"pooch lai dil se"

by aaina on June 01, 2009, 06:58:34 AM
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mujh se na khush mera khuda hoga
tu agr mujh se you.n khafa hoga

tujh mai shamil hai ab to jaan meri
kaise manzoor tujh se faasla hoga

mein nahi kehta tu pooch lai dil se
ab wahan mera hi to charcha hoga

tumko pehlu mai daik kar ke yaqeenan
chaand apni chandni se jal gaya hoga

mujh mai aake mera naam mukamal kardo
tum bin dikho ke aslam adhoora hoga
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«Reply #1 on: June 01, 2009, 07:03:06 AM »
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Bahut Bahut Khoob Aaina Ji, Clapping Smiley  Clapping Smiley

Kya khoobsurat khyal hai..

Shally.
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«Reply #2 on: June 01, 2009, 07:14:47 AM »
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Wah Wah Aaina ji ,very nice,bahut acha likha apne, Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #3 on: June 01, 2009, 07:47:21 AM »
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bahut achche aslam bhai.......kya khoob likha hai
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«Reply #4 on: June 01, 2009, 10:22:33 AM »
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Quote from: aaina on June 01, 2009, 06:58:34 AM
mujh se na khush mera khuda hoga
tu agr mujh se you.n khafa hoga

tujh mai shamil hai ab to jaan meri
kaise manzoor tujh se faasla hoga

mein nahi kehta tu pooch lai dil se
ab wahan mera hi to charcha hoga

tumko pehlu mai daik kar ke yaqeenan
chaand apni chandni se jal gaya hoga

mujh mai aake mera naam mukamal kardo
tum bin dikho ke aslam adhoora hoga

Excellent...Bohot bohot khoob Aslam Ji  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #5 on: June 02, 2009, 08:29:59 AM »
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Quote from: k.shael on June 01, 2009, 07:03:06 AM
Bahut Bahut Khoob Aaina Ji, Clapping Smiley  Clapping Smiley

Kya khoobsurat khyal hai..

Shally.

thnxxxxx shally ji......
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«Reply #6 on: June 02, 2009, 08:37:31 AM »
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Quote from: madhuwesh on June 01, 2009, 07:14:47 AM
Wah Wah Aaina ji ,very nice,bahut acha likha apne, Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

thnxxxxx so much maduwesh ji...
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«Reply #7 on: June 02, 2009, 08:38:27 AM »
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Quote from: salil2002 on June 01, 2009, 07:47:21 AM
bahut achche aslam bhai.......kya khoob likha hai

shukriya dost...
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«Reply #8 on: June 02, 2009, 08:39:58 AM »
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Quote from: Celmira on June 01, 2009, 10:22:33 AM
Excellent...Bohot bohot khoob Aslam Ji  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

bhut shukriya celmira ji....
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«Reply #9 on: June 02, 2009, 08:45:56 AM »
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Quote from: @kaash on June 01, 2009, 01:21:18 PM


waah bahot khoob likha hai aapne  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

bahot ache sher likhe hain aapne Aslam ji

thnxxxx dear bhut shkuriya ek aapko ghazal pasnd aayi
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