Poochh mat mujhsey magar, 'Dard kahaan hotaa hai?'

by abdbundeli on July 17, 2009, 01:50:50 PM
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Deykhtaa hai jo, wahee zaar-zaar rotaa hai!
Poochh mat mujhsey magar, 'Dard kahaan hotaa hai?'

Mein ney zahreeley niwaaloun ko bhi aameen kahaa!
Too, magar, nargisee aankhoun ko kyoun bhigotaa hai?

Aadtan zakhm sahey hain mazeed, yaaroun sey:
Too, mahaz gair hai, kyoun khoon-e-jigar khotaa hai?

Ghaaw ko chain na deyngey, ye marhamee faahey!
Baagbaan meyraa, mahaz khaar hee pirotaa hai!!

Barq pee-pee key jiyaa huun mein, naheeboun key liye:
Yuun to, har aasteen mein naheeb hotaa hai!

Aur dhho loongaa zindagee ko, khaak honey tak:
Noujawaan bhi to zayeefee key beej botaa hai!

Wo mujhey yaad kareyngey: ye zarooree to naheen!
Koun aa zakhm, 'abd', aansuoun sey dhotaa hai?

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«Reply #1 on: July 17, 2009, 03:49:13 PM »
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Bohot achchi ghazal hai Babu Ji  Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #2 on: July 17, 2009, 03:58:28 PM »
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Quote from: Celmira on July 17, 2009, 03:49:13 PM
Bohot achchi ghazal hai Babu Ji  Applause Applause Applause
Shukriyah bitia Celmira!
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«Reply #3 on: July 17, 2009, 05:10:57 PM »
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Wah Bundeli Saheb
Hum to bas aapke pakke fan ho chuke hain
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«Reply #4 on: July 17, 2009, 05:34:14 PM »
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Quote from: SARVESH RASTOGI on July 17, 2009, 05:10:57 PM
Wah Bundeli Saheb
Hum to bas aapke pakke fan ho chuke hain

Aapki nazar-e-inaayat hai Rastogi ji! Shukriyah!
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«Reply #5 on: July 17, 2009, 07:58:06 PM »
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Bahut Khoob Abd Ji
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«Reply #6 on: July 18, 2009, 02:21:06 AM »
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Arrey Abd Ji... Ham bhi aapke pakke fan ho gaye hain! Usual Smile

Bahut Bahut khoob Ji! Applause
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«Reply #7 on: July 18, 2009, 04:22:21 AM »
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Quote from: Rajesh Harish on July 17, 2009, 07:58:06 PM
Bahut Khoob Abd Ji
Shukriyah Rajesh ji!
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«Reply #8 on: July 18, 2009, 04:33:33 AM »
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Quote from: Deepati on July 18, 2009, 02:21:06 AM
Arrey Abd Ji... Ham bhi aapke pakke fan ho gaye hain! Usual Smile

Bahut Bahut khoob Ji! Applause
Shukriyah Deepati ji! Mein 'bhagyashaalee' hoon!!
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«Reply #9 on: July 18, 2009, 04:48:54 AM »
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Awesome ! Superb bahoot Bahoot Khoob Abd ji.. bahoot Khoob!
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«Reply #10 on: July 18, 2009, 06:41:29 AM »
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Quote from: Sophi on July 18, 2009, 04:48:54 AM
Awesome ! Superb bahoot Bahoot Khoob Abd ji.. bahoot Khoob!
Thanks a lot Sophi ji!
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«Reply #11 on: July 18, 2009, 07:23:10 AM »
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Wah Abd ji,bahut khoob,kamaal ka likha aapne very nice and wonderful creation,excellent. love4 Applause Applause Applause icon_thumleft
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«Reply #12 on: July 18, 2009, 07:39:35 AM »
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bahut acha ghazal abd ji, aur kafee touching feelings hein, really aapkaa sochne kaa nazariya bahut naayaab hai.... Applause Applause
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«Reply #13 on: July 18, 2009, 08:12:13 AM »
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Quote from: madhuwesh on July 18, 2009, 07:23:10 AM
Wah Abd ji,bahut khoob,kamaal ka likha aapne very nice and wonderful creation,excellent. love4 Applause Applause Applause icon_thumleft
Thanks a lot Madhu!
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«Reply #14 on: July 18, 2009, 08:16:23 AM »
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Quote from: punam on July 18, 2009, 07:39:35 AM
bahut acha ghazal abd ji, aur kafee touching feelings hein, really aapkaa sochne kaa nazariya bahut naayaab hai.... Applause Applause
Bahut-bahut shukriyah Punam ji! Shukra hai aap ko hamaaree yaad to aayee!!
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