheN, aabaad raheN.
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«Reply #17 on: November 17, 2009, 01:32:07 PM »
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Quote from: waquif ansari on November 06, 2009, 10:14:29 AM
My Dear Adil Bechain Sahib! AOA!
Aapka shukriya janaab k bande ko is qaabil samjha aapne. Ghazal ko uske tamaamtar lawaazimaat k saath baratna hi asal shayari hai warna ye waqt zaaya karna hi hai. Har sinf k kuchh oosool-o-zawaabit hote haiN, use jaanna behad zaroori hai. Ghazal shaayari ki woh mashhoor-o-maaroof fun hai jiski zulfoN maiN aal wa adna sab giraftar haiN. Is sinf ko theek tarah baratne meiN kabhi kabhi kai saal lag jaate haiN. Is liye ye mushkil fun bhi hai. Tamaam sher aur ghazal kahne waaloN se ye tawaqqo ki jaati hai k woh saare qaanoon qaayede k hisaab se ghazal kaheNge. Ghazal ko aap jaise log hi ik meyaar ata kar sakte haiN jis se ki ye fun qayaamat tak ke liye taabindah rahe. Aap ne yaad kiya is k liye aapka azhad mashkoor-o-mamnoon hooN. Kisi ko meri baat kuchh buri lagi ho to is ke liye maiN maa-zarat khwaah hooN. Maaf kareNge. Baaqui khush raheN, aabaad raheN.


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